Go Through Lujial and Play the Peak Match at the Beginning

This is the first time I've seen someone write about Luciel. The subject matter is new, and Luigi Al didn't write it in an evil way. There is a sense of freshness. The writing is also very good.

The combat aspect is well written, but... You gave them Luchiel's spark... You must have given them your own energy doll. What I want to ask is, as for Luchiel, in other worlds, there is actually a lot of room for maneuver. Your Luchiel team is also strong enough, but when fighting God Kiri Elold, I have questions, why don't you just use Luchiel's magical skill: Spark Puppet Light [laugh][laugh][ Laughs], and then turn God Kirialod into a doll, and then materialize it. In that time and space city, wouldn't there be a legendary-level guard [laugh], and then the Kirialodian army and a different space [laugh], and then if the evil god is also turned into a doll, the two legendary-level warriors, plus the team members and troops that your team will improve in the future, can defeat any force in the dark side [laugh][laugh][laugh]

I sent some readers saying that the pace is fast and overwhelming [thinking] and that my writing is not very good, and sometimes I am sloppy, but this is the first novel I have written. I read Ultraman from elementary school to college, and Zeta was the last one I read, so I only got to know it a little bit later [laughs]. The reason why I wrote this book is that there are really a lot of emotions in it, so I want to make up for some things. Maybe there are too many worlds to visit, and some of the pacing may be a little faster [laughing and crying] or the dialogue between the characters is a bit long-winded. But the road is far away, and Lukiel is Lukiel and cannot be confused with each other. There is also the issue of suppressing the battle. I like to improve step by step and then participate in the plot. There may be times when I am frustrated [laughing and crying] and sometimes I like to show off. But my level is not very good, so my writing skills are a bit poor. This book was written based on my love, and if you like it, you can read it. There is always a difficulty that everyone has. If you don't like it, just leave it and I won't deliberately say anything. Turnips and greens, everyone has their own preferences. There are a bunch of Tomato fanfics, everyone will always find what they like [laughing and crying] For persisting in updating for so long, give yourself a five-star [smile]

It feels pretty good [laughs], but I think Luchiel's original leather looks better.

I quite like this subject matter. The plot development is reasonable and the writing is quite good. The plot is smooth and comfortable to watch. It will become more exciting as it goes on. I hope it will be updated steadily. It is quite to my liking and I will continue to follow it.

Okay, okay, the author is a novice and can write so well. I suggest you read more books to learn from other books. You still have more possibilities. Come on, the author just needs to keep updating, and his imagination can be bigger.

It's okay. After all, Luciel's writing is quite small. The author's writing style is still lacking, but his imagination is good. I look forward to the follow-up plot and hope that the author will make some progress. After all, this is the first time to write a novel. Come on. One more thing, no eunuchs! ! ! No eunuchs! ! ! No eunuchs! ! ! Say important things three times! ! !

@ I want to ask how many female protagonists there are. Can you tell me about them? I can't tell what the heroine's condition is from the tags. Can you understand reading a book and reading more than 800 chapters, only to find out that it's the despair of the harem? Please give the author a big reply [crying] [crying]

The writing is smooth, the plot logic is rigorous, and the plots are quite consistent with imagination.

So beautiful, Luciel

It's okay. I feel like the author wrote this book to make up for his regrets. I still prefer the protagonist to be pure darkness.

The writing is okay, and there are no logical flaws. Is this considered a micro-group article? There are quite a lot of people in the protagonist group.

I don't want to evaluate, I don't want to evaluate

It's pretty good. If you keep the same quality as before, you can take a look. Is the character a bit broken in Chapter 11?

Not bad, come on

Very nice, please update more

This book is very beautiful.

A very nice book

It's really good. It would be great if I could get the origin of the galaxy (everyone understands it)

It seems to be okay so far, it has some flaws but it is okay for newbies to write. I hope it can keep up.

There's a lot to read, just keep updating, preferably more!

Come on, author, it's very good.

Galaxy Elugil

Very good, very rhythmic

It's so beautiful. The author will continue to update it. Come on, come on, come on.

Have you read those with low stars seriously? I think this book is the best novel about Luigi El that I have read so far. Not enough at all

The plot is very good, I hope it will be updated soon

Very nice, I hope it won't be discontinued.

It's so good-looking, please give it a thumbs up to the author.

I feel like the author can make Maya the heroine