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After careful consideration, I finally came to the conclusion that this book is really good to read, especially the description of Lu Bu's fight for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are also very good.

It's a fresh and delicious Naruto novel. The Naruto theme needs fresh blood like you. It's so delicious. I will also support you in this wave. The plot is vivid and natural, and the characters are distinct. It's not good anymore. Why do I feel like I'm answering questions in Chinese? In short, it's beautiful and beautiful! It's so beautiful!

After careful consideration, I finally came to the conclusion that this book is really good to read, especially the description of Wei Yan's fight for Liu Bei and Sun Wukong. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If Sasuke Uchiha hadn't used the Sharingan's black flame + added earth life, this wave of M14 six times strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Naruto Uzumaki said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Ming", which shows Naruto Uzumaki's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are also very good.

Like it, like it, a very nice Naruto fanfic. Konoha's big bond is still too scary. It is not a conspiracy theory, but the third generation of soft-hearted people is hard-hearted and deals with a group of people led by Danzo (soft-hearted and let Danzo run away). Jiraiya also takes on the responsibility of Hokage in this book, and finally does not escape from being indulging in the savior fantasy in the past. The appearance of the protagonist changed the fate of many people. For example, Dai did not die, the fourth generation and the red pepper accompanied Naruto in the form of souls. Naruto also taught the unruly people of Konoha a lesson.

The same evaluation as the previous Naruto novel about the human-machine succubus. The protagonist mistakenly thought that nothing had changed, but still changed a lot unknowingly. Deep down, I am quite sensitive and have low self-esteem/arrogance, otherwise the result might not be so bad. The relationship between the characters is a must-try scene. It is quite creative and dramatic. Coupled with the emotional connection, it is also a very good novel.

Yun Yuanshen, my friends are already here to play Genshin Impact together, Yun Yuanshen! Ahhhhhhhhhh, I really want to play Genshin Impact Yun Yuanshen, hahahahaha ⑦①, let's play Genshin Impact together, Yun Yuanshen, I think about it so much, I really want to play Genshin Impact Web cloud, low power consumption, no distortion, WiFi network cable, can all be 60 frames, come on, come on, enter the Yuanyuan Shen. This book is really interesting, especially the description of Lu Bu fighting Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong, if not for Nuo With an outer ring in hand + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 will kill you with six times of strafing. In addition, I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows that Zhuge Liang beat the monkey with three sticks. His indignation died. In short, the plot of this book is interesting, the system is clear, there are many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character descriptions are in place! When Zihan fought with Ye Fan in order to win the quota to take the West Meridian, Li Kui went to persuade him to make peace, but was seduced by foreign persimmons on the way. Confused, he strayed into the depths of the lotus flower, and started a relationship with Xiao Longnu in Huanshi Water Pavilion, but was seen by Sato Kazuma. So Sato Kazuma got angry and went to another world to conquer the Delta with Doraemon, and finally became a generation of Emperor Yan. The plot of how to transport food and grass on the difficult road to Shu It is better to imitate the Four and Five Tigers of Eastern Wu than to imitate the Four and Five Tigers of Soochow. There is only one person left. Who dares to be the vanguard of the Northern Expedition? Why dare not? How can the country be trapped in the legacy of the late emperor? Haha!! Me!! Wei Yanxi can only advance but not retreat!!! If the Wei invaders treat one hundred thousand people as their masters, they can wipe out the Cao thieves and invade the world. Yan can also use all his strength to refuse to retreat and defeat the enemy for the main purpose. : King! Why did you break the Ultra Key? O9: It doesn't matter if the key is broken. Look, is it still Astra? Your Majesty, why did you turn Astra into the old duel arena of the Babar Stars? How can the Anbu advance to the top? It's better to imitate youth and use good tricks to waste gold coins. There is only one person left in Da Yin. Who dares to be a mad dog and bite him? Why not! Since I have inherited Izuna's legacy, how can I If I can hold back, I, Ma Ban, can only advance and not retreat!!! If 3000 people are in a round with three Yin people, Madara will be annihilated by the Lord. Even if the underworld brings the Black Zetsu to attack, Madara can also resist retreating with all his strength to defeat the enemy for the Lord. Like a fish drinking water, Koma Madara is here! How dare you!

The literary drama is very well written, and the martial arts drama is about Zhenla. A fight can be described in seven chapters. As the fight begins, memories begin to be made, as well as a lot of psychological descriptions, which make people unable to feel the tension of the fight at all. For the sake of this new book, I give it five stars. I have paid attention to the author. His writing style is good and there is a lot of room for improvement, but this book is not worth adding to the bookshelf.

