[Lily] [Time Travel] [Double Heroines] [Gao Wu] [Main Line Emotional Double Flying]
When I traveled to the world of Gaowu, the earth gave me a very doting system.
So what are you talking about? Just put it aside.
But today I met a handsome sister who fits my aesthetic perfectly. She is really in my heart.
It's a pity that I only love myself, and beautiful women can see it.
No, what do you mean, I have a bond with her?
Also, why is she in so much trouble?
Reader comments
It's pretty good, just don't stop and stop updating. The world view is probably a bit dystopian, but more importantly, it's pure love. Long live pure love. I'm a pure dog lover. Most of the people who recommend it to me recently are the queens. Damn it, I'd rather watch male fantasy videos again than watch the white queens [smile][smile][smile]
A good article with a connected plot, the protagonist is highly talented and intelligent, and the heroine is a classic growth-oriented protagonist. As for the system, is it similar to a small patch? It's also cute to leave room for the protagonist to strengthen at the back. Then there is the relationship line where the heroine is a benefactor to the protagonist at the beginning and then realizes that she falls in love with the protagonist. I feel that I can show the daily emotional rise in more detail. I hope it won't suddenly become inexplicable later on and the plot will advance in a reasonable manner.
The author has brought a world of high-level martial arts where the strong are supreme. There is no unreasonable enhancement like other brainless novels. The protagonist has a high IQ and is smart enough to fight against the strong? ! It's well written, and the author is willing to listen to suggestions and has a good attitude. Also, the stickers look good👀
It's more to your liking, and the writing traces seem to be using AI, but it's not a big problem. There is no unnecessary nonsense or words, the logic is clear, and the plot develops slowly but makes people want to watch it.
Both protagonists are very smart.
Very well written! I particularly like this kind of long-lasting relationship. The interaction between the two people is so touching. The confusion of Luo, the top-level talent, and the tenacity of Xiaobai, the third-level talent, are all well portrayed. When Luo meets Xiaobai, he starts to take the initiative to do things, even if he has nothing to do for himself.
Their relationship didn't happen overnight, it grew slowly in countless tiny moments. This long-lasting feeling is really beautiful.
Super looking forward to the next plot! Come on!
I like to watch cats, cats with brains, not other women's playthings, not wasteful and cute, in short, I just like to watch cats.
Give more good reviews, good reviews are not easy
A good story, I wish there were more stories about the protagonist
It's very good-looking, and it's interesting to develop without any age difference. As a nurturing agent, the heroine gives people a very mature and reliable feeling, and the author should also be this kind of person.
The rest of the game was boring to watch. Li Xiangyuan played in a very high style. In the end, Bai still won. I felt that Bai's level was still a little lower. The so-called talent is barely reflected in martial arts. If you really have talent, you can use even basic martial arts in your own style (like Minato does with the Three Body Technique), but there is no reflection in this aspect. The emotional transition is also rather blunt.
It's good to watch, and the plot is more everyday, but not boring.
The writing is excellent, the explanation of the cultivation system is very good, and the logic is clear.
Very beautiful! The writing style is also very good. The author must write down and speak clearly [crying]
Can you write more about the love story with the heroine?
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, love to watch
Nice looking raccoons, I really like watching raccoons
It's okay. The plot is rigorous, but the emotional line needs to be slow. But I understand.
The author can do it, but the pace is a bit slow, but it is a martial arts competition after all, so we must keep the momentum and write down.
It's pretty cool, but you might want to consider changing the name during the book test.
It's pretty good, just don't stop and stop updating. The world view is probably a bit dystopian, but more importantly, it's pure love. Long live pure love. I'm a pure dog lover. Most of the people who recommend it to me recently are the queens. Damn it, I'd rather watch male fantasy videos again than watch the white queens [smile][smile][smile]
A good article with a connected plot, the protagonist is highly talented and intelligent, and the heroine is a classic growth-oriented protagonist. As for the system, is it similar to a small patch? It's also cute to leave room for the protagonist to strengthen at the back. Then there is the relationship line where the heroine is a benefactor to the protagonist at the beginning and then realizes that she falls in love with the protagonist. I feel that I can show the daily emotional rise in more detail. I hope it won't suddenly become inexplicable later on and the plot will advance in a reasonable manner.
The author has brought a world of high-level martial arts where the strong are supreme. There is no unreasonable enhancement like other brainless novels. The protagonist has a high IQ and is smart enough to fight against the strong? ! It's well written, and the author is willing to listen to suggestions and has a good attitude. Also, the stickers look good👀
It's more to your liking, and the writing traces seem to be using AI, but it's not a big problem. There is no unnecessary nonsense or words, the logic is clear, and the plot develops slowly but makes people want to watch it. Both protagonists are very smart.
Very well written! I particularly like this kind of long-lasting relationship. The interaction between the two people is so touching. The confusion of Luo, the top-level talent, and the tenacity of Xiaobai, the third-level talent, are all well portrayed. When Luo meets Xiaobai, he starts to take the initiative to do things, even if he has nothing to do for himself. Their relationship didn't happen overnight, it grew slowly in countless tiny moments. This long-lasting feeling is really beautiful. Super looking forward to the next plot! Come on!
I like to watch cats, cats with brains, not other women's playthings, not wasteful and cute, in short, I just like to watch cats.
Give more good reviews, good reviews are not easy
A good story, I wish there were more stories about the protagonist
It's very good-looking, and it's interesting to develop without any age difference. As a nurturing agent, the heroine gives people a very mature and reliable feeling, and the author should also be this kind of person. The rest of the game was boring to watch. Li Xiangyuan played in a very high style. In the end, Bai still won. I felt that Bai's level was still a little lower. The so-called talent is barely reflected in martial arts. If you really have talent, you can use even basic martial arts in your own style (like Minato does with the Three Body Technique), but there is no reflection in this aspect. The emotional transition is also rather blunt.
It's good to watch, and the plot is more everyday, but not boring. The writing is excellent, the explanation of the cultivation system is very good, and the logic is clear.
Very beautiful! The writing style is also very good. The author must write down and speak clearly [crying]
Can you write more about the love story with the heroine?
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, love to watch
Nice looking raccoons, I really like watching raccoons
It's okay. The plot is rigorous, but the emotional line needs to be slow. But I understand.
The author can do it, but the pace is a bit slow, but it is a martial arts competition after all, so we must keep the momentum and write down.
It's pretty cool, but you might want to consider changing the name during the book test.