After Breaking Off Our Engagement, I Was Imprisoned by a Yandere Witch

The style of the Lord of Mysteries + battle of wits, yandere is not the theme (at least there are few scenes now), but it is quite interesting, and it is a rare good work (with the author's own conception and imagination). Some people may come here for yandere, and the result is not as they expected, so they may give a low score. Don't worry about the author, it is a good work. From now on, it is not a dream to stabilize the future with more than nine points. You can also add a label to explain that the specific content is not all related to yandere. It may be better.

As far as the current plot is concerned, if it can continue to develop, it should have a guaranteed rating of 9. The author writes very well. The impact of the climax on the readers, the twists and turns of the foreshadowing, and the control of the rhythm are all at an excellent level. The setting of the world view is also very novel, and the plot progression is also interlocking, but the title of the book is a bit cliché.

This book is really beautiful, it reads smoothly, the story rhythm is well grasped, and the characters are quite immersive. After reading it, I was still thinking about the plot and couldn't help but want to chat with my friends. The five stars are well deserved and I recommend everyone to check it out! 👍📚😊😊

(First of all, let me state that I read this book at school with my watch and read the latest chapter, and then commented on my mobile phone after I got home.) If you see this comment, if you are hesitant, you might as well read it first. This book is really good. In terms of world view, this book is actually very large. The interstellar society of technology + magic makes this book attractive. The yandere in the title and introduction is actually not the absolute main line of this book. Strictly speaking, this is a story about a battle of wits with a yandere fiancée. The male protagonist has an obvious growth line and occupies the main plot of the book. The heroine is yandere but also has brains. She can fight wits and courage with the protagonist. I think the emotional line is good, but I hope the author can add more plots for the heroine later. I very much hope that this book will become popular, but I feel that the title and introduction of the book may not be good enough. The most important big world is only unlocked after about ten chapters, and the single snow plot in the early stage may not be enough to show the grandeur of the book. The introduction does not tell much about the subsequent world, but only mentions the yandere wife one-sidedly. I think this is one of the reasons that hinders the popularity of this book. To put it bluntly, if I hadn't loved reading yandere novels (which led me to finish reading the Snow Chapter), I might not have discovered such a good story line in the follow-up. I hope the author can optimize the introduction and title of the book. Well, that's all for the book review for now [already planted][already planted][already planted][already planted][already planted]

The plot, characterization, and world view of this book so far are pretty good. Especially for Weiwei, I really like it. If it weren't for multiple girls, I think this book would definitely be famous. The unique emotional line and grand narrative are hard not to make people like it. If Weiwei is a single girl, the audience of this book will be wider, especially in the first volume, Weiwei is described more than others. If Weiwei is written as a single female protagonist, no one will have much objection, and maybe more people will like it. (Personal thoughts, don't comment if you don't like it)

This magical book is delayed by the title and introduction. It is one of the best novels I have read recently. The conception of the world view and the character design of the protagonist have gone beyond the scope of online novels. The plot is interconnected and the character motivations are reasonable, clear and not cliché. It is definitely worth watching if you like the big world view. However, if there are a few small issues that can be corrected, this book can be improved to a higher level. First, the title and introduction of the book only capture the most superficial interesting points. Many people clicked on the title and quit after reading a few chapters without knowing what it was about. However, it is understandable to use such a clichéd title to attract traffic. Second, the protagonist's system is not worthy of the quality of this book. If there is no system promotion or a different form, the book can have a higher limit. Third, the character names are a bit perfunctory and conflict with the world view. The heroine's name is more Western-style, while the other names are more Chinese-style. You can consider changing them to more neutral names. Fourth, there are some small details that are more dramatic, such as the Martian text used by the male protagonist to write his diary; the shaping of the era is a bit confusing. The igloo part looks like a Western fantasy, and it is shaped like a western American town when he first arrived in Green Tree City, and then it looked like a modern city, and the world view is not connected enough; the male protagonist ate black bread when he first arrived home, while the neighbors ate instant noodles and roast goose, which is quite fragmented. What I have seen so far, mainly because of the world view and the character of the male protagonist, makes me want to comment. If you can avoid the monster-fighting and upgrading in other novels in the later stage, this book will definitely become a god. After the 30th chapter, the texture obviously dropped. I wanted to write a novel about the setting, but the writing was not strong enough. It didn't have the feeling of pressing forward step by step in the first 29 chapters, and it became an ordinary supernatural novel. If the first 26 snowy chapters were taken separately and written into a short story, they would definitely be a god.

It's interesting, the battle of wits looks pretty good, and the overall world view is like magic + the future, which is quite novel.

Overall, this book is not an orthodox yandere romance novel🤦, but it is a very good Western fantasy. The author's writing skills are quite strong, and he is definitely not a new author. The plot advances smoothly, but it has nothing to do with the name. It has nothing to do with the name, which is probably the biggest reason for the low rating of this book. I didn't think about reading this before I came in. I suggest changing the name. I think most people are like this. The writing is actually very good😄

I go, this is an interesting book. It has a huge world view, a good setting, the plot is interlocking, the characters are vivid, there is a story, and there is a battle of wits. It is top-notch. It is definitely top-notch in Tomato. Please read more.

Will the protagonist finally resolve the misunderstanding with Weiwei and get together?