Window looks good, this book is one of the best among the new ones I have read😍😍😍The author is also very funny and very good-looking. Actually, I am more curious about who the heroine is. Personally, as long as she is not a harem, it will be fine🤔Hey, it is really cute. Sometimes it doesn't feel like other time travels, like someone's thinking, and Minato and Kushina in Naruto's body are not regretful🤔Anyway, it is very good-looking. Uchiha is awesome! ! ! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 This book was originally written in the Akatsuki organization🤔 I can only say that it is very beautiful and the interaction with Obito (Obito) is also very ok. I like the character of the protagonist very much. He is not a genius who works hard😋😋😋😋. I can only say that it is very, very recommended. Sora Sora is also very gentle.

It's so rare. I've been reading Tomato for seven or eight years. So far, this book is the best Naruto fanfic I've ever read. The bond between the protagonist and other people is very well written and has the flavor of the original work.

Ok, this author is also writing about awesome Foklas, okay, I just asked my whole family to call me to resign, drop out of school, and all read this novel full-time at home, okay, I am Feng Feng, awesome Klass, does the author know how beautiful his writing is? I couldn't sleep after reading it, and the depressed Q child at home is no longer od, and I don't cut pig trotters anymore. Doubao helped me generate the author's bikini photo, and Doubao told the author tomorrow's sports lottery number. The author is awesome, and os finally allowed me to eat something delicious. The author also updates very quickly. It must be highly praised and supported. It would be great if os could be updated 10 times a day. Super awesome writing. Be awesome

It's good-looking, not overly impressive, and has no cheats. The protagonist has personal charm, and the interaction with the original characters is very natural and not awkward. It's a rare good Tomato Naruto story. I like the description and interaction with Obito. The protagonist feels like a native in a natural way. I like it [Love] and I wish the rating will increase!

Uncle Kou, you are so sweet, you are like a little devil fairy (? All in all, it is a very good book. There are many jokes in it, and there are also many CPs that can be criticized. What about a single female protagonist? Your uncle Kou and Obito are a couple, right?

The plot is smooth and the characters are analyzed in detail, and AI is not used, and the element of friendship between Mu and Ye is added, so I looked at the author's name before adding it on the bookshelf, and decisively added it, and sure enough, it's you again, hahaha, I finished the last Rubik's Cube, and now I continue to read [Cool] I was so moved by the family relationship between Uemoto's father and son, and I hope the author can continue to work hard with this book, I will be your forever fan hahaha [shy]

A brand new plot unfolds, with certain private settings and original plots, but they basically do not conflict with the original work. It can be seen that the author has put great effort into researching the settings. The jokes are played just right. The protagonist is a combination of Uchiha and modern people and has a full personality. He does not follow the original plot but has a deep relationship with most of the main characters. The three views are very upright. I won't slander Obito Sandai and I won't engage in conspiracy theories.

The writing is really good, the description is very delicate, and it perfectly describes the feeling of an ordinary person traveling to the ninja world. I like the protagonist very much. I have read many books and it is the first time I encounter one that suits my taste. It's great\^O^/

As expected of a Naruto fan, he has more memories than Naruto [Like] Two thirds of them are memories

Recommended by old bookworms with good books, I have already caught up with the big army, and I am waiting for the update. What a nice ink mark on the back

The writing and drama are good, but the fighting scenes are really hard to describe, and there are very few fighting scenes. In my memory, there is only one fight with Jiraiya. I need to write more fighting scenes. After all, Naruto is a passionate anime. It's also very long-winded. It would be better to have fewer memories or shorter memories.

Overall comment: From tamping to pulling, you can give a tamping down. This review ends at Chapter 176: It seems that the overall impression is not bad. The male protagonist has no system and is considered a hard-working genius with no talent. The plot of the kaleidoscope is also relatively reasonable. The male protagonist's character is a more traditional Uchiha, arrogant and generous. The only problem is that the plot is relatively slow. The current timeline should be around the 50th year of Konoha. At that time, the ninja world Orochimaru was establishing the Sound Ninja Village, and the protagonist is still completing the dungeon. Also, Konoha Friendship is a bit scary to tears (?! Give it!?) Continue to wait and see, and I will review it after one million words.

So far it's very interesting. The protagonist has the arrogance of an Uchiha but also the modern intelligence. Moreover, the protagonist has a strategy in Kirigakure, which is really interesting. It is not the kind of silly protagonist who enjoys fighting. It is especially suitable for readers who like to watch the lines of power. And it feels very authentic to the original work, and the entanglement between the protagonist and the prisoner is also very sour and refreshing. Although the heroine is Mei Terumi, she doesn't have much of a role, so people who don't like to watch single heroines can still watch it. I feel that Kou is completely a succubus. She is not a succubus who falls in love with her at first sight as soon as she sees her appearance in female videos. She completely conquers others with her personality charm (all of which conquered me as a reader). It feels really good to watch the protagonist attract a lot of people all the way. Kirigakure is the protagonist's little fanboy, Konoha has a love-hate relationship with the protagonist (love but not love hehe), Asuma even calls Kou "a man who can be a father", to be honest, I feel that no one in the entire ninja world will not like Kou! Knocking on the door lasts forever!

