Siheyuan: He Yuzhu and His Sister's Happy Life

It's not bad, the rhythm is also very good, but you have to write slowly. It's okay if you have a low rating in the past. You can always trust the readers, but the number of words is too few. Come on.

Silly Zhu, a cook in the Siheyuan, is on the verge of becoming an immortal in both martial arts and medicine. He also wants to go to college. After a trip to Baoding and returning to Beijing, his personality has changed a lot. Why has no one reported him as an enemy agent? It is said that the anti-enemy agents were very powerful at that time. If your poop was different from others, you would be reported...

The language is smooth and easy to read, the plot development is reasonable, and the small details are a bit flawed but they don't hide Jin Yu.

It's well organized and doesn't procrastinate. It's quite exciting.

The writing is smooth, the plot is not sluggish, and there are no faults except that the chef level is wrong.

Thank you readers for your corrections and readings. Thank you very much. I want to write this book about an era and a story in my heart. The hostility is not very big, it develops slowly. I also hope to discuss and communicate with all readers and friends. If you don't like this genre, you can also read "Siheyuan: I Fight from Siheyuan to Xiangjiang" which I just wrote just for fun.

True and objective, with multi-dimensional description and clear structure, it will enrich and help more book lovers.

Not bad, not bad, very cool! Keep up the good work! 👍👍👍

Not bad, the writing is very real

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