Leziren's MC Grocery Store

A little awkward, but I can watch it Another point is that the protagonist seems to be very cool but the plot is very draggy. I know it's foreshadowing but it's really unnecessary. Follow-up review: I really can't stand it anymore. It took nearly ten chapters to play the Ghost King alone (facing the clearing phase, not counting other related plots). The content of several chapters has been in the cycle of "no cruel words and cheap taunts" - "the protagonist does not know why he pretends to be cool" - "no cruel tricks" - "no cruel words and cheap taunts". It's not about whether your protagonist can do it or not, but can you just do it more simply? I don't know what I'm pretending to be, am I embarrassed or not?

It's said to be a grocery store, but there aren't many customers coming to buy anything. Most of the chapters are about fun people looking for fun or causing trouble.

No one puts me first. What I've seen so far is pretty good (⸝⸝ɞ̴̶̷ ·̮ ‹⸝⸝ᐡ) ⟡.· Pretty good, at least I think

I've read a few chapters and I think it's quite interesting. It's too procrastinating, and the protagonist talks too much nonsense. I just saw a guy who has no strength and wants to pretend to be B but doesn't know how to pretend to be B. He pretends to be B. All the big things have to wait for him to finish talking nonsense.

A pretty and all-you-can-eat casual article

The butterfly ninja met the black-hearted Ben, and his original character became Hakimi, a hard-working worker who loves to have fun. Many heroines (✗) Many cows and horses (✓) All working At present, the so-called female protagonists are all working, and the male protagonists are always helping. The one who helps the most may be the female protagonists. So the one who works neatly and the male protagonist helps the most is probably the female protagonist. He Zhen?

It's so beautiful, man, please add another chapter

4 Stars for encouragement, almost meaningless.

The story is good, but the opening of the male protagonist's harem in the later stages is a bit abrupt. The next book will be more emotionally overwrought and more natural. Check in after reading.

I just like this style

My eyes lit up, very good MC text

So far, everything seems to be fine. Some comments say that the rhythm is an issue. I think it's fine.

When to go to the dark bullet to save the little loli, si male protagonist [laughing]