Something Bad Happened, the Villain Girl I Raised Turned Black

It looks good, but I felt a little uncomfortable when the first female protagonist's powers were taken away. However, within a chapter, the male protagonist volunteered to sacrifice to the sky, and the heroine's infinite powers returned and upgraded, and she was completely gravity-fed. It felt good, and there was nothing poisonous about it.

It's not bad, and I can see that there's a lot I want to express, but most people come here to watch this subject. The emotional development is still too slow, although I think it's okay. Keep holding on

It's okay, but the pace is a bit slow and the writing is white. There are some deviations in the treatment of the apprentice. It can be seen that the author did not leave any room for writing, which made the four villains (three have appeared) feel strange. For example, Xia Qianqiu should have wanted to write them as innocent and cute, but they were written like fools. For example, the reason why Shui Qianyu and Shui Qianyue fell in love with the protagonist felt sudden (there is a sense that the protagonist is coming from the sky), but the author is very happy to watch Six Thousand Daily

The novice among novices

Personally, I feel good about it. There are no poisonous points at the moment. I feel like the protagonist's death in the previous game is a little too high. Other than that, it's okay. Come on, work hard at the end! [Blowing kiss]

Come on, little boy, author [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Not bad (personal opinion)

It always feels a little bit boring, but I still support it if it can be updated normally.

As a passerby, it looks pretty good.

It seems interesting, I can still watch it

It's nice to see, but there are a little less people.

It's good-looking, but there are too few and it's not enough to see.

It looks good. I support the author and hope he can stick with it. Very good, good luck to the author

It's pretty good, but there are too few updates [smiles]

Why do you have to listen to people say that if you can't wear earplugs, you can just burst your eardrums? That is to say, it is just okay. It has been developed for so long in the front, and there is a gun in the back that can hit the extraordinary peak. When thermal weapons are useful, how can order be supervised by superpowers alone?

You call you rave reviews The author's productivity is too low, please give me more

This book is very nice.

Keep writing, Wadasi, Oh Neikar [crying] [crying]

No dude, is that right? I just saw tens of thousands of people watching it, but why did it become a few thousand people? I thought it was quite interesting.

It's quite beautiful, but there are few people.

The content is good, some places would be better with a little polish.

Be wary of arrogance and impetuosity. The article is a bit tacky, like wearing a sweater of capital, but the core is beauty. It's too white. There's nothing wrong with white spots, but it needs black to bring out the true whiteness.

The plot is compact and natural, and the writing is also on point. It's enjoyable and I'll love to read it.

Wonderful novel, I love it.

Very nice, the author will update soon

It's okay, author, cheers.

Multi-line cultivation, running around to stock up.

Okay, good logic foundation

I don't see any problems yet, and I don't feel ridiculous about using too much force.

It's okay, but there don't seem to be that many people watching. I'm a little afraid of the eunuchs.