In the World of Cultivating Immortals, I Am Really Not a Bad Woman

Let me talk about my current feelings of reading this novel, mainly two points. The first point is that Xiao Huohuo felt a bit upstaged in the early stage. The second point is that the author added a villain system to make the protagonist become a behind-the-scenes + villain. The audience hopes to see the battle of wits and courage between the protagonist and various human spirits, especially the thousand-year-old spirit Xiao Huohuo. However, it seems very frustrating at the moment, because the protagonist himself is a sociopath, a college student, and has insufficient interpersonal experience. In addition, the author deliberately shapes and guides, giving people the feeling that the world is falling apart every moment. He cannot control himself and is exposed again, which makes the reader feel uncomfortable. I guess the author wants to create a growing villain protagonist, which is fine. However, in a fast-paced place like Tomato, it is easy to persuade people to quit in the early stage. As for other characters, the creation is quite successful, and the narrative is okay. The author should be able to handle the villain element and the protagonist well. He also hopes that the protagonist will grow up faster. At the moment, I only saw the protagonist running away and haven't read it yet. I will make an evaluation after I taste it.

The gradual introduction of information about the worldview and characters is very smooth, and there is neither an explosion of information nor a lack of interest. The character's behavior is logical and his IQ is online. The system is not mechanical either. After leaving the sect, the main plot line has a slightly weaker presence. Overall, the writing is very good, keep it up!

It's pretty, but it's a little too slow to heat up.

The writing is quite good, but why is the traffic so poor? I haven't seen a few comments.

Not bad, worth a look

It's okay, although it's a bit slow. Come on, it'll be better.

The pace is indeed slow, and it is indeed different from the regular battles and battles of cultivating immortals. Excellent work.

The quality is very good, I hope it won't stop updating [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Yes, the character has brains and the quality is good It smells a bit like mysterious acting. Is the author a fan of mysterious characters? Look at the name

Why is the traffic of this book so low?

It's quite interesting, but it would be nice if AI could not be used to do some of the descriptions. I just don't like the repetitive descriptions of AI. The viewing experience is quite good, but it's uncomfortable to listen to it repeatedly. The plot itself is fine, the protagonist is afraid of society and is forced to be exposed. The protagonist is from another person's perspective, which is very interesting (laughs) Beautiful!

Looks quite comfortable

It's pretty good, 76 pictures of women.

Looks quite comfortable

It's really good

Keep up the good work, author

Slow-burning has the advantage of slow-burning. It feels like traveling with the protagonist, which is really good-looking. [Eat melon]

It was a bit uncomfortable to watch the first part, but I didn't watch the middle part, but it shouldn't be too bad.

I feel that the writing is quite good. I didn't talk about love and hate from the beginning, but tried hard to write the characters as a foreshadowing. I feel that the author is careful.

The world view is quite large, and the details are good. It is very suitable for people who are just starting to read novels.

I like the writing style, the storytelling pace is pretty good, and the protagonist is quite cute.

The author writes well and the plot is interesting