Transformed into a Cold Fairy: Am I Being Attacked by the Heroine?

Don't tell me, don't tell me. The author's text is very good, and the fighting aspect is not as complicated as other novels. People can read it slowly, and it is not piled up with boring words all the time. Although it is a bit literary, it is not heavy. There are just a lot of female colleagues around the protagonist. I am afraid that the original male protagonist will have his legs broken as soon as he comes to find trouble. Children The story becomes more and more literary and youthful in the future, and the protagonist's thinking is directly localized. He has no special characteristics and relies solely on a few supporting characters to vie for prominence and jealousy.

I hope the protagonist is a succubus. Can she be more charming? There are only two people who are interested in her now, and I feel that Lu Xueqing is a bit sudden. I have been indifferent before, but I suddenly feel that the protagonist is good-looking, and the storyline is so simple.

I'm currently on chapter 126 and would like to comment on it so far. First of all, it's too bland. The protagonist's experience, personality, thinking, fighting and even training, everything is too light. The author did not hesitate to use the richest and most gorgeous words to complete this work, but instead ignored the proportion. The protagonist's training is in the minority, and the combat is even more in the minority, almost brushing off. The contradictory points gradually become apparent. The protagonist cultivates the Wuqing Dao, so in theory, her training, her battles, or the story of the unit should be seen from her perspective. But in fact this is not the case. The focus is on those people who know it is an iceberg but are still like moths flying into the flame. They disturb the protagonist without authorization, approach the protagonist without authorization, and after the protagonist accepts and pampers them, he becomes greedy and wants more. And because the protagonist has practiced ruthless Taoism and is born with Taoism, he has no sorrow or joy. When I read these emotional plots, I just feel that "these people have no good intentions and are always disturbing the protagonist's Taoist heart and hindering the protagonist's path of cultivation." These people's greed is never-ending, and they want to ask for more when they get a little, but why? They knew the protagonist's character, so why did they have to force her? I didn't find the combat enjoyable, I couldn't see the deeper content in the plot, and I found it emotionally frustrating. The feeling of being kidnapped by morality made me quite uncomfortable. Maybe some readers like to read this kind of content, and maybe this is what the author wants to write. But I can't represent anyone, I can only represent myself. So, this is all my reviews up to Chapter 126. I will continue to catch up to the latest chapter, and I will talk about the rest of the content later. That's it.

After reading Chapter 23, it's perfect and delicious. The author's writing is profound and the details are so well controlled that I have nothing to say. The sour feeling of not being able to love is vividly displayed in every word. There is no poisonous point so far. The character of the protagonist is very good. It is the kind of taste of a male protagonist who is an iceberg heroine. It is delicious! The characters of the other two female protagonists are also very good. The only drawback is that the male protagonist is now a female protagonist. She has a fairy-like appearance and high talent, but she was ridiculed twice by passers-by. I think this plot should have a bit of a dog-licking attribute in it. Even if it doesn't, it shouldn't be ridiculed. After seeing more than 150 chapters, the author is deliberately trying to push the boundaries. The ice attribute Tianlinggen has only reached the late stage of foundation building in more than ten years. I won't talk about it. It has some shortcomings but not big, but let me ask you. When the protagonist broke through to Foundation Establishment, Senior Sister Lu was only at the ninth level of Qi Refining. As a result, she was already in the middle stage of Foundation Establishment, and the protagonist was still in the middle stage of Foundation Establishment. Has my talent, which is rare in a century, reached this level? Moreover, the whole text is basically about the emotional line, and I can no longer distinguish the priority. The main focus is a love novel set in the world of immortality...

It's not uncomfortable to follow through, but I don't feel that great. I haven't seen the binding in the introduction yet, and it's a little uncomfortable for me now that the protagonist is in love. I think emotions have a huge impact on the consciousness and soul. If the protagonist has emotions, it is no less than being taken away from me. In addition, doesn't Senior Sister Lu know the protagonist's skills? She thinks about everything except the protagonist's path.

. The protagonist has a strong sense of death. The way to practice the Wuqing Dao is like this. Both men and women are trying to get together. If you are lucky enough to travel to the world of immortality in the future and have trouble finding a Taoist partner, you can try to switch to the Wuqing Dao. I think a modern soul has too strong a sense of death for some reason, and the author Wen Qing is a bit seriously ill, but everything else is fine.

