Da Qin: Burning Longevity, Lighting up the Seven-Star Ancestral Dragon, Invites Me to Live Forever

I have read almost 200 chapters to evaluate. The writing is quite good, but there are too few people. [Pause face] [Pause face] Among the Da Qin fan fictions I have read, this one has the smallest number of famous people. Brother Zheng and the protagonist, others who have no names [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] like Wang Jian, Wang Ben and Wang Li of the Wang family, Longxi Marquis Li Xin, Guo Wei Liao, Shaofu Zhang Han, Prime Minister Wang Wan, Feng Jie and Feng Quji of the Feng family, as well as the famous business widows Ba Qing and Wushi Li, have never appeared. There is also the issue of titles. One is Brother Zheng, the other is Ying Zheng, and the other is His Majesty. The events are too messy, and the general framework is fine, but the order of the characters' development is messy. Often the characters in the front have already come in and done a lot of things, and the characters in the back come in again from the outside. For example, Fusu had already rushed into the young man's house to offer medicine. Seeing Brother Zheng refining medicine to save people, they already knew that Qin Feng had saved people. Later, Fusu came back from Bashu and heard that Qin Feng was in bad condition... It was too messy [face covering] [face covering] And Meng Yi in the front, don't wait for one person, he really doesn't have the ability to separate himself. Don't be at Qin Feng's house in Xianyang Shaofu, and Zheng brother outside Xianyang the next time [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] After reading a few more pictures, they were too messy and I couldn't stand them anymore, so I gave them up. The writing is really good, but the mess is also really messy. It feels like the author got so excited at the end that he forgot what he wrote at the beginning. Potatoes have obviously appeared before. When Qixing Xingxing first came back to Xianyang, potatoes were grown on a trial basis, and later they were promoted across the country. Brother Zheng Zheng also ate one raw in front of the ministers. When he brought it up later, the ministers didn't know what it was. It was clear that Chun Yuyue had been breached before [smile] [smile]

The word letter runs through the entire text, which is not a traditional and refreshing article, but it is very satisfying to see the protagonist's team grow stronger little by little and do his best for the Qin Dynasty. The author has his own unique writing style! Nice! Recommend!

So pretty! (Crawling forward in a twisting manner) (Snarling) (Ferocious) (Trying to stand up) (Running forward) (Falling to the ground) (Crawling forward in a twisting manner) (Snarling) (Ferocious) (Trying to stand up) (Running forward) (Falling to the ground) (Crawling forward in a twisted manner) (Snarling) (Ferocious) (Trying to stand up) (Running forward) (Falling to the ground) (Crawling forward in a twisted way) (Snarling) (Ferocious) (Trying to stand up) (Running forward) Super invincible and beautiful! [Sparrow Food Masterpiece] The protagonist and the First Emperor are very easy to quarrel with [Shy] The protagonist is weak and has a high IQ [Sending Hearts] Everyone in the circle is immediately attracted to it! [Laughing out loud]

It's beautiful and big. It must be free of cp.

It's pretty good, it's really easy to write about, that's right, I think this kind of novel can be used to write about infrastructure, but I have very little visibility into the infrastructure part of the article. Most of them describe the remnants of the Six Kingdoms and which disease, which disease, and what kind of disease is about to break out. Then I keep writing about these two kinds. There is not much about fencing, so I read other novels, and then there was a shortage of books. Then I came back to read it, and then read other novels.

The protagonist's life is tied to Ying Zheng's. In the beginning, he burns his own life in exchange for Ying Zheng's life. Later, after Ying Zheng knows that the protagonist is doing things for him and the people, he lets the protagonist go and do it. Ying Zheng unconditionally trusts the protagonist (actually there are conditions, that is, the protagonist is not allowed to burn his life, but the protagonist is rebellious). It is really hard to watch their machinations, but it is really very satisfying, not to mention the author updates it three times a day, I love the author to death [Like] [Love]

Xiao Fengfeng and Brother Zheng have a two-way relationship between king and minister, but there is a downside: the villain's brain is too online.

The plot is very compact, not as mindless as others

Not bad, the emotional aspect is relatively deep, but why not make paper? Why can't even the marrow-cleansing pills detoxify?

Good-looking, super good-looking, not ordinary good-looking

It sounds good, thank you to the author

It's very interesting. It's equal. Thank you for the author.

I don't often write reviews unless it's really good! OMG! ! ! How to describe it, it is really very beautiful! Step after step, it attracts you to watch and you simply can't stop! Brother Zheng and Qin Feng are really good! Very attractive!

The content is very good, similar to the cool writing genre

It's so beautiful, please give me a lot of support from the author [adoration][adoration][adoration]

One of the many novels about traveling through the Qin Dynasty that is worth reading.

Really nice to look at. If you like to read about traveling through the Qin Dynasty, I highly recommend reading this book.

Very nice! It's almost tied. The relationship between the king and his ministers is very well written. The obsession of Da Qin's novel is Fu Su. The relationship between father and son is so cool. Come on, the author. ദ്ദി◝ ⩊ ◜ .ᐟ

It's so beautiful. The content is Xing Ying, the story is interesting, the author will update it soon.

I think it's pretty good-looking, but there are some small details, such as left hand being written as right hand and so on, but overall it's still very good-looking, and I look forward to continuing to update it! PS: The small theater is beautiful, it's so much fun, hehehe There are still more than a hundred chapters to tie the knot, author, write quickly! ! ! I can't wait to see the king and his ministers working together! !

Ah! Ah! Ah! I'm just eating life and death behind the screen. It's so boring.

You can finish reading it in one sitting

It doesn't feel right. 4 Stars encouragement

So well written, so wonderful

Laughing to death, Zhang Liang Cun Cun works as a worker, and Zhang Liang is passed on every time. Then this guy is a barefoot god of war

It's pretty good. Ying Zheng writes like an emperor, unlike other writers. It's worth reading.

Awesome, awesome, awesome

It looks good, but you can't be so cruel? Believe it or not, I will send you a blade

Except for some details that are not explained clearly, everything is pretty good.

It's okay, but why write about the Industrial Revolution? This change is too big.