After Passing Through the Male Channel, He Stole the Harem of the Male Protagonist Long Aotian.

I read it all night, and it's now 5.03 In the morning. It's very interesting and enjoyable. I just wonder when Song Yao will be able to return to her arrogant ways (if her own thoughts are not like this, just follow her thoughts) and want to kill them all. The author's words are also very precise, and the shaping is also very full. I can feel her charm now, and I feel like I have a crush on her. I really like her charisma, she is so charming, and her short words attract her deeply. For now, the overall cold color is relatively plump, so plump that I want to have more words to describe it. There are also two remaining female immortal cultivators who are also attracted to them. I like you very much, senior sister. I hope to see more multi-faceted and multi-angle women in this article. The author's article is great, and the protagonists are also great. They are all great. I am very happy to see this article. I like it. There may be a few flaws, but the flaws are not hidden. That Long Aotian man is just a stupid pig. When will he be offline?

The heroine is pure and charming, and her heart is crazy for the heroine. (Seeing now, I feel that there are a lot of contradictions and misunderstandings among all parties. The confidence of the little male supporting character is annoying. I look forward to the day when the heroine loses her vest)

Madam, we like you! ! (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡The plot and the portrayal of the heroine are both great. The other characters also have their own characteristics, and the CP is also pretty good, but can we not have too intimate plots? . . I was really unnice when my first kiss was rejected. Isn't he worthy? Yao Yao is still alone and beautiful, no one can get her! ! Looking forward to the day when the heroine saves the day with her true identity, she is so handsome (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ* Isn't that Xie's life a little too good? The biggest sticking points are his excessively over-the-top behavior and the coercion of the heroine. It was quite annoying at the beginning, but later on when I saw him, I felt a little aggrieved and couldn't stand it ≥≤I'm still worried about his words and deeds to this day. No, no, no, the more I think about it, the angrier I get. Can the heroine resist? Can you give him a few moments? As soon as I wrote about their thread, madam, you seemed to have been trolled... It produced some words that were hard to swallow, and the part about committing suicide was even more ridiculous. I was so angry when I read it. The rest of the writing is quite good, I hope this major shortcoming will be eliminated soon. I'm reluctant to give it three stars, so I'll give it four stars first. I hope my wife can change it after seeing it. If there is another plot like this later, I will give it a low score and run away [almost crying] [almost crying]

It's quite good-looking. I don't have any bad points. I hope the heroine can be uniquely beautiful. If there is no cp, there will be no cp. Complementary sentence: Don't be partial to Xie Zhou

It's very good-looking. It breaks away from the traditional Xianxia character structure. The female characters in it are not the traditional jealous, scheming, sour and mean type. Each female character is rich, lovely and vivid. I really like this method, it makes me feel comfortable. The overall writing is very cheerful, and the protagonist's character conception can indeed be called a genius, because her own personality characteristics are well shaped. What I feel most deeply about is the transparency of genius mentioned by the saint Qiuqiu. Just like the heroine, she is very transparent, so she can achieve such a genius that no one else can catch up with.

I originally wanted to give it 4 stars, because the male protagonist Long Aotian is so charming😄 Then I read the last few chapters, but the plot of the new chapters was a bit too lame (but it got better afterward) and it made me really heartbroken😭😭 Then I felt really sad when the heroine was injured in the middle. It hurts, but this emotional line is so awesome and exciting😋The heroine really poked me in the face❤️Who doesn't want to become the heroine's sworn enemy after watching this? My favorite is Ming Ran and Ning Zhou, they are super cute🥺. The author is very good at describing the characters, they are very three-dimensional.

The content so far is very exciting and there are no surprises. I didn't expect the horse to fall so easily, without dragging, and the rhythm was quite tight. The characterization is very interesting, even Long Aotian, who I hate the most, is somewhat cute. The only thing I regret is that I started reading this book before it was finished. When will the author make a special update... [Please update]

It's pretty good to watch, the plot is quite interesting, but when will we see the heroine fall off her horse [crying] Can there be more highlights for the female protagonist... Isn't this a female video article?

This is the female narrative I want on Douyin! Although she is charming, she is not surrounded and competed by men, nor is she intertwined with desire, but the sincerity and warmth of people wrap up and shape the heroine like a winter quilt. At the same time, she is also a genius setting, with strength and temperament. I really fell in love with Song Yao. Like to watch!

