On the Compatibility Between Detective System and Immortality Cultivation

It's a very novel type, and overall the detective system is well combined with cultivating immortality. The only drawback may be that the heroine, as a detective, is a bit too lawful and good. Please face the dark side of the detective profession. By the way, I hope more and more female characters will appear in the future.

It's a novel subject, at least I haven't seen it before, and the protagonist is pretty good. It's normal for people who grow up under the Five Star Red flag to not do many things and don't want to do them. But sometimes I feel a little too good-natured. For example, the little fox can take advantage of the situation, and the sister. I originally thought it would be enough to replenish the body, but after doing this, it makes sense for someone to help. I gave it five stars before. When I saw other people saying that giving opportunities to men, I thought it was normal and not that exaggerated. Later, I was really speechless [They were really right [laughter] [laughter]]. Before I tied it today, I felt fine [I was really speechless [laughter] [laughter]]. A pampas grass demon got a big chance and gave the man the same age as the heroine, leaving the smallest one for herself. What does the man have to do with her? The heroine is not with the man every day. The heroine is with her every day, gives her food and practices with her. She gives the man the same age as the heroine? I can accept a small one for the man and a big one for myself. Why should I give the man the same one as the heroine?

The two settings of the detective system and the world of cultivating immortals are combined more naturally. The heroine is not the selfish (not derogatory) character I often see. She is quite kind and enthusiastic, but does not cause disgust. I personally think it's okay to have kind characters, but some novels always like to make kind-hearted protagonists suffer, which is very unpleasant. Fortunately, there is no such problem in this book. The heroine solves the case and helps others to satisfy her own instincts and get rewards, which is quite good. The article is not long yet, so I will give five stars to support it.

Good seedlings, and it is rare to see a combination of detective writing and immortality. I have a feeling that it will be difficult for me to find meal replacements in the future. Please give me a rating to support it. That is to say, I didn't want to give it a 5 at first because the plot of the brother and sister was too confusing. I don't know what the author was thinking. I always felt that the heroine seemed to owe them, and she always had an inexplicable sense of responsibility for other people in her heart. She couldn't sleep well for a few people she had never met. This was a bad impression. I suggest that the author be fair to the heroine and not always feel that others are at a disadvantage. But it is still a seedling now, so I will give it a 5. Second editor, if you plan to quit, just change it to 4 points.

It's quite interesting. The combination of cultivation and solving crimes is quite novel, but the heroine is a moral and conscientious person (not in a derogatory sense) with very upright views (not in a derogatory sense). In addition to solving the case required by the system, the heroine will do everything to perfection for those who have a cause and effect with her (not in a derogatory sense). It depends on personal taste. I don't like it very much, and the author does not have a CP. I am afraid that a male protagonist will pop up later.

I don't know why some people say that this book is not friendly to women. I just want to say that this book is more friendly to women than most of the fairy tales I read [Sending Hearts] (For long reviews, you can take the time to read it and then decide whether you want to pursue this book or not) Many people ask why Guan Wuwu cannot be designed as a female. First of all, this article does not say that it is without cp, nor does it say that it is Lily, so the heroine's companion can be male or female. I feel that according to the author's description, the two of them should be like-minded partners, and their relationship will gradually develop naturally. If the two of them are a couple, I accept it and give my best wishes. I hope they will have a good [send my heart]. Some novels have CPs dropped from the sky in the last few dozen chapters, and the emotional lines are so quick and confusing that it's difficult to understand. I really want to scold the author for this kind of [angry]. But the emotional thread of this article has been tied together from the beginning. If the two of them are together, there is a kind of CP that I would like to come true [blowing kiss] If they are not together, it is acceptable that the two of them have always been companions. When traveling from one world to another, loneliness will always be with you. It will be healing for you to have a companion [send heart]. Two children are healing each other's pain, hugging each other even if they are injured, this is the best friendship in the world [Sending Hearts] Secondly, the author really describes the world of immortality very well. He does not add the setting of cultivating immortals to the real world, but focuses on describing the world of immortality, which does not look at men and women but only talent. It is not important to have children and girls, but only those who are born with talents are important [Sending Hearts] Moreover, the children of many women in this article are still their children. If the child's mother dies, the child's grandparents will not think that it is someone else's child, but firmly believe that it is my child. Those who have the blood of my family are my children. Even if you are the father of the child, you have no right to take away my child [blowing kiss] Unlike some articles about cultivating immortals, the child that a daughter desperately gives birth to can be easily taken away by a man. The child's grandparents also think that the child born by the daughter is an outsider [smile]. I have complained many times. I have already cultivated immortality. Do I still care about men and women? It can be seen from the heroine that she has been influenced too much by the real world. By default, the person involved in a case took her father's surname, so the investigation was delayed for a while, but the character said normally, "Oh, I take my mother's surname." The heroine also suddenly realized, accepted her mistake, and secretly decided in her heart that she must ask carefully next time and try not to make this mistake again. This article describes this kind of place really well, so I don't understand why some people say this book is not friendly to women? And this book also has many female characters. There are female characters and male characters. Isn't this normal? Why do you say this article is unfriendly to women just because there are male characters? [What]

