Pirates: Being Chased by the Five Old Stars at the Beginning

I will always love the cold and charming protagonist. . . . It's so rare to support the cold-faced cuteness to ruthlessly rule the world, not to be a pirate or a navy, but to be a revolutionary army! The plot is also well written. I really enjoyed the story of a woman pretending to be Saab's wife. There is no ambiguity in this kind of drama. Readers will really look for candy. I pray that the next plot will be as good as that🙏🙏

I finally found a book called "One Piece". The author must keep writing it. I live by you. So who is the CP? Although I'm not familiar with Ace, Saboa, Luffy, and Zoro Sanji, I'm not incapable. If it doesn't work, I'll leave the main plot ambiguous. All in, everyone will write a few chapters. Come on, I believe you can do it, come on! ! !

This book is really good. I actually read it all night. The cold-faced cuteness is really amazing [when the cold-faced cuteness is normal: ᗜ - ᗜ When you are cold-faced, cute and shy:,,ᗜ - ᗜ,, When the cold-faced cuteness is happy: ᗜ ᴗ ᗜ When the cold face is unhappy: ᗜ ‸ ᗜ When the cold face is angry: ᗜ - ᗜ When the cold-faced cuteness breaks out: (╯--)╯╧╧ When the cold-faced cute fell asleep: ᶻz ₍ _ _ ₎ When you act cute with a cold face: ᗜ ᗜ When the cold-faced cuteness is praised and secretly feels happy: (ᗜ _ ᗜ) ➡ (ᗜ ֊ ᗜ)] Big reminder, the child is hungry, the child needs to eat [crying][crying][crying]

So far, good looking! ! The cold-faced cuteness is the best, and I will fall into the cold-faced cuteness all my life. This kind of gentle boy who looks like a noodle but has great emotional fluctuations on the inside, who is cold on the outside but hot on the inside, is very rational when he encounters an enemy, and has a character that takes action when it's time to take action. What a great character! ! She also has a super beautiful and powerful background, but now Xia Wei has so many bonds and it's great to have so much happiness. It can be seen that there should be an original story line. The story is well written, there are no flaws, the logic is quite smooth, and the writing style is also very delicate. Only the awakening of the wings was a bit abrupt without any foreshadowing. There is also very little written about the protagonist's background (before and after the story). Is it a foreshadowing that will be discussed later? Do the protagonist's abilities exist in the original work? I haven't read the original work.

It looks good, the protagonist is so cute, and the brotherhood lasts a lifetime. Can it be cpp-free? I feel like I and ASL are all family members now. It's strange to develop into love, and other characters don't feel like they can develop emotional dramas. Isn't it possible to focus on their careers? Generally speaking, there is no big problem. I really like the long hair setting of the protagonist. The relationship between the Revolutionary Army family is also very good, and the emotional scenes are very delicately written. What I am most concerned about right now is the male protagonist's CP problem and the secret of the protagonist's eyes.

So pretty🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It is the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It is so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘It is God, it is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I am The tango danced on the balcony on the 20th floor😮 made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I couldn't stop crying. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression😋 is an alarm clock for vegetative people😨It's so cute that tears flowed from the corners of my mouth and flooded into the Qiantang River😈It was so beautiful🥰It's God, my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes me happy

The plot and characters are very novel, and the writing is also very good. It is a rare book in which the protagonist joins the revolutionary army. The only problem is that the protagonist is too unconditionally devoted to Luffy and cares about him all the time. On several occasions, Luffy ignored his own safety and even missed the attack because he was distracted by hearing Luffy's name. On the archipelago, the protagonist was so seriously injured that he had to block the death crisis for Luffy. As a result, Luffy's grief and anger didn't seem to be as sad as when his friends were taken away. In short, although the author explained the reason, I still feel sad when I see this kind of plot.

[Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] It's very beautiful. Sabo is fine and has no amnesia at present. Ace is already a little wary when chasing Blackbeard. I just don't know if he will be caught. I think he will. After all, the war is still indispensable. I hope Ace and Whitebeard can survive this time [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] The two older brothers are still very controlling, but having a stable and strong younger brother doubles the control. They are stable and feel at ease [full] [full] [full] I hope the four brothers will post more

🥺Men are menstruating when they see menstruation🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It is the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It is so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘He is God and I The roses illuminated my dark life and gave meaning to my world😊I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I couldn't stop crying. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water, the nemesis of depression 😋 It is the alarm clock of vegetative people 😨 So cute that tears flowed out of the corners of the mouth and flooded the Qiantang River 😈 So beautiful 🥰 God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor 😎 It made me realize that God does exist, I was so good that I shed tears, and the world no longer lacks water 😭