The plot is very special and eye-catching. I personally like this kind of text very much. Just "I don't like the part where Xie Zhouqiang kissed me a little" felt uncomfortable, but most of the plot is very interesting and the author's text is very good!

Good-looking books really come out of comparison. I just read a book about the awakening of a heroine who was tortured to the extreme because of body abuse, ah! Come quickly and wash your eyes. It is also the name of the ancient heroine Abb, which shocked my young heart. This book is still good-looking, and no one can make the heroine feel uncomfortable. All in all, a strong female character must be a strong female character. [Love][love][love]

Very complicated. The author's writing style is very good, the plot development is not delayed, the heroine is energetic and a bit romantic, and I feel good when I see everyone falling for the heroine. Until Xie stopped pretending. The language was so explicit that it felt personally obscene. I stopped laughing all of a sudden. In particular, the heroine will reflect on whether she has brought up the child badly, which makes her feel even more aggrieved. I look forward to the appearance of the master and senior brother in the future, and hope that there will be no more of that type.

The real person comment is not a porn star, it is very good-looking. Where can I find a heroine with such a high level of cultivation who can get into trouble and be loved by everyone? The heroine's character is so cute. There is currently no supporting character who is more charming than the protagonist, which shows everything. I like this nonsense.

Very pretty! I think this subject matter is still very novel, the plot is not procrastinating, and it always makes me laugh inexplicably. I really like the protagonist, and the characterization is beginning to take shape. I feel like I'm already enjoying it not long after I started! I will support the author greatly, please don't stop updating! (Get a front row comment, hehehehe)

After reading more than fifty chapters, I will comment again. I followed it from the comic series. So far, I don't think there is anything surprising about it. The heroine is like a big boss returning to the novice village. Several direct disciples seem to have recognized the heroine (? I don't know how. The writing is smooth and not offensive to read. The female characters are very cute. They seem a bit silly because they are too honest. The rating is a bit low. I personally think it can be rated above 9.2. Currently tied with 197 There are some skipped points in the middle, such as the sinister heroine in a certain city who goes to save people, etc. It feels a bit boring, but there is nothing else. The senior brothers and sisters are all yandere types, right? Girls are insensitive to feelings. Maybe they just want to live in seclusion and be indifferent and be ordinary people, so they don't want to respond to strong emotions (? Although she wants to be an ordinary person, in general, the things the heroine does are still extraordinary. Basically, she exposes her trump card to save people, and then her flaws are discovered by a few relatives. There is also an unknown settlement reward given by this system, which appeared at the beginning. Not only was the cultivation level reduced by one soul after being sealed, but the body also became weaker. The reward was not obvious. The heroine did work hard. What I don't quite understand is why several of the direct disciples can recognize it so quickly. The heroine originally used the golden spirit root, but now uses the wood spirit root. Don't a few people feel that it is inconsistent? A person who has been dead for more than half a year suddenly appears in front of him with a changed body and appearance. If you can definitely confirm that she is the heroine just based on her oral habits and behavior, then your ability to accept it is quite strong.

It's very interesting, but don't keep describing the heroine as beautiful... I think this character is already very good... There is no need to be beautiful and stunning. Hahahaha. I hope that one day female videos will have heartthrobs who can break away from their looks~ It is still worth watching

It's really good-looking, and the main character is so sultry that readers don't even realize it, and it's easy for readers to fall in love with it. It's just that the content is too short and not enough to read. I haven't written many book reviews, but this one feels like a loss if I don't.

It looks good, his dad praised it! The writing is no slouch, and the heroine, a dashing young man, is full of energy! !

It's so good, and the more I read it, the more I get addicted to it. It's the best serial I've followed recently. The author has avoided being partial to nuns and having ambiguous behaviors. You can see from the introduction that this is a non-CP article with many people making single arrows. If you can continue to read it, it is really refreshing and cute to see the nuns. Moreover, this is a micro nun (the earthly version). This degree is very good and delicious. I don't think it is called abuse of women. . . It's really a pity to get a low score because of this lightning protection. The heroine is a sickly death escape character. There are many legends about her spread in the world. She also likes to verbally tease people around her and owes a lot of romantic debts. This setting is quite interesting. Moreover, the falling of the horse is also very fast and smooth, and there will be no frustrating plot of unrecognizability. It can also be seen later that everyone likes the heroine. I think this book is considered a very good novel on Tomato. I hope the author doesn't finish it badly [sending my heart]

I like it. The heroine is very juvenile. She always feels that she does bad things but she is actually very chivalrous. She is very cute. I like to watch some non-CP heartthrobs. Yao really has a charming personality.

