Honkai: Star Rail: Bai'e Picks Up an Old Master from the Start, but Zandar...

The author's writing style is great and his narrative ability is extremely strong. Tomato is the gold mine in history, and the style belongs to "traditional fan fiction" rather than the "Internet style" that focuses on explosive points. I am still not satisfied with the tie in one breath. I look forward to updates 💕

It's delicious. It's delicious. I eat it hard. This is so great! I also discovered such a delicious meal. The characters are not completely OOC, but they are still delicious. The writing is very smooth, and the story develops quite naturally. Even the two unlucky guys with amnesia have been shaved off, which is right. If I don't shave them off, what else will I watch? How about Zane's one-minute speed run through the wasteland? Finally, I'll add a classic quote from Lao Zan – "Zandar thought: He won't be with Bai E for too long." Lao Zan, one act of arrogance will lead to a lifetime of black history. Laugh loudly. Jpg

My favorite is Zan'erli written by the teacher😋 A great road novel, the writing is natural and smooth, and it has a strong sense of the road. It makes people very excited and feels like an adventure is about to begin. Looking forward to the follow-up!

It's tied in one breath! The author's conception is super clever, and the plot develops naturally and interestingly, so the characters are all lifelike. The whole planet runs as orderly as a mechanical watch under your writing. I rarely see authors who use concise writing to build such a real civilization like you when writing original planets (of course, it may also be because of my shallow experience, but the teacher is great anyway) I'm so nervous... This is my first time writing a book review. I hope you'll correct me if there's anything offensive. I wish the teacher a happy writing and a smooth life ❤️

Chasing all the way from the old Ford to tomatoes, Zane is still so delicious, I look forward to the follow-up plot [Blow kiss]

Unexpected if line, the beginning is very interesting, I look forward to the next plot

This book by Teacher is very innovative and unexpectedly good-looking. It also has an original plot. There are no big problems with the story line of the original plot. The character creation of the original plot is also good. It takes a lot of courage to create an original plot in a fanfic. Creating an interesting story also promotes the relationship between Zangdar and Xiaobai. Their relationship is natural and the twists are not abrupt. Even though the original plot is slow, the story is still a good one. I give it five stars. I look forward to the follow-up of Teacher's book.

Looks good, come on

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Great, great. Although there are not enough people to rate it, I believe that as long as there are enough people, it should get at least eight or nine points. I won't spoil the story. Thank you, Lord Zandar, for not being curious about anything.