I'm not very good at writing reviews. I can only say that the first part is good, very novel, and it belongs to the category of light writing. It doesn't have a lot of emotional exchanges. It's not the kind of emotion that comes quickly, but rather the kind that flows slowly. Later, I feel a little tired of writing. I recommend reading it every few days. I can only say that the further I go, the more I can't stand it. It's not that the plot is bad or anything, but the writing is just like what people say about literary youth. It doesn't have much of a sense of life. I have no interest in reading it anymore. I can only say that there is room for improvement.

Ye Bai CP, I am totally biased towards Ye Bao. Who can not be so careful and heart-warming for your dog? I hope there will be more interactions between Ye Bai and Ye Bao.

You will see the protracted ambiguous pull between the mutes - this is how immortal cultivators look like Tea maid of the cool fairy

It's good. I haven't seen such a good-looking Lily article in 🍅 for a long time. The story is daily and bland, and there are not so many fights and killings in the world of cultivation. One thing I don't think is good is that the protagonist is too cold. Although I know it is because of cultivation, I will be ruthless, but I feel that I am too cold towards Xiao Yezi. Looking at her cautious look, I still can't bear it.

The interesting and good-looking protagonist gradually becomes ruthless. I look forward to seeing if the protagonist will be completely ruthless when he breaks through the Yuanying.

When I read the article, I never thought that it would take me so long to practice Qi, but after reading it, I realized that cultivating immortality has never been an easy task. But after reading more articles, I couldn't help but despise Qi training. It can be regarded as a change in my thinking. The writing is very detailed and not bad.

The writing is average, but novel The story is bland, but I like it

Qingshuiwen, not bad. It's bland and flavorful.

Delicate feelings, leaning toward women, a lot of sensual descriptions, but not much meat, basically spiritual love, no special descriptions, relatively plain, everything else is good [Chigua] I am more of a carnivorous person, so I am not too interested in this 😷The girls in the article are relatively light and don't have any extreme emotions. I prefer intense emotional collisions. This one is too bland. If you like this kind of taste, you can check it out. It's not bad [Chigua]

I haven't seen a protagonist with this kind of personality in a long time. It's very good. I have read similar stories in Hedgehog Cat before. One book, "Fengzi Sword", soon became a eunuch, and another one, "If I Were Number One in the World", although the plot and excitement are online, the emotional line is really getting worse and worse, turning the protagonist's originally cold and indifferent temperament into a sultry one. There is a saying that it is really difficult to write an emotional scene with a protagonist with such a temperament. You can't be too casual, you can't be too proactive, but you can't be completely passive without your own opinion. I hope this can be written well.

I really recommend this book, it's very to my liking, but I'm almost finished reading it, and I have to keep reading after reading it. It takes a long time to keep reading, but I feel like I don't want to read it anymore. I don't know why, but it's like this every time [crying]

It's pretty and bland, but I still like the single heroine, so I won't feel heartbroken.

This kind of subject matter is very new. The author's writing style is good. Come on, please give me more updates. The author is great.

Not bad, just too short

Loneliness is empty, longing for others to fill it. Solitude is contentment, being content without the need of others.

It has the flavor of traditional fairy tales, but Lily😋 This kind of thing is relatively rare in Tomato. Most of them are fast-paced. Not only are they easy to read, but they also become boring the further you read. I suggest that the author try to flow the plot as much as possible and then incorporate Lily's plot. If you write it slowly at your own pace, it will definitely be a particularly good book. I am looking forward to the protagonist's face being teased with an iceberg on his face, and his face will turn red😋

It looks good, it's good if there's no gratuitous hatred [blowing kiss]

Not bad, the heroine is a real charmer

My brother's coldness is minus 8 degrees Celsius, and my confident brother doesn't wear long johns. Are you proud of me? Little brother~

It looks great. Does the author have a fan base? I like it very much It's too literary and young. I can't stand it anymore.

It has a fresh smellヽ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ

Looks good, I like the protagonist's character

Not bad, no flashpoints.

I like it cold