Red Mansion: Accepting Disciple Lin Daiyu at the Beginning

Comments are given, please update more! This article is a masterpiece. The author's writing power is really profound. The wording and wording have found a wonderful balance between classical and online writing. The writing style is elegant and refined, with ancient charm, but not obscure and difficult to understand. In terms of plot, the protagonist is a real fairy from the world at the beginning. This fairy is really real. There is no pretense, no Riddler, and the disciple Daiyu, which affects the plot of Red Mansion a little bit. In terms of the world view, a lot of original things have been added, which have not been developed yet, so you can look forward to it. After the whole reading experience, the biggest feeling is comfort. Old bookworms all know how highly a book can make readers feel comfortable. Five-star recommendation!

Classical cultivation! Game world! The writing is superb! Keeping it up seems like you're dying [fear]

I don't understand the idea of ​​seeking immortality and visiting the Tao, but it looks like that. It would be great if it can be done without any drama. Her writing skills are incomparable to Cao Xueqin's, so there are some direct quotations from the original text. This can't be helped. It's good if the story is smooth. Let me give you a rating that I personally think is very high. There is the comic "Lan Ke Qi Yuan": Ethereal Coming Out of the Dust

Tomato is a rare good book. The author has a profound writing style, which is a bit like a combination of Journey to the West and Dream of Red Mansions. The writing about spiritual practice is very consistent with the free and easy and sincere heart of the classical immortals. It is not the kind of immortals who do not cultivate the mind but only practice the law.

I really like this kind of classical online writing style. A breath of fresh air, I finally don't have to look at that kind of drooling idiot anymore. I really like the author's writing style. Keep writing and keep updating. The arrangement between the protagonist and Daiyu is also very good. Written to the level of Tao.

The writing is good, the logic is not strict, but it is smooth. The plot advancement is not like some novels, which are all driven by coincidence. Forage.

This is a very innovative book, Red Mansion + Cultivation. Please keep the current momentum going, and one day it may be able to top the two lists.

The author is a bit awesome

Really well written

Fresh and refined descriptions, depicting the image of immortals in my mind

. It has a very classic fairy tale feel.

It feels very much like reading "Dream of Red Mansions". It's pretty good so far, and it's very comfortable to read. The only drawback is that there are too few updates, and one update every few days can't keep people interested.

Plain, fresh and interesting. The protagonist is otherworldly and in line with the original work. The only drawback is that the update is not very stable.

I laughed so hard when I saw the comment below that I can't write real people scrawling. I feel like "Have you ever been a dragon? I just take it for granted that I wrote some random things." [Laughter]

The writing is excellent and the characters have no occ

It's like a classic novel, but the updates are too slow and it's not enough to read. I'll give it a try after a few months [Chigua]

Can there be more updates?

It's an absolutely great book. I really like the system of cultivating immortals in it. It's very classical. The choice of words and sentences, and the practice of techniques are very similar to movies and TV shows of the old generation. The author must not stop updating.

Very well written, good writing style

Has the flavor of a classic novel

A very shocking book

Not bad, good novel

This update speed is not exciting at all

Is this a big shot from Qidian? The writing style seems to be

It's very interesting, don't give up halfway!

It's ok to write, hope to update more

The only drawback is that there are too few updates

The writing style is awesome, this writing style is already overwhelming.

Not to mention how much it is related to the Red Mansion! It's rare to see a novel written like this! It's very comfortable to read.

A very interesting fic of Dream of Red Mansions. There is no harem behind the lower body. It is about classical immortality. It is really well written.