Please CP Is a Good-Looking HP Text of Sirius! the Writing Is Not Immature!
The writing is smooth and the plot is delicate and not shocking! The heroine can travel through time, change the original plot, and the ending is he! No knife
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It can be said to be one of the best HP fanfics I have read on Tomato! The author's characterization is complete, realistic and meticulous. Sirius is not OOC at all, and the contrast between his unruly publicity and loneliness is well described. The original heroine is his lucky star, illuminating his darkness just right. I can see that there are no big bugs now, and it really looks better and better as I look at it! The emotional line is delicate and natural, which completely fills the regret for Sirius in the original work. I always like it when I catch up on updates. It is a treasure article that is worth recalling again and again. Update quickly!
The 1V1 emotional line just really pricked me. If you like the male and female protagonist, you will only be kind to the people you recognize, and treat others with double standards. Only Felicity glimpsed Sirius's fragility under his unruly attitude, which gave him warmth and strength: Sirius also gradually developed a liking for her, although he still used good friends as an excuse. For the first time, Fei had a premonition about a big dog in her dream. From the initial favorable appearance, to curiosity, understanding, mutual recognition, admiration for each other's bravery and justice, they went both ways to have a good fight. The plot is smooth and natural without flaws, and the friendship between the predators is also very touching. It's just that the number of words is too small and not enough to read. I look forward to subsequent updates.
HP, the heroine is the arrogant and cold-hearted eldest daughter of the Selwyn family (Slytherin), and the CP is Sirius Black, a super powerful double arrow! The author's writing style is so delicate, and he can easily describe the love between the two people that flows like sand made of stars! Highly recommended!
The pure love warrior fell to the ground in response, I have loved pure love for ten thousand years! ! ! ! ! ! It's getting better and better in the future. I can't get enough updates soon! ! ! !
It's very interesting. I like it. The author must make more updates.