(The original heroines Yin Zhao and Chang An are CPs)
The ending of the first season of Tornado Girl, between Ruobai and Baicao, has always left me distraught.
I need someone to step into the plot on my behalf and help these two people clearly love each other but don't know it.
Reader comments
I'm afraid it will be removed from the shelves. I'll give it four stars first. Why did you write a fanfic of this drama after so many years? I thought everyone had forgotten it. [Sending my heart] You wrote it so well. It's exactly the same as the ending I changed in my memory. It can be said that it's even better. You wrote Chang'an better. He changed It's alive, it's even better than in the drama, Ruobai is indeed my childhood idol, and he is also a male god in your book [blowing kiss], Chang'an and Zhaozhao/Ruobai Baicao/Tinghao Eunxiu/Tingyi Chuyuan/Xiaoying Yifeng/Hey Hey Shenxian combination are all in love hahahahahahahahaha awesome! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration], write more and don't rush to finish it. [Sending my heart] (I want to see the plot between Yin Xiu and Eun Xiu, can I add more)
It's really beautiful, the only drawback is that it's not finished. Mainly because of the waiting time, it feels like time passes too slowly
Don't let the heroine disappear [crying]
I've read Chapter 59 so far, and it's actually pretty good.
The heroine cannot interfere with the main line of the world, so it feels like she can only make up for it afterwards, but that's okay, as long as the regrets can be resolved.
I rather like the relationship between the heroine and Chang An, but I feel that the description is a bit lacking. The relationship between the two is naturally sweet and sweet. In the end, I hope that the heroine's tonic disappears! !
It looks great, it's great, keep updating, come on, come on, come on [love] [love] [love]
I'm afraid it will be removed from the shelves. I'll give it four stars first. Why did you write a fanfic of this drama after so many years? I thought everyone had forgotten it. [Sending my heart] You wrote it so well. It's exactly the same as the ending I changed in my memory. It can be said that it's even better. You wrote Chang'an better. He changed It's alive, it's even better than in the drama, Ruobai is indeed my childhood idol, and he is also a male god in your book [blowing kiss], Chang'an and Zhaozhao/Ruobai Baicao/Tinghao Eunxiu/Tingyi Chuyuan/Xiaoying Yifeng/Hey Hey Shenxian combination are all in love hahahahahahahahaha awesome! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration], write more and don't rush to finish it. [Sending my heart] (I want to see the plot between Yin Xiu and Eun Xiu, can I add more)
It's really beautiful, the only drawback is that it's not finished. Mainly because of the waiting time, it feels like time passes too slowly
Don't let the heroine disappear [crying]
I've read Chapter 59 so far, and it's actually pretty good. The heroine cannot interfere with the main line of the world, so it feels like she can only make up for it afterwards, but that's okay, as long as the regrets can be resolved. I rather like the relationship between the heroine and Chang An, but I feel that the description is a bit lacking. The relationship between the two is naturally sweet and sweet. In the end, I hope that the heroine's tonic disappears! !
It looks great, it's great, keep updating, come on, come on, come on [love] [love] [love]
So pretty, so pretty [shy]
Looks good, come and see