
I'm in the Milky Way's Back Mountain, and I'm Lugiel!
人在银河后山,我为路基艾尔!
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 921k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1d ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
426Chapters
20.5kReads
8.1Score
2.7kShelves
4.1kListens
242.1kReads · all time
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Single-Anime Fanfiction, One Female Lead
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High-Quality Ultraman Fanfiction
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There Are No Masterpiece Ultraman Stories Left
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I Want Every Ultraman Novel on Tomato Novel
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The Protagonist Is a Clone, Ultraman, Male Lead, Get It?
Dark Loops Zero can be included too, since it’s mass-produced. No unrelated posts, and no book recommendations!
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Demon Slayer Stories with Crossovers with Other Anime
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From This Point of View, Luigi Air and I Are Indeed One.
Big follow-up
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Please Recommend Ultraman Fiction Starring Dark Lugiel
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This is the first time I've seen someone write about Luciel. The subject matter is new, and Luigi Al didn't write it in an evil way. There is a sense of freshness. The writing is also very good.
The combat aspect is well written, but... You gave them Luchiel's spark... You must have given them your own energy doll. What I want to ask is, as for Luchiel, in other worlds, there is actually a lot of room for maneuver. Your Luchiel team is also strong enough, but when fighting God Kiri Elold, I have questions, why don't you just use Luchiel's magical skill: Spark Puppet Light 😄😄😄, and then turn God Kirialod into a doll, and then materialize it. In that time and space city, wouldn't there be a legendary-level guard 😄, and then the Kirialodian army and a different space 😄, and then if the evil god is also turned into a doll, the two legendary-level warriors, plus the team members and troops that your team will improve in the future, can defeat any force in the dark side 😄😄😄
I sent some readers saying that the pace is fast and overwhelming 🤔 and that my writing is not very good, and sometimes I am sloppy, but this is the first novel I have written. I read Ultraman from elementary school to college, and Zeta was the last one I read, so I only got to know it a little bit later 😄. The reason why I wrote this book is that there are really a lot of emotions in it, so I want to make up for some things. Maybe there are too many worlds to visit, and some of the pacing may be a little faster 😂 or the dialogue between the characters is a bit long-winded. But the road is far away, and Lukiel is Lukiel and cannot be confused with each other. There is also the issue of suppressing the battle. I like to improve step by step and then participate in the plot. There may be times when I am frustrated 😂 and sometimes I like to show off. But my level is not very good, so my writing skills are a bit poor. This book was written based on my love, and if you like it, you can read it. There is always a difficulty that everyone has. If you don't like it, just leave it and I won't deliberately say anything. Turnips and greens, everyone has their own preferences. There are a bunch of Tomato fanfics, everyone will always find what they like 😂 For persisting in updating for so long, give yourself a five-star 🙂
I quite like this subject matter. The plot development is reasonable and the writing is quite good. The plot is smooth and comfortable to watch. It will become more exciting as it goes on. I hope it will be updated steadily. It is quite to my liking and I will continue to follow it.
It feels pretty good 😄, but I think Luchiel's original leather looks better.
Okay, okay, the author is a novice and can write so well. I suggest you read more books to learn from other books. You still have more possibilities. Come on, the author just needs to keep updating, and his imagination can be bigger.
@ I want to ask how many female protagonists there are. Can you tell me about them? I can't tell what the heroine's condition is from the tags. Can you understand reading a book and reading more than 800 chapters, only to find out that it's the despair of the harem? Please give the author a big reply 😢 😢
It's okay. After all, Luciel's writing is quite small. The author's writing style is still lacking, but his imagination is good. I look forward to the follow-up plot and hope that the author will make some progress. After all, this is the first time to write a novel. Come on. One more thing, no eunuchs! ! ! No eunuchs! ! ! No eunuchs! ! ! Say important things three times! ! !
The writing is smooth, the plot logic is rigorous, and the plots are quite consistent with imagination.
The writing is okay, and there are no logical flaws. Is this considered a micro-group article? There are quite a lot of people in the protagonist group.