Quick Transmigration: The Gentle Tease Doesn't Want This

In the first world, I actually think Jiang Weidong and Chen Jingming are not very good. Clean Party members should pay attention Jiang Weidong said before that to put it bluntly, he is hanging on to Chen Fang. He has not established a relationship for half a year. He thinks that Chen Fang is suitable for life, so he defaults to her to come to him. When he meets the heroine, he is a little distraught (is that how it is used), and later he develops a crush on the heroine. Chen Fang still came to him, but Jiang Weidong didn't explicitly refuse to say that he had someone he liked. I think at least he should be more decisive and not delay other girls. During the blind date of the heroine, he was quite bt (personal feeling) and he didn't shy away from staring at others. At least have a lower self-esteem, so that when you see the heroine and Chen Jingming getting along, you can feel that there may be no chance and hibernate for a while instead of staring at others like a bt. I thought Chen Jingming was good when I read it earlier, but in fact, as the book said, he hid the attitude of the heroine's family and deceived the heroine that she hated, so he just threw it in the trash can. Jiang Weidong is mainly unlikable from the front, but from the back he's okay, but I already have the impression that I hate him. I hope that the heroine can focus more on herself and flesh out the character of the heroine. I think the description of the heroine's character is a bit thin, and it is difficult to see the characteristics of the heroine. And I hope not to look for men in the trash can. Jiang Weidong is really reluctant in my opinion. If the relationship is not well written, you can try to focus on improving yourself and let the boys spend their time pursuing the female protagonist. The male protagonist will be the top one. Finally, come on, author. In fact, when I read the synopsis of the novel, I was really looking forward to the world written in it, but I found Jiang Weidong really distasteful. I'll give it a try first and then come back 🤦 If it's not Shuang Jie, please mark me as Jie Dang🥺

The best thing about the world is that the male and female protagonists have very distinct personalities, they are well-established, and they seem to get along quite naturally. Moreover, the author's writing is good and has a sense of imagery. Both of them are very down-to-earth and progressive. But the emotional line is too subtle. The male protagonist had an affair with Lin Fang at first but then changed his mind. I felt so sad for Lin Fang. In the first few chapters, I wrote a lot about Lin Fang's love affairs. She was also a very good girl who was used as a stepping stone for her feelings. The same goes for the female protagonist. She gets along well with her blind date in the early stage. The male protagonist makes up her mind immediately and the female protagonist also discovers problems with her blind date within two chapters (of course, Chen's problems are huge and there's nothing wrong with being with him). However, there is no foreshadowing in the early stage and a sudden thunderstorm seems to be just to kick him and make way for the male protagonist. Moreover, after the heroine promised to give the hero a chance, the two quickly met their parents. Lin Fang and Chen, who seemed to have known each other for a long time, were even more miserable. In reality, the choice between these two people doesn't seem to be much of a problem, but in the novel, it seems a bit strange. Of course, I still think the writing style is quite good even though the author is a newcomer. It's just that it might be more comfortable for the emotional relationship plot not to involve too much emotional entanglements with the third person. The author said that the writing of the first two worlds is relatively messy, and maybe the third world will start to be better.

The writing is good, I look forward to writing more