It's a very good book. It's one of the few books on Tomato that makes people want to read it. I like it both in terms of the topic and the setting. The main reason is that the setting is novel, and the detective is not brainless in solving the case. The background of each supporting character is detailed, and there are basically no bugs in the timeline. It is a rare good article. The only problem may be that the pace is too fast, a bit too fast, because there are so many NPCs appearing and a lot of branch lines that have been expanded. As a result, the main character's memory points for several unremarkable events are not fully arranged in terms of priority. Although the heroine is the single protagonist, the layout of this book is actually more suitable for group portraits and strengthens the settings and backgrounds of some supporting characters (there are a few very interesting ones, such as the brother and sister playing the leading and supporting roles, the fox demon and the cat demon also count, and secondly, the female nun who got the blood bead at the beginning), so that the characters will not all pass by in a blink of an eye, making it difficult for readers to remember. It is conceivable that this level of complex arrangement is assisted by AI, but the quality is really good and suitable for readers who like to read story-based novels. If the author can put more effort into character arrangement, he has the potential to create a hit novel.

Super pretty! ! ! ! ! ! I was so excited to read every case. The excitement of finding a good book made me read it right away on the first night. It wasn't until the first ray of sunshine floated into the room at six o'clock in the morning. I read the latest updated chapter before falling asleep. I still can't believe that I fell into a serialized article again. When I finally found out whether it was a serialized article or a new book with only dozens of chapters, I felt that I couldn't sleep again. I was so excited and helpless. Zunduju is so good! [Cry][cry]

It's good to read. It's the first novel I've seen so far that combines detective work with the cultivation of immortality and the system. However, the power system in the novel is a bit messy. It feels like it focuses more on detective work. The background of cultivation of immortality always feels like it's overexaggerated and powerful, but actually it's very sloppy.

Ahhhh. . There are so few people watching this. This kind of setting of solving puzzles and solving cases to explore the cultivation of immortality is so special and really innovative. Not many people give it more or less points😭😭It shouldn't. The story of this chapter is really exciting. The settings of the characters and the world are very interesting, and the pacing and writing style of the book written by the boss is also good. I hope more and more people will read it. Come on, the author, come on (꜆꜄꜆˙꒳˙)꜆꜄꜆₊⁺♡ ₊⁺The heroine has a smart and interesting personality, while adhering to the truth of human nature and peace and justice! There are also many cunning little figures who dare to play "black hands" decisively! Boss, I want to keep reading this story!

Don't know why the rating is so low. I feel that this book is particularly good, from the touching characterization in the first chapter to the suspenseful and heart-wrenching plot at the end. But I really don't know why the rating is so low.

It's very good-looking, and the heroine is also very charming and kind-hearted, but she is not a kind-hearted Madonna with no bottom line. The heroine will seek her own interests and strive for the best interests for herself little by little. The heroine is really smart and pretty. It's just too little, please update soon! !

The heroine sticks to her true nature, is smart and witty, kind but sober, and is brave enough to help many people. The truth of each case is revealed, some of which are misunderstandings, and some of which are ignorance. Even though I have seen the ugliness of human nature, I still know the goodness of human nature and can stick to my heart. When my friends are in danger, I will be brave enough to save myself even if I am in danger. I will also save those who are unrelated to me when I see them suffering. I saw some people saying why should we save irrelevant people. This is actually just about the heroine. If she doesn't save her Taoist heart, she will still be able to survive. The heroine's rescue mission is not due to excessive compassion, but rather illustrates the detective's responsibility to stick to his heart, find out the truth, and support justice. (Everyone has their own opinions, you and I are different, please understand if you disagree)

