Naruto Starts as a Mortal, Working as a Logistics Worker in Konoha

The writing is quite good. I have read a lot of Naruto novels, all of which are about combat. This is the first time I have seen this kind of logistics work. Overall, I think the plot is a bit fast, if I only plan to write Shippuden. Civilian ninjas should not be too powerful, otherwise it will be boring to watch once their combat power collapses. In addition, you can expand the map. If there are any specialties in other countries or Ninja Villages, you can go there and create a few tasks, which can be combined with the main line or written as a separate branch line. The most important thing is to update more [Learned] I thought it was pretty good when I posted a book review in Chapter 47, but my combat power collapsed in Chapter 49. How much chakra do you have as a civilian ninja who graduated about a year ago, and how many ninjutsu do you know? What made you think that you could have a chance with Kakashi by getting the Thunder Blade?

It's pretty good, nothing poisonous, just bland. There is a female protagonist

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1. The black market boss said: I will charge the market price for the detonating talisman. It is 500-800 on the market. I will give you 300. 2. The boss said: Your Transformation Technique and Shadow Clone Technique are leaking when you come in. You must be a genin. I don't care what your identity is next time your main body comes. Then after the male protagonist went out, he thought to himself that the boss had seen through my use of shadow clones and transformation techniques but did not reveal it, and then he analyzed and thought for a while... It's my own taste. Hahahaha. It's so funny. I really want to know what it means to say something bad. Also, the author wants to write in a step-by-step style. I'm so confident.

So far it looks okay, the main plot has not changed much, the early stage is just to implement the civilian character design, and later it feels a little more involved. There are a few things that make people more depressing. One is that someone controlled him and made him a puppet, blowing up his brain. The other is that someone took his body and took control of his body and did some bad things.

The plot is good, the emotional line is also good, the heroine is Tiantian, I mentioned earlier that Itachi thought the author had not read the plot, but there are supplements later, recommended

The world of Naruto is indeed very dangerous, and the protagonist's logistical route at the beginning is actually quite in line with the ideas of a time-traveler who has not cheated. I have seen the latest chapter. From Naruto to Mr. Tanaka, Xiao Li, and Tiantian, the protagonist is integrating into the world. It can be seen that he does have something he wants to protect. From making a fortune through the Chunin Exam, to promoting the plot, to the latest attempt to influence Jiraiya to change his ending, this is really a kind of growth and integration.

Not bad, just a little different from what I imagined. I thought that the protagonist was studying sealing techniques in the warehouse, but I didn't expect that it was Thunder Armor plus medical ninjutsu, plus the wonderful props from the movie version, which makes sense.

Well, I finished reading it in one sitting, it was very good. What satisfies me the most after seeing this is that the protagonist has his own growth story, but he doesn't steal the role of the protagonist group, and he always appears at the right time. Not to mention how perfect it is, it is just right. Tomato has read so many Naruto novels, and this one is really a rare masterpiece. There is also a book called Naruto Tenmuru, and my short video shocked everyone. These two books are really good among Tomato Naruto fanfics.

Not bad, this book is quite novel. The Konoha fan fiction I read before was basically either from the same period as the Yondaime or the same period as Kakashi. , It is rare to say that there are people in the same period as Naruto.

The writing is very good, I also like this kind of Naruto from the perspective of a civilian ninja, there is no big golden finger, everything goes smoothly. It has been added to the bookshelf. The author should work hard to finish it and never stop updating.

Chapter 175, I feel very good. The protagonist is relatively solid at the beginning, and then he first learns the shadow clone, teleportation, and earth current wall to enhance his escape ability. Later, he starts corruption to obtain thunder stimulation and the armor, and then learns thunder from Kakashi, and so on. The subsequent series of ability changes are also good. In the middle, the person's vitality is strengthened and the life force is slightly opened, which is the most difficult to accept. In the later period, the six paths are also used to purify the soul. Generally speaking, it is good.

If you write well, five stars will be given. 666, You are good at writing novels. What you wrote in the front is so good, but there is a leech in the back. No wonder there are not many people in the back to urge you to update.

It's better in fan fiction. From ordinary to powerful, it's not just the change of power, but also the rare description of the change of mentality. It omits a lot of the original plot description and focuses on depicting new scenes. The rating could be higher

The book is good, the plot is reasonable and the characters are well described. Thanks to the author's efforts. The score of 10,000 words updated every day is revealed!

The author writes the protagonist very realistically, and the content is plain but unique. .

In fact, it's okay. The main reason for the negative review is that the protagonist's strength improves very quickly. However, Naruto's combat performance in the early stages is not what it was in the later stages. The protagonist's improvement in strength is not too outrageous. Although only Shikamaru, the main protagonist in the original book, succeeded in being promoted to chuunin, the others must be as strong as chuunin. The main character has the Snow Country Armor and knows Chidori. His strength is not bad. Killing Kidomaru in a sneak attack is okay. There is nothing outrageous. Kimimaro's battle was basically a waste of time, waiting for Kimimaro to be unable to bear it.

It's good to read. The last novel that I read that was very enjoyable and reasonable was Fuuji Touji. Great support for the author.

Good looking, rigorous logical thinking, not clumsy

Take the logistical route. Not bad

Not bad, just a little short

Plain and simple is the truth

It's beautiful, but I can't even put together five words.

Not bad. Will the protagonist have a baby with Tian Tian?

Reading novels every day is either a system or a child of luck. They have forgotten that ordinary is what most people are like. The book is okay, but it would be better if the content were richer.

There are no cheats, no brainless cool stories, a single female protagonist every day, and although the protagonist is not particularly strong, she is not weak either, and can be a five-star [blowing kiss]!

The ordinary and realistic little characters are well written, with a bit of ambition and greed.

Speaking of time, I almost let the title of the book fool me [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] The early writing was a relatively dull transitional period, but the later period became very interesting ~ especially after the hundredth chapter,

It's really well written. I've been keeping it for a while and the rating should be at least 9.

It's a bit fresh and good to watch