My Machine Girl and I Are Both Bug-Level

It's okay, but it just gives people the feeling that there are too many dialogues, no scenes, and even most of the settings are crammed into the dialogues. Moreover, there is no appearance description of the characters, or very little. You can't tell that the heroine's first owner is a woman unless you look carefully. Instead, a bunch of names are used to give people no impression. The settings don't have to be so complicated. If you use numerical values, you don't need to deduct such detailed divisions.

The third young master of the Tang family was about to cry when he saw it, and Tiancan Tudou was amazed when he saw it! This is the reincarnation of the Four Great Classics, the leader of the literary world in the 21st century! "Holy Ruins" lost some of its literary talent! "Dou Po" lost some connotation! "Zhu Xian" lost some emotion in front of it! "Shading the Sky" lost a third of imagination in front of it! "Buddha" lost half of its layout in front of it! This is a classic that has not been seen on the Internet for a century! The greatest literary masterpiece of the 21st century! From Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naian, Wu Chengen, Cao Xueqin, to Confucius and Mo Laozhuang, the poets and poets, Sansu Jiaxuan; from Emperor Qin and Han Wu, Emperor Zong of Tang and Song Dynasty, Genghis Khan, to Sakyamuni, Plato, Copernicus, Aristotle, who has read it and not been amazed?! This book is truly the work of a man of heaven! It has brilliant literary talent and exquisite diction. It inherits the style of the Wei and Jin Dynasties and promotes the charm of the Tang and Song Dynasties. It is deeply penetrating! It is truly a blessing to read this book in my lifetime! However, after reading this book, a feeling of sadness suddenly emerged: If I never have the chance to see such a masterpiece again in the future, what would be the point of my life? What's the point of my life?! Fortunately! I made a prompt decision and put it on my bookshelf! Only then can my restless heart find peace for a moment. However! If such a masterpiece is covered with dust and the world cannot see it, wouldn't it be a waste of natural resources and a waste of the author's efforts?! After a battle between heaven and man, I finally made up my mind: sacrifice the small self to fulfill the greater self! This book review is dedicated to the world for everyone to appreciate! This book must be praised again and again, reaching the sky, so that the world will know it! Walking between heaven and earth, the scorching sun and bright moon are the proof: Is this book refreshing enough? Not enough! Traveling across the rivers and lakes, rivers and lakes are proof: Is this book enjoyable? Not enough! Standing on the top of the fairy mountain, Qionglou Yuyu echoed: Is the update fast enough? Not enough! Not enough! Far from enough! Not enough chapters! Not enough speed! Not enough content! Not enough at all! [Come on]

So why did the author update? Because they want to continue the breath of the story But it's impossible So, what do you think? Because of them, they must be updated When the perfect attendance deadline hangs high like the sword of Damocles Only authors who break the news can escape the fate of oblivion That's right In order to prevent the story from sinking into the sea of oblivion I dismantled ribs to make pen holders Forge moonlight into punctuation Compose heartbeats into chapter rhythms But if you want to witness a new chapter you... You You must endure me till the end of time These are after crossing the history of Internet literature The logic of the author Come on, everything I carry Nothing to do with choice Nothing to do with life or death At this moment, everyone's urging converges into the only ambition Brahma and beasts Add to this body Karma Demon enters the abyss Break the key step forward This is Breaking UpdateInscription

Books, why are they updated? Is it simply because they want to be written about? But that can't be the answer. Because they must be written. When the meteorite of discontinuation falls from the book, only the serial author can escape from the predetermined demise. In order to prevent the work from being discontinued, the author flies high into the sky and takes away your book waste, and because of this, he will write and fall into discontinuity. And if you want your works to be constantly updated, you, you, must be pushed to a higher place than him. This is the logic behind discontinuing updates after crossing over from serialization to serialization. This is the author's pen is the end of this book Nothing to do with choice Nothing to do with life or death At this moment, the ideals of all people gather Step forward! This is the inscription of [urge to update]

I'll give you a review (subjective, don't like it if you don't like it [like]) First, the writing style is a bit rough. You can learn from the book "Grayscale Fighter Girl" for this. Second, there are too many dialogues and they are too long. My suggestion is to break what one person said into several paragraphs and write them together with some actions. Third, the connection between the various fragments is not smooth. I can't recommend this. You still have to understand it yourself. Fourth, you can't update faster. The requirements are not high, just 10 chapters a day. No one in the production team can rest like you [laughter] 🖐🏻😭🤚🏻 Nothing else. The above suggestions are purely personal. If you don't like them, don't criticize them. The writing is still very good. But currently I feel that the writing is not as good as Goose and Grayscale Layer Keep up the good work! Babadane 😡😡😡 Attack point D!

It feels different from Penguin's original novel. This one tends to be confrontational, but the quality is good. I hope the author can finish it and not leave it unfinished.

The writing is very good, the skills are very unique, and the emotions develop quickly. Except for some sentences that seem not smooth, there are no poisonous points, and it is very interesting [laughs] Finally, I hope the author will not die [full]

Hope to survive

It turned out to be a mecha text, I thought I just pulled out the battery [laughing]

The writing is good, which is okay for me, who started reading novels in the third grade of elementary school and has now graduated from high school. The narrative is a bit straightforward, and the character arcs are not very fleshed out, but the plot tone has a certain connotation. The story is a good one, but the author's writing skills are slightly lacking. Come on

We must support top-notch shipgirls like those written by Xinghai Kanniang.

It's well written and looks interesting.

Not bad, but I personally don't like group portraits, but the writing is still very good, you can take a look

I really like it. I hope the author will update more

Not bad, you can watch it

A good book to read

Does this count as "raising books"? Don't die.

What I read above is okay, but why is there no period? To be honest, the writing is not very good, the plot is relatively smooth, and it is very obvious that the proportion of dialogue is too high, and scenes are rarely written.

The author is kind enough to listen to readers' opinions and immediately enter the weird and different dimension era.

I was a bit confused because I wasn't familiar with the author's writing style, but after reading it for a long time, it's still pretty good.

I feel that there is no physical description, and the settings are all induced by dialogue. I would like to give you five stars to encourage you. I hope it will get better and better.

It's beautiful 😋 I hope it won't be interrupted next time after reading it this time (sad)

Pretty good, quite interesting, a little lacking

I think it is very interesting and good-looking. The rhythm of the plot is quite comfortable. I can feel that there should be an obvious outline. It is delicious and you can eat it as much as you like (づ ●─● )づ

It's a very interesting novel. There's nothing too bad about it so far. It's just that the popular science content is a bit lengthy. Maybe that's why I don't have the patience to read it carefully.

I feel the same as the four-star long review, but this is a rare good book on Tomato. Please support it to avoid failure.