Train Survival: Lolo Lolo, Lily Lily

There's nothing sinister about it, I just haven't eaten it yet [angry] It's a bit too slow. There are more than a hundred women in the car [smiles] But it's okay. At least the emotional line is well written. There is also the aspect of loyalty [hit hard] It is not good to use loyalty to represent the love of the heroine. Either change it to favorability or add a favorability setting (the subordinates are loyalty and the heroine is favorability). Currently, the protagonist has no subordinates, and some are also in the car [eating melon] Just these two questions, this book is pretty good [exploration] and very interesting [eating melon] It's boring, isn't it? Why write it down if you don't accept it? Give it away [laughs awkwardly] Slipping away

"I estimate that it will take less than four or five days to complete the practice." Xu Tianheng said with a bitter smile. "Don't be afraid of difficulties. It's divided into 60 and 40%. Most of what you refine will be yours." Jiang Ye joked. "By the way, I was just about to say this. Let's forget about the 60% share. The 60% share for me is still too much, and I can't use so many elixirs. Let's change it to a 40% to 60% share." For Xu Tianheng, he felt that he had taken advantage of the sixty-four split at the beginning, so he happily agreed. But now that he is familiar with all parties and everyone is friends, he is no longer willing to take advantage of this. However, for Jiang Ye and others, the corpses of alien beasts have no other use than being used as food. The surplus can be exchanged for elixirs, which is a waste of money, so they are happy to get only 40% of it. Right? The protagonist is 60%, and he is 40%. Others are split 50-50. The author pretended to be dead!

Give it 5 stars. I was very excited when I saw all the lolita in the car coming in. It started off smoothly. When I saw that the protagonist had the authority to kick out the train crew, I thought there would be a plot like someone going against the protagonist, but it turned out there wasn't. It was handled very well. I really didn't want to watch that kind of cliche plot. The subsequent plot is mainly about fighting monsters and upgrading. The writing is actually pretty good, but unfortunately it is a bit bland and has no emotional points. The harem is indeed full of lolita, and the emotional descriptions are pretty good, but the post descriptions are a bit sparse, and the key plot points are all mentioned in one stroke. I hope to write more interactions with the cute little lolita, otherwise it will be a bit boring to just fight. And for the all-female train, I saw that other reviewers said that they would not accept many. What the hell, you have written a whole train of 119 girls, and then it is completely background. It is difficult to stretch. I believe that many people came in to watch the train after seeing the train full of lolita people. After a closer look, they found that it was completely a background board. How many people would want to continue watching? If you can't decide to write about too many people, you can reduce the number of people. For example, there are only about 50 people in a train. This way, it is easier to write about interactions with the lolita trains from time to time. To sum up, if you want to see a loli harem, you can really continue reading. At present, I have seen that the total number of possible and confirmed heroines in the 80 chapters is about 8. There will be many in the future, and indeed they are all loli with different styles. However, the descriptions in the posts are a bit sparse, which is really a pity.

I must praise the author's control over details. The logic of survival in the apocalypse is very realistic, not a brainless novel. The material distribution and crisis response are all written in a reasonable way. The protagonist's growth line and the heroine's bond line go hand in hand. There is no sense of separation at all. The more you read, the more interesting it becomes. It's not a loss if you invest in it! Copy paste To be honest, this book is quite good, but some details were missed by the author. I'm talking about the kind of details that everyone wants to see, not the kind of details that everyone thinks. I also hope that the author can update at a speed of over 10,000 words a day. Looking forward to it

It looks pretty good so far, but I want to ask the author a few questions. The first is whether the heroine will take it all, the second is whether the protagonist is wearing it, and the third is how long it will take to eat. My maximum tolerance is probably around 100 chapters, but there is really nothing I can do if there are too many chapters [face covering] @ of orange cat

A very unique novel, definitely not because I am a lolicon, yes, definitely not

It's okay, it looks very comfortable, and I don't feel bored at all.

Not bad [full] [full], the update is too slow [angry] [angry] [angry] I have been retired for a long time and only have more than 20 chapters [crying] I'm convinced. What are you writing next? I'm either fighting or on the way to a fight. Not only is the plot I like gone, but I'm also seriously depressed [angry][angry][angry]

Great author, this writing is so cool

There is no poisonous point, but there is no memory point. It is very bland and will be forgotten after reading it. It is a very bland train survival. You can basically think of the subsequent development by looking at the front. If there is really no interesting book and you want to kill time, you can take a look.

In my opinion, the writing is very good, the emotions are very delicate, and there are not many poisonous points. You can read "୧(๑•̀ɜ•́๑)૭✧It's great" during your leisure time.

Unexpectedly, it's quite beautiful. I just like this kind of personal combat power, it's a cool article.

It's very pretty. I like loli very much. No, we don't talk about loli. We talk about beauties.

It's pretty cool, I hope it won't be discontinued or unfinished

This book is very beautiful, the author's writing style is also very good, and the author's update speed is also very fast. The storyline and character setting of the article are also very consistent. I hope the author can continue to keep it up.

It's pretty good👌🏻It doesn't have any poison, and it's a fun battle.

Very good. My evaluation is that there is nothing poisonous about it. The protagonist gives a very high value, the background is very hard, there are many loli, and there are many royal ladies.

Madam, madam, so pretty

Luoliluolissssssssssssssssssssss

Very good, Chapter 50 is full of meat

It's okay. Although I'm not a lolita fan, it looks okay.

A good book to pass the time.

. There is nothing poisonous, neither brainless nor holy mother. All members have online IQs. There is no plot where you forcefully jump out and confront the protagonist and pretend to slap him in the face. Anyway, I think it is very interesting.

The author's writing is very beautiful, and the setting is also more rigorous.

Loli, loli, I want a lot of loli. Oh, sir, that should be a lot of electricity

A very nice book

So far it looks pretty good

A beautiful survival world! Come on💪💪💪

Not bad, not bad, no hesitation, no force

It's already better than many cool articles without feeling aggrieved. The plot isn't bad either. The enemy's combat power has expanded a bit too quickly. At present, overall it is considered excellent in Tomato.