So far, the character image has not collapsed, and the credit of the original character has not been taken away from the original character. This deserves high marks in the fanfic. The protagonist is powerful but not invincible, so the plot will be more interesting and not boring. The only shortcoming is that the plot is a bit delayed, but overall it is insignificant. In short, it is a very good book for Naruto fanfics. I like Naruto, but if you read OOC and grab the plot, I highly recommend washing your eyes here [get it]

The writing is very good. It's the best of all the Naruto fanfics I've read so far. It's rhythmic, funny, and makes people want to read more. The only fanfic that gave me this feeling was Naruto Fire Fist. Tornado relies on blowing, Dave relies on laughing. And you my friend, you are the author who really captivates us with the power of your writing

The overall setting is not bad, and the plot is also more cheerful, so it is worth watching for fun. The author is obviously immature. Let's not talk about asking for readers' opinions in the early stage of the plot (it's okay to want to make his work better, but I just feel that it is a bit abrupt when I hear it). There are some problems with the detailed control of the protagonist before the super shadow. For example, the original ancestral plot is not long, but it is a bit detailed in some places. I think the writing can focus on the mood and thoughts of the protagonist after experiencing these memories. When I read it, it felt a bit brief. If this part is well written, it should also make the novel more in-depth in the joyful content. In short, the control of the overall setting is still worth watching. I look forward to the protagonist making the ninja world a safe place in his heart.

The protagonist is so good😋😋😋Although the plot has a lot of memories, you can just skip the Ninja sect part in the middle. The rest is very interesting, especially the Great Bond of Konoha😋😋😋The emotional line of the heroine is also okay, The plot is on Ai Itachi TV. It is best not to watch Itachi's recommendation. Because there are too many great bonds of Konoha, some of the comments include pictures of Hashiba Hashira, Sa Nasu and a few cassettes. It is best not to read some of the comments for CPs like Lei. Finally all are awesome😋😋😋

It's so good-looking, it would be nice if there was no female protagonist. There is no woman in my heart to draw my sword, the God of Nature! After watching the book, you can see that the protagonist still did a lot to resist the original work. The integration of creation and original work is also good. However, the Uzumaki ruins part is not very good because there are not many chapters in the book. Readers still want to see some passionate scenes. This makes the Uzumaki ruins part a bit bland. I look forward to seeing more passionate stories. How can I say this is also a shounen manga.

After seeing the 163 chapters and other updates, although there are some minor flaws in the writing technique and the time narration is a bit messy, there are no major flaws. It is much better than those systematic articles. It has plots, stories, passion, and creations. According to this writing method, as long as it is not reposted by bloggers, it should be a good book. This advancement speed will be completed in about 500 chapters, which can give it a 9.5 Or above, and the character will not collapse. If you want to write a Boruto, make more changes, add more originality, and change the settings. Otsutsuki is not immune to ninjutsu, but the energy level of ninjutsu is not enough, so it is not as good as senjutsu and taijutsu. Just like many things in reality contain toxins, but humans are immune, but some toxins are fatal. A big fire ball cannot burn people, but a big fire can extinguish people. Write about this idea. The above is just a personal opinion. Do not affect the author's performance. I am optimistic about you.

It's not bad. It's already considered a top product on Tomato. The plot is interesting, there are some things that the original work didn't explain, and it has its own ideas. It's not the kind of article that is very different from the original work. [Please taste it carefully] I'll give it 5 stars as long as there are no big problems later. After all, the free requirements are not too high.

The pacing of the whole book is pretty good, and the writing is okay, but there is not so much description of the appearance, and there is no need to say that the protagonist is very naughty every time he appears. There are also a lot of jokes, including but not limited to some bad jokes, which makes the book feel uncomfortable and looks a bit embarrassing. Tomato doesn't have half a star, it should actually be three and a half stars

I have read a lot of novels on this platform, and I have also read a lot of Naruto-themed ones. The emotions are so delicately written. You are the first person who moved me when I read Naruto fan fiction. When I see such an author on this kind of platform, my evaluation is: it's really good.

The writing is good, and the main character of Lao Kou is well portrayed. He is a normal time-traveler with no natural strength. He is powerless in the early stage and has not changed anything (Lao Kou's self-feeling). In the middle stage, he will leave a foreshadowing. Only when he has the strength in the later stage can he dare to consider other things. The current main plot is that Lao Kou obtains the chakra of Indra and Asura and turns into the Samsara Eye and then changes the ninja world. The main plot is very consistent with Lao Kou's character image, but still The one thing that makes me uncomfortable is the descriptions of other people and the constant writing of irrelevant plots. Although I think it's okay, it can be improved a bit. The main point is that I'm a Kou Hong fan. I beg you, let Anko and Kou be together [cry] [cry] [cry]. I really beg you to think about it [cry] [cry] [cry]. I think Anko is a single heroine or a double heroine with Terumi Mei [cry] [cry] [cry]