[Slow Burn (Probably)] [Nontraditional Cultivation] [Gender Transformation] [Behind the Scenes] [Just Here for the Fun of It ()] [Sorry, My Writing Isn't Great] [Includes a Transformation]
Xia Qingfeng opened his eyes and discovered that he had transmigrated into a cultivation world. But before he could celebrate, he realized that not only was he a good-for-nothing, he had also been bound to a villain System.
Fortunately, the System gave him two peerless legacies from the start. They didn't require any aptitude, either. All he had to do was play a role, apparently.
But what do you mean, “To master this art, you must first castrate yourself”?
That can't be right.
System: It's fine. You can actually practice it without castrating yourself.
Xia Qingfeng: For real?
System: Because once you finish, you'll change sex directly.
Xia Qingfeng: Huh?
…
Years later, Xia Qingfeng stood atop the myriad heavens, watching the Chosen Ones who were frantically searching for him. The corner of his mouth twitched.
“System, do you think maybe I shouldn't have... ahem, targeted them so much back then?”
“You were the one who chose to be the villainess pulling the strings from behind the scenes, playing the whole ‘frenemies’ and ‘dead first love’ game.”
“Come on, why do you think I did all that?”
A host of terrifying presences descended all at once. “We found you.”
Xia Qingfeng turned stiffly, only to find everyone there.
“Listen, you’ve got the wrong person. Would you believe me if I said that...”
“Heh. What do you think?”
“Kwa! I’m really not a villainess!”
Let me talk about my current feelings of reading this novel, mainly two points. The first point is that Xiao Huohuo felt a bit upstaged in the early stage. The second point is that the author added a villain system to make the protagonist become a behind-the-scenes + villain. The audience hopes to see the battle of wits and courage between the protagonist and various human spirits, especially the thousand-year-old spirit Xiao Huohuo. However, it seems very frustrating at the moment, because the protagonist himself is a sociopath, a college student, and has insufficient interpersonal experience. In addition, the author deliberately shapes and guides, giving people the feeling that the world is falling apart every moment. He cannot control himself and is exposed again, which makes the reader feel uncomfortable. I guess the author wants to create a growing villain protagonist, which is fine. However, in a fast-paced place like Tomato, it is easy to persuade people to quit in the early stage. As for other characters, the creation is quite successful, and the narrative is okay. The author should be able to handle the villain element and the protagonist well. He also hopes that the protagonist will grow up faster. At the moment, I only saw the protagonist running away and haven't read it yet. I will make an evaluation after I taste it.
The gradual introduction of information about the world view and characters is very smooth, and there is neither an explosion of information nor a lack of interest. The character's behavior is logical and his IQ is online. The system is not mechanical either. After leaving the sect, the main plot line has a slightly weaker presence. Overall, the writing is very good, keep it up!
The writing is quite good, but why is the traffic so poor? I haven't seen a few comments.
Yes, the character has brains and the quality is good It smells a bit like mysterious acting. Is the author a fan of mysterious characters? Look at the name
The pace is indeed slow, and it is indeed different from the regular battles and battles of cultivating immortals. Excellent work.
It's okay, although it's a bit slow. Come on, it'll be better.
The quality is very good, I hope it won't stop updating [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]
Not bad, worth a look
It's pretty, but it's a little too slow to heat up.
Why is the traffic of this book so low?