A very delicious book! The four brothers Xia Wei and Luffy get along so lovingly, it makes me feel soft! When I grow up, Xia Wei also makes me laugh, but I don't know who his CP is, hahahaha, look forward to it~

I'm the number one cold-faced cute person in the world! Xavier is number one in the world! The plot is also very delicious [get it] I feel like Xia Wei and Saab are quite close to each other. I hope the CP is Saab [laughing][laughing]

Baby Xavier is totally a succubus, both on the outside and on the inside. She is a cold beauty who is extremely protective of her shortcomings. She is simply a representative of beauty and strength, and I can't get enough of her. Who knew that my three favorite characters, Soda, Luo, and Ace, were played by me just like that? It knocked me to death😘

Super great, but too short, Xia Wei is so beautiful, super charming, the four brothers are top-notch delicious [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

Let me go! Good looking! ! ! Cold-faced cute Saigao [crying] Author's mark cp not confirmed I have been eating everywhere (actually I feel a little bit of a heartthrob, just give it to me and feel good) 😋 It's delicious, it's high, it's great, everyone takes a bite 😋 (except the elders) Who knows... I have very few teachers who write this kind of writing... I just look forward to someone opening the book every day... It's so good [crying] It's so good [crying]

Great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great x100861001010000, Green Algae Head and Xia Wei are so good. , Luo and Xia Wei are also very happy, the cold-faced baby Xia is so cute😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗

I like it, I like it, please read it well, boss, please don't stop updating it, it's really good, several books I've been following have been discontinued, so come on, boss, I want to see the day it ends. I will definitely say goodbye to the boss! That would be the perfect ending!

I dropped Feng Feng, it's so pretty🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱It's so handsome😘It's God, it's my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run away I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮 It made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I couldn't stop crying. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression😋 is an alarm clock for vegetative people😨It was so cute that tears flowed from the corners of my mouth and flooded into the Qiantang River. It was so good. It was so cute🥰 It is God who is my rose, which illuminates my dark life.

It looks good, it looks good, it's updated, updated, updated, please don't be fooled! CP actually likes Ace more. The interaction between Xia Wei and Ace at the white regiment + revolutionary army base really struck a chord with me. . You guys are too cute! ! But it also supports the main text without cp and the extra chapter [send heart]

Very good, very good Pirates II [thinking][thinking][thinking][laughing][laughing] I haven't finished reading it yet, but I want to ask the author, will you definitely make up for Ace's death? [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Really pretty! (´▽｀)ノ♪ It makes me feel good. I have read the original work It's been a long time, but I remember liking One Piece very much, and now I like Xavier very much! ! I really think the author's character creation is very good, very good I will always support this book (´▽｀)ノ♪ Wuwuwu, teacher, why aren't your books popular? [Crazy] The second follow-up review is great! Woohoo, why are you so beautiful? Ah! [Crying] [Almost crying] Teacher, why are your scores so low?

The writing is really good, the characters and plots are very coherent, and there are no magic changes. Then Xia Wei's cold-faced cuteness is really adorable. It's super, super good-looking. Don't stop updating it. I will definitely catch up to the end.

It's hard to find a fanfic on Yangshizi that is well written and has non-OOC characters. Still a pirate. It took two days to tie it. My heart hurts when I think about the possibility of torture later. There are so many flags. The heartthrob baby protagonist is so sweet [lick screen]

Oh my god, it's so good. It's not following Luffy's old routine (nothing else, I also like to read it, but there are more of this type), and it's not going to the Navy, but to the Revolutionary Army. Sabo doesn't have amnesia, and the plot is very coherent. It's a very good article. I hope it can be updated faster. I can't wait to see the ending. I hope it will be updated every day. A kind-hearted author will definitely agree to this request, right? [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's rare to come across a Pirates fanfic with both plot and emotional lines online. Although the other male protagonist has not yet been confirmed, the direction of the story itself is enough to make people update every day. The character descriptions are very consistent with the original work, and the tone of each character is well described without any sense of inconsistency. The pace is also comfortable and not draggy. Well, anyway, the teacher wrote it very well.

It's really delicious. I beg you, the teacher must finish it. After August 22, I have to go back to school to report. I'm just waiting to get the certificate. When I come back in September, I have to watch [cry][cry][cry][cry]

Why haven't you rated it yet? After reading the latest update, I immediately came over and gave you a good review. It's so nice🥺

It's very interesting to watch. I'm looking forward to the next development. I hope there will be a perfect ending. I watched more than 1,100 episodes of One Piece a long time ago. I still like this setting very much. No matter fan or otherwise. This is a fantasy world, but there are too many regrets. I hope Xia Wei can bring his own miracle

Dear author, can you all? [Blow a kiss] I can't bear to leave my left and right hands!

Very nice! Looking forward to all the male protagonists coming in!

So far so good