It looks good, but I didn't know the rating was so low. It's very interesting, but it's a serialization, and some of it is not interesting enough. I don't feel that there is anything that loves men very much. If I have to say that I love men very much, it is probably in the comment area. I always criticize the author for loving men by mentioning that the author's writing is not balanced and gives a very low rating of three or two stars. Although this book is not so girl-loving, it is definitely not described as a boy-loving book as extreme as the negative reviews in the comment section. The level of this book should be at least an 8 if not a 9. As a result, just because the author didn't write about women so much, he was labeled as a man-lover. He received a lot of extremely bad reviews and couldn't even earn a 7-point rating. I hope everyone should read the book and discuss it rationally. I saw that the author's reading list is only over 2,000, and the author's column only has two or three books. It looks like a novice writing. She worked hard to write this book in a day. I estimate that she only earned less than 20 yuan. Fortunately, I am not the author of Power for Love, otherwise, the rating would be so low and the ecology would be so bad that I would not update it for a long time.

This book is very beautiful, the plot is exciting and the characters are vivid. The text is fresh and delicate, making you feel like you are in the world of the book when you read it, bringing you a pleasant spiritual feast. It's really good to read, why is the rating so low? The content of this book is wonderful and highly readable. The story has ups and downs, rich elements, and detailed details. However, the low score may be due to insufficient publicity, or it may be due to differences in audience tastes. It really deserves a higher score.

It's a pity that only 30 chapters have been updated. Come and explore the case in the world of cultivation. The me at the beginning (take a look) and the me after reading it (just to be polite), I am still a little Karami. The plot is exciting, the writing is online, engaging and interesting. I want to know why the protagonist plays a detective game in modern times. How can he be so comprehensive after time travel and his brain is so good? I admire him.

The theme of cultivating immortals + investigating cases is quite novel. The writing of the case is a little immature but still logical. Overall, it is very good. The protagonist is a girl and the author does not have the expression of a naughty girl. I think it is a female protagonist story worth reading. Overall, it is good.

Nice! Even though it's short, it combines cultivating immortality with detective work very well, and it's not boring at all. You can watch it all at once!

The author's imagination is very good, but the writing is not very sophisticated, it is easy to make dramas, and there are several common sense errors. The reasons for some cases are also super far-fetched, too far-fetched. The heroine is 13-14 years old, but it is written according to the dialogue and behavior of adults, which is a bit confusing to me. But the story is very good

It feels like I used AI in the back

Very nice! It's a very novel and interesting setting. I like the heroine who is flesh and blood and has a sense of justice. So far, there are no surprises. The author's writing is smooth and the content has no bugs! I have a feeling it will be popular! ! !

I was attracted by the title. I have read more than 30 chapters so far. Except for the heroine Goldfinger being a little bit big, everything else is acceptable. I personally prefer to watch a growth-type protagonist. Although the protagonist of this book seems to be a growth-type, I think her growth process is not difficult enough, because the protagonist of this book is systematic, and I can't expect the growth process to be difficult.

Let me think about it, how can I praise the author? It's a very interesting narrative technique. It's not one case after another, but one involving each other. You will find other secrets by investigating one case. It's very interesting. Moreover, the protagonist is very smart. It's not the kind of case that is solved because of luck or the halo of the protagonist, but a case solved with brains, and good and evil are clearly distinguished. She will help people to the best of her ability, and she also understands what she can't do and what she can use in exchange for benefits.

Very thoughtful, the detective system is a bit like a script kill. The combination with cultivating immortals is also very good. The first few cases were a bit so-so, but the theft case was really good. The subsequent murder case is a bit ordinary...

I have been following the game for a long time. The "immortal cultivation world + investigation + system upgrade/reward" is a very interesting combination of settings. The golden finger of the arrangement is well controlled and allows the protagonist to show more of his own abilities. The case is well integrated with the background of the world of immortality, and the storyline has a good rhythm. I look forward to the protagonist shining in this interesting world.

I haven't been able to find high-quality articles recently, so I couldn't read Black Koi again. Unexpectedly, the author has published a new book, so I came here to read it. It's as high-quality as the Black Koi book, with smooth writing and novel plot. I will be a loyal reader of the author from now on. I look forward to finishing this article as soon as possible. It's too hard to follow up. Thank you for the author!

The theme is very new, you can give it a try!

It was so exciting that even after reading the book, I still stepped into the series🕳️ 😂😂😂 After chasing Chapter 268, I finally tied it. I'm looking forward to watching the follow-up story of the heroine and her friends solving crimes😊😊😊😊

Very beautiful, come on!

It looks great, good luck to the author!