Xia's books are so beautiful. I love reading this kind of ambiguous and tumultuous story. The writing is so good! Just enter with caution if the laugh point is low. You will laugh like crocodile tears. Zhu Xia's book is becoming more and more popular🔥~

It's been a long time since I've had such a fun time reading an article, I really read it all in one go. I really like the heroine, she is a wanton and flamboyant young man. The wording is very comfortable (female: boy, girl) (male: boy, boy). There is no RN word,

It's so delicious 😋 Can you understand that I tied the 200 chapters in one day? I feel so good watching it. The image of the heroine is very good and there is no cp in the text. I'll comment on whatever I want. It's just that the original male protagonist seems to be a bit epileptic, but it doesn't affect the viewing. Just wash it off. What should I say? I feel like the rest of the writing is a bit boring and I have no desire to read on.

The heroine of this book reminded me of Crayon Shin-chan. He looks careless and careless all day long, making jokes and looking heartless. But all the meticulous consideration is quietly hidden in every word and action. She uses cynicism as a shell, hiding her sensitivity, understanding and softness under her playful smile. Such a person is always particularly distressing, and no one can refuse to like her. Liveliness is her protective color. Only when she is alone and quiet can her hidden emotions be seen.

It smells so good, hehe, it smells so good, it's a paradise for omnivores, take one big bite, it tastes right, sizzle, sizzle, sizzle It would be nice if the protagonist's charm could be highlighted a little more I love to read heart-throb stories. The characters are crazy about love, flirting, and showing off their magical powers and falling under the protagonist's skirt. But those are the stories where the protagonist doesn't love any of them and is extremely provocative. If you have any similar stories, please recommend them to me! If you can marry, support the protagonist to marry eight! Seven days a week, weekends off! Not doing anything, just admiring the beauty of each palace concubine. They are all very fragrant. (By the way, when did Senior Brother meet Song Yao? Hehe, I want to see Senior Brother Qingchun dance for love again! Author update soon!

Let me tell you a few points. It's similar to what most comments say. The advantage is that the heroine is handsome and sultry, and she is indeed a very good baby. There are two shortcomings. One is that the fourth junior brother forcibly kisses the heroine is very inexplicable. The other is that the story becomes more and more frustrating later on...

It's really beautiful! The heroine is so captivating that she is alluring but doesn't realize it. She made me laugh so hard that I felt like I was being taken advantage of by the heroine! The heroine is very strong, the characters are well-developed, each woman's personality is different, the plot is novel and not procrastinating, and the writing is also very good. I look forward to the time when the heroine loses her vest [shy]

But it's really good. Although I haven't finished reading it yet, I can only say that the character of our heroine's baby is very distinctive. I like this kind of character very much. It's the kind that is a bit bad but actually kind (I'm not very good at describing it). And every supporting character in it has a very good character. I like them all. It's not like in other novels where there are a bunch of vicious female supporting characters who target the heroine and wrongly accuse the heroine. On the contrary, everyone is very good. The author's words and writing style are also very good. I feel like it completely captures the high-spiritedness of those teenagers. I especially like [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss] and baby Yao Yao is the pick-up king, hehehehe, but it's not surprising because I like it too. Anyway, I really recommend you to take a look [Shy]

I read this article in Hongguo Manga. It was very, very good in the early stage, and Invincible Explosion was very good, because I was not interested in immortality stories before, but after reading this book, I fell in love with immortality stories, and I haven't found a replacement yet. The later period was just so so. I don't know if it's because of the serialization or what. It's just a little boring. I'm pretty good at persisting until now. Then it's just a bit too popular. This is also the first time I've seen a real heartthrob novel. , Actually I think there could be more friendship and less love, but this article seems to be very [petrified][petrified][petrified] towards the heroine. And I like Zhu Zhao as a supporting character. She will not do anything that goes against the rules, unlike the fourth junior brother and fifth junior sister.

Wow, the heroine is like a succubus. She is very attractive just to show off her innocence. I think the plot is also very interesting. The painting style is very funny. I couldn't stop laughing. [Laugh] [laugh] Everyone is attracted to the heroine. His/their interactions are also very clever. The main reason is that they are very fond of the heroine [shy] and don't abuse the heroine. The heroine is also talented in cultivating immortals. It's just right. If you like it, hurry up [like]