What happens when Blue Star's time traveler crosses over and becomes Luffy? The answer is of course change, so it's a pity that Ace will not die in the war on top. I, Luffy, want to be the freest adventurer on this sea. I want to stop the enemies in front of me, hurt my partners, hurt my important people, all of them will be defeated by me.
Reader comments
Author, please collect a few points and the crew members will be called one by one. This book is enough to write ten million words. Just like this, Luffy got up in the morning and went out. Zoro glanced at Kuina, Usopp glanced at Sanji, glanced at Nami, then Uta glanced at Nami, who was looking at Luffy, and Robin glanced at Utta and Nami.
After reading Chapter 11, I feel good. The advantage is that the emotional description is delicate. The disadvantage is that the emotional description is too delicate. It is not bad but too delicate, which makes me feel that I am neglecting the important things.
It's okay, just don't accept Usopp
It's very comfortable to see the way Luffy and Uta get along.
I feel it's okay. I've read Chapter 12 so far. I don't know if it will overwhelm the combat power in the future. I'll watch it first.
Where is Yuebu? ? ? It's been ten years and you haven't made any progress in the Six Styles? ? ?
Uta talks so little
This fanfic is very good
It looks okay, nothing too bad. The only drawback is that I came early. It didn't come at the time of Chapter 400 or 500.
I like it very much, very good-looking, looking forward to more heroines
Very well written, looking forward to the next plot
Author, please collect a few points and the crew members will be called one by one. This book is enough to write ten million words. Just like this, Luffy got up in the morning and went out. Zoro glanced at Kuina, Usopp glanced at Sanji, glanced at Nami, then Uta glanced at Nami, who was looking at Luffy, and Robin glanced at Utta and Nami.
After reading Chapter 11, I feel good. The advantage is that the emotional description is delicate. The disadvantage is that the emotional description is too delicate. It is not bad but too delicate, which makes me feel that I am neglecting the important things.
It's okay, just don't accept Usopp
It's very comfortable to see the way Luffy and Uta get along.
I feel it's okay. I've read Chapter 12 so far. I don't know if it will overwhelm the combat power in the future. I'll watch it first. Where is Yuebu? ? ? It's been ten years and you haven't made any progress in the Six Styles? ? ?
Uta talks so little
This fanfic is very good
It looks okay, nothing too bad. The only drawback is that I came early. It didn't come at the time of Chapter 400 or 500.
I like it very much, very good-looking, looking forward to more heroines
Very well written, looking forward to the next plot