Transformation: After Redeeming the Original Heroine, She Also Turned Dark

Advantages: The plot and characters are very novel and have their own characteristics. The world view is similar to and different from the bad street routines of most similar novels nowadays (an important point to praise). The interaction between the two heroines is very sweet. Disadvantages: There may be some emotional or rhythm problems in some places (the problems are ignored) However, this book is very suitable for me. I spent several hours following the big army. I can only say that it is not enough to read. There are really few novels that suit my appetite. I am really happy to find one [Love]

Mi Meow leaves a review(.◜ω◝.)♡ This book is very exciting. To be honest, the cover and beginning are a bit discouraging. Perhaps there are too few readers due to contract factors and platform restrictions. Reading the latest chapter here proves that the author has a high accumulation of knowledge, so the overall logic is smooth, and the writing style is basically accurate in describing psychology. Only the positioning of the protagonist makes me a little confused. The introduction is somewhat inconsistent with the development of the story. It seems to be a little bit energetic like the Queen of Ten Thousand Females. And is the heroine designated by the author Xiaoxia or Haiyan? Or is it that the author is trying to hold something back? . ! This book has great potential, support the author meow(♡>𖥦<)/♥ ⚠️The following text may be offensive⚠️ Let's first look at the latest chapters (Chapter 57). Personally, I think the character Xiaoxia is too "childish". She has no positive influence on Ju Fangli almost from the beginning to the end. The only benefits of a few emotional points are the system's own. If there are other characters with higher profit ratios, then Ju Zi won't choose her. It's a bit too hard to create. Even if you are redeemed, you shouldn't pull down the redeemer. There is really a big problem with this person's thinking. There is also the role of Shura. Logically speaking, he should have an income from emotional points for so many psychological activities, but he doesn't give it at all. The small role of Lao Yan in the early stage will at least have income. It can be seen that the mid-term will be very exciting. I hope my child Xia will grow up. [Off-topic: Come on, author, meow! Continue the story meow!

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At the beginning, I read this book as a normal yandere lily book. As I read it, I realized that the title was very novel. There is basically no such title in the lily circle. At first, I thought that my wisdom in Shanghe Gao was about to come into play (because of the plot). It can be seen that the author has written with intention and the writing style is good. The more I read, the more I couldn't stop and it was comfortable to read. This is the first book that I have marked as looking forward to updating. Finally, I would like to ask about the love line. Is it a single arrow for all members? (Except Shangguan Hutao) Is the ending HE (happy ending)? The 1v1 we are talking about is Xia Wanying (attack) v (receiver) Ju Fangli (analyzed by) I'm analyzing the combination of the original heroine's yandere types (Xia Wanying), she should be a (aggressive yandere and violent yandere are a bit hard to tell, just read the introduction). In the future, she should be a severely dependent yandere and an attachment yandere, a possessive yandere and a restrictive yandere, a stalking yandere, and an admiring yandere. The focus is on the aggressive and possessive types and (the exclusive type is quite rare, but this book shows the exclusive type) (trying to exclude the existence of others and letting the loved ones only focus on themselves. Strong desire to monopolize the other person, jealous of the intervention of others) The original heroine Xia Wanying is a sickly beauty v the idiot and gentle beauty Ju Fangli is the heroine I feel that Xia Wanying is a super A sister, my elder sister, and the author of Ju Fangli is a girl, but I still remember what she (Ju) said when I traveled back in time and couldn't see my toes when I lowered my head...~~I have already defaulted to being a double imperial sister [shy] Oh, I can't even see my toes when I lower my head (Tsundere)

A very good novel, with delicate emotional lines and strong writing skills, and a well-controlled rhythm. But didn't I come here to read sweet stories? How could it be like this😭😭The last thing I want to say is Haiyan, good night😭

Well, some readers may feel a little confused when they read the front part. The protagonist and Xia Wanying met relatively late. First of all, the heroine is Xia Wanying. Then, as for Shangguan Hutao, I feel that she is just sick but not delicate, so there is no need to worry about Xia Wanying liking Shangguan Hutao, who is a bit controversial. I looked at the relationship between the protagonist and Xia Wanying later and it must be a very sincere 1V1 ("redemption part"). The world view of this book is relatively good. The description of the surrounding environment may be slightly lacking, but the impression is still very good. It feels to me that it is somewhat different from other yandere novels so far. It suits my taste very well. I think it is well written. I highly recommend everyone to read it.

I almost never post book reviews, I usually just read books to pass the time. I have read a lot of "Baibai", but there are very few that can make me shed tears because of the affectionate image of a character like this one. I thought a lot about what I wanted to say but didn't know what to say. Lin's emotional line moved me so much [I almost cried]. Shockingly delicious, needless to say.

This book has a lot of feeling. I have read many books of the same type that do not have this feeling (specifically, the routines are similar). This feeling is really mouth-watering! I can feel that the author wrote it carefully, so I give five stars here and hope that the author can keep writing. (Maybe it's my personal problem, but I always feel that the last few chapters are a bit awkward (just pretend I didn't say anything). Finally, I wish the author a happy day and don't be affected by those random book reviews (it would be better if there are more releases n(*≧▽≦*)n

The author's writing is very good and the descriptions are very detailed, but I may not be suitable for reading this type of book. When I read the chapters about the dream, I just felt very angry but powerless. I wanted to help Xiaoli end the pain, but I knew that this was just a book, so I should not be exposed to this kind of book anymore. There is another book on the bookshelf. , I can still read it at the moment, so the author, please give me a lot of support and look after you. I will come again when you write other types of articles. I originally wanted to give five stars, so consider it a little selfish on my part (by the way, why do some people like to read this kind of thing, and use capital punishment to make others fall in love with themselves? I really don't understand)

To be honest, it's rare that I haven't seen a transformation article that suits my taste so well. The writing is delicate and the plot is excellent. It is not just a simple romance, but a fantasy combat system is added as an embellishment to prevent the whole book from being monotonous and boring. What surprises me the most is that I didn't choose the flat loli that is commonly seen in tomato transformation tattoos. This is really rare. It is worth mentioning that although the worldview created by the author is not grand and sophisticated, I think it is remarkable. The combat power system incorporates elements such as rules and weird stories. Although it is not an excellent book, it is still excellent as a romance book. The emotional description is also very good. The protagonist has a very good relationship with Xia Wanying, Lin Haiyan, Li Nai, etc. At present, he can be regarded as the group favorite? Overall, it is a masterpiece, but few people have read it and the ratings are not high. I guess there may be a lot of people reading it? After all, the number of words is still very small at the moment. I think it will be much better if I write a million words. I hope the author will stick to it, keep writing better [please update] and pay attention to your health at the same time

This is an unprecedented book in the world. As an old bookworm, it is hard to imagine that there is such a wonderful masterpiece on Tomato. Not only does it have a grand and complete world view, but each character is also flesh and blood. It almost completely breaks out of the black and white opposition frame. The love between Xiaoli and Xia redeems each other. It is fully worthy of recommendation. I hope more children can read this book and take it as a record

Please forgive me for my brain twitch. I forgot the name of this book when I clicked on the story. I thought the protagonist and Haiyan would be a couple at first, but I felt something was wrong as I watched it, because I found that Haiyan's role was less. Then the more I watched, the more panicked I became, so I looked at some of the content in the comment area, and then I realized that the protagonist's Cp was not the same. It was Haiyan, which made me relieved, but at the same time a little unwilling, because I had already preconceived ideas about the protagonist and Haiyan's CP, but the fact is that the protagonist's CP is Xia, and now I feel more and more awkward as I read it, so please forgive me for not being able to read the book completely, because I don't want to break my defense again by identifying the wrong CP, because I was too careless last time, 🍅 So far, I have read only one book that broke my defense. That was the second time I broke my defense because I hit the wrong CP. As for the first time, it was through watching anime and I won't mention it anymore. If someone asks, I will explain it again. Goodbye, a four-star rating is my highest level of acceptance (Part 1) I think I gave a 2-star review to the book that made me see through my defenses the first time, and it was completely emotional. Now I haven't read this book too deeply, and I haven't reached the same level of expectations as last time, so I will give it a good review) because I didn't see what I wanted. I only evaluate based on my own feelings, not the quality of the writing, so please be aware.

In the early stage, there were too many scenes between Leng and her mother, and it was too slow to get to the main point. But things got much better after Chapter 34. Let's get to the topic. The first volume was well written at the end. In the second volume, Shangguan Hutao is too silly, but the rest is okay

Haiyan, my Haiyan, no~~ [crying] [crying] [crying] Swallow What should I do without you? [Crying] [crying] Deduct one to resurrect Haiyan 1111111, and give it five stars after being resurrected [crying] [crying] I want a happy ending.

Asshole, why don't you write cool articles to relax? Why do you still have knives? Wow, Mijia's three games (Zero Zero, Iron Breaker, Genshin Impact) are all crooked, and they have just recovered from the plot of knives. Although I like watching knives, I like the feeling of crying when I see a tragedy (like being sad? Maybe it's a little abnormal, but sometimes I feel uncomfortable but I can't cry. I really like it. The feeling of relaxation after crying), but I also like to see their happy reunion plot after crying. Wow, I love reading sadistic stories, but the ending is sweet and not sadistic. This is also the reason why I like to read fanfics. To make up for regrets, life is unsatisfactory nine times out of ten. I hope everyone can be a master of life and live an ordinary life. I used to have a screen name, and I hope that unintentional difficulties can be solved. The rating is indeed a bit low, but there are far fewer such appetizing things on Tomato. Some of the small jobs are really disgusting. Having a harem is like goblins venting their desires online.

Can you please not write about swords? I'm so afraid that after Haiyan, the next one will be Hanasaki Rena or Lilith or other people who are bound to the protagonist [crying] The book is so beautiful [crying]

I originally read it as a sadistic novel, but the author has a solid foundation in portraying characters, scenes and battles. The characters are three-dimensional and the plot is coherent. After reading it, I got better and didn't care about the sadistic part, but read it as a similar combat novel. The foreshadowing was also well handled. No matter how many times I read Lin's ending in the seventh chapter, I will be deeply touched. I can't stop crying. I have read so many books. This is the first time I have written a serious book review. I highly recommend it. Sincerely.

It's beautiful, I'll check it out later when there's only one star left😋

It was said to be 1v1, but I didn't see it.

I have read Chapter 90 so far, and overall it is pretty good, except for the knife and the chapters 70-90 are a bit rushed, as if the protagonist is using his relationship with the heroine one second and is crying and begging the heroine not to leave the next second. The attitude changed too quickly, and with the knife, it would be uncomfortable to see them stacked together. The reason may be that Lin's portrayal is too perfect, compared with the heroine's current performance, and Lin's insistence on recycling the protagonist's memory and system actually concealing and deceiving the protagonist. As a result, the perception of this plot was not good. At the end, Lin Baicheng was gone and there was no foreshadowing. But if you think about it from another perspective, this protagonist is a soul-transporter, and it would be unfair to Lin to take advantage of Lin and the protagonist's previous love. I should have read about a third of it now, and the author is still updating it normally. I may have to look through the table of contents to see if I will continue to read it later. I am not very capable of taking the knife. Overall it's very good, highly recommended.

The swallow flying south meets her spring; The rising sun meets the swallow chasing her; But the sun was too high, and Yan could not stand side by side with her; Yan tried her best to fly, but there was always a distance between her and her. The sun is still shining brightly, but the swallow's wings have been broken; She wished she could be by her side, but the sky couldn't reach her. Yan used up her last strength just to have a place beside her, But the exhausted Yan couldn't fly, she was getting further and further away from her, But she is getting closer and closer, she is rising! She has caught up with her sun! She stands with her sun! But! Why can't the sun see her, why can't she touch her! Looking at her broken body on the ground, she understood that she was no longer there when she met the sun. She just longed for the sun. She dedicated herself to the sun. The sun was her obsession, and she exchanged herself for the sun! She is accompanying the sun as the wind! Finally, I will send you a song called "Mysterious Guest" for my Haiyan. Mysterious Guest - Yoga Lin I'm stepping on the stairs of dreams Entered a misty forest Whose thoughts are eavesdropped by angels and cause ripples? Time helps me design the next second. Who will be the mysterious guest? Carefully uncover the mask and applaud and encourage Who broke into my venue? Who caught me off guard? I had prepared the plot a long time ago, but you gave me a sum Cunningly and fatally hit my heart Who do I become close to and who gradually move away from me? Magnificent performances and grand events, only your back A friendly guest appearance leaves unforgettable memories You rang my doorbell and I finally woke up from yawning Nervously, I want to say to you, welcome. The entire audience left, leaving me still searching for the place. Listening to the song of the curtain call, I can't go out Who broke into my venue? Who caught me off guard? I had prepared the plot a long time ago, but you gave me a sum Cunningly and fatally hit my heart Who do I become close to and who gradually move away from me? Magnificent performances and grand events, only your back A friendly guest appearance leaves unforgettable memories Who do I move next door to and who becomes my neighbor? Thank you for your participation in life and for accepting my invitation The song ends but everyone writes an ending that will never end

I used to regard yandere as cute, but I was scared to tears after reading this book. I hope it will have a good ending. A good protagonist should have a good ending. The author has a good grasp of the rhythm of the plot. The most important thing in online novels is rhythm. After all, novices can pile up gorgeous words, and it is difficult to control the density of information output. Although in the first few chapters, there are a little more parts about past lives, world views, and the plot of the original book, but after 10 chapters, it becomes much more comfortable, and the role of early foreshadowing is also revealed.

With this caliber, although the author's sweet love is fascinating, this twisted love is even more crazy! Author, please hold your pen and keep writing! By the way, the HE author of the ending!

Overall, it's okay, but to be honest, if it's 1V1, don't engage in other ambiguous characters, okay? . . . If it's to advance the plot, forget it. Why does one of the protagonists still have feelings for him? I really can't stand it, feeling guilty for someone who has hurt me. Hey, but the author's writing skills are okay.

There should be labels for novelty, harsh words, and personality humiliation.

By the way, is the heroine being raped by her future self?

So pretty. We're almost at the end. So I decided to keep the book until it is finished! Give me five stars first. It's just not cruel enough. But! I think it still looks good. And I quite like Lin. She's really nice.

It hurts so much, but it's so beautiful. Why would there be such a result? I still can't stand it anymore. After all, I still don't want to eat those knives that are full of heavy emotions. Alas, everyone, I'll leave first. I hope you can continue to read. I hope there will be a different episode. I hope I can see a different result. Lin Haiyan, may the stars guide you, destiny build a bridge for you, and starlight pave the way for you. I wish you can meet the person you love in the next life, and the person who loves you, so that you will no longer suffer from pain, no longer become a distorted existence due to regret, no longer let your heavy feelings go to waste, maybe, the way you expressed your feelings is: It's too twisted, but at this moment, what I see is a "person" who can sacrifice his life for the one he loves. You are worthy of the stars to crown you, worthy of me writing a chapter for you, worthy of a complete and happy life. At the end of this paragraph, I wish you a bright future, happiness and everlasting happiness in the new world. ——Mortal past events

Rather than the heroine saving others, I hope the heroine can save herself...

I'm running away, I'm running away, I can't calm down [crying] Swallow How can I live without you?