Pokémon: I, the Female Supporting Character, the Champion White Moonlight!

It's a rare Pokémon heroine fandom! Moreover, as a fan with multiple male protagonists, I am very excited and excited! It can be seen that my wife's knowledge is very solid. She is very professional in the knowledge and tactics of Pokémon battles. The plot is very familiar. The relevant introduction of each chapter has end notes. The writing style is very mature and not a novice, so it will not make people look embarrassed. I hope my wife will work hard and update more and not give up writing! The only small comment I would like to make is that Du Juan does not seem to have a big golden finger (not that he knows the plot, most time travelers have their own plot or a rough plot), and there is only one Pokémon that is not as proficient in communication as Meowth (in the book plot, when communicating with Cocodora, he is not proficient in communication). I can't help but worry about Du Juan, because in the future there will be threats from the Ultimate Cave, threats from the future in Daigo's dream, and threats from various mythical beast battles in the theater version. I hope Dujuan will become stronger! I hope to see the day when Du Juan becomes the strongest Pokémon trainer! Oh, one more thing. Watching Pokémon animations and playing games are a lot of fun to capture Pokémon in the wild. However, almost every Pokémon owned by the heroine was obtained through various channels of transactions (money transactions and knowledge transactions with Daigo), which lacks some of the flavor of the original work. By the way, I'm curious if there are CPs for Pokémon and humans? I just asked if there was any other meaning, because I remembered that when I was a child, I watched the Pokémon fanfic with the heroine and Mewtwo CP (eyes moved)

It's good to read. The overall feeling of the novel is very solid and quite anime-like. It's currently the heroine's career line. There aren't a few male guests yet. I'm looking forward to it. The only thing that's a little weird is that the heroine talks like a weird uncle when getting along with her best friend, and she suddenly makes a loud noise during the game, which is completely unnecessary [laughs awkwardly]

It's so rare to find a Pokémon fan who doesn't have a stud, doesn't have a harem, and isn't OOC, so I've struck gold. Du Juan is a really cute little girl, and I can clearly feel the author's description of her growth (the apostle of destiny outside the world, the savior who will eventually save everything). And as for the emotional line, I'm all in for Dawu, the mysterious stone man, you are still too supermodel. Who knows the delicious taste of I am your guardian, knight, mentor, loyal friend, senior, companion, guide, brother, angel investor and soul mate (stop, stop, there are not enough people to stand here)! ! ! I hope the author can continue to work hard to write this book. I must write millions of words for my enjoyment (I'm joking, but I still hope it can be written as a long story. If it is a short story, I will really regret it for the rest of my life. Waiting for updates every day...

Beautiful! Many battles are played very seriously and can be understood by non-players. The protagonist is a genius but he is the reincarnation of a treasure expert and works hard. There are no adventures or cheats from beginning to end, so it is completely recommended! The only suggestion I would like to make is some rhetorical techniques used to describe the heroine, which are relatively out of touch with the Internet... Well, in other words, it is a bit awkward occasionally... I completely like Ningnu, so it is not that there is a problem with the original intention of describing the protagonist, but the use of some words and phrases is a bit out of line with current trends. One recommended improvement plan is very simple. When writing from the perspective of a male character or an ordinary third-person perspective, it should be personified. Don't let people come and describe it. Let the sun, moon, flowers, wind and grass gaze at the heroine. For example, when writing about a female character with a curvaceous figure, don't write about "graceful" in human evaluations. Instead, write about willow branches being blown by the wind and flowers hanging their heads. When writing about a heroine from the perspective of a male character, you can also let the sun replace this perspective and write about the fluff on the cheeks under the sun and the long eyelashes when you squint your eyes slightly. In short, improving this aspect will prevent female readers from getting into trouble, which is actually quite important. And do not use words such as catkin and jade feet that are fine in themselves but do not fit the theme. Even if you use them, make sure that the context paragraph has sufficient atmosphere.

Nice! It ignited my passion for Pokémon. It's the best thing I've seen on this subject so far on Tomato! There's no substitute for it at the moment. It's just that at first it was a bit awkward to use some words like Xiao Nizi and so on. It's actually pretty good.

It looks good, but my impression of Pokémon is still about Ash Ketchum winning the league championship (?). I haven't watched it for many years, so I clicked on the fandom to taste it. I didn't expect that there are so many series of Pokémon. I searched while reading it, and it was not difficult to read with the comments given by my wife. The writing level is quite high, not a novice, and I also know a lot about Pokémon. It seems very enjoyable. But the pace in the early stage is a bit slow. If it is a long story, just pretend I didn't say it. It takes a lot of time to read and search. I hope there will be more updates. I haven't seen many similar fanfics on Tomato. I hope it won't be interrupted. There are also some places where the description is a bit unsatisfactory... I hope it can be improved. Also, I'm not very interested in battle plots, and I can't understand most of them, but I'll try my best to search more. The most important thing is that I hope the author will write more

It's good to read, but the emotional line is a bit short (I came here because I wanted to have multiple male protagonists), but it's a new book after all [laughing] Let's read it again, I hope the emotional line and the battle line are parallel

I really like this setting. Du Juan is really cute. Unfortunately, I have never found anyone who writes about Du Juan. Among all the regional curators, my favorite is Du Juan [Send Heart] and [Send Heart]. The male protagonists are also the ones I am interested in, especially Daigo (is there really anyone who doesn't like Daigo?), But it's a pity that there is no N. It's really gratifying to see Du Juan getting stronger step by step. The author didn't strengthen without thinking, nor did he keep suppressing his fighting power. I feel that this rhythm is very suitable. In addition, every time I see Du Juan's highlight, I am so excited that I have to watch it several times [face covering] I really look forward to Du Juan winning the championship and saving the world. The protagonist must have a happy ending! ! Finally, I would like to ask the author, is the ending without cp, split ending or something else [sending my heart][sending my heart]

It is also a very delicious fanfic. When an anime fan saw the analysis of Pokémon, he was immediately shocked and praised it... The rhythm is very good, and it does not feel sluggish (it feels like the process of slowly growing up, which is also very good!!) (Mainly because I am still not familiar with Pokémon and the story lines of previous generations...) As for the emotional line... It's very good... As the heroine grows up, I want to see the interaction with Daigo... And I hope there will be a scene between the two heroes (the tacit understanding of fighting side by side...) "I will always protect your back (... Brain supplement). It's delicious and refreshing." And Watari... I feel a bit cold-faced and cute... A person with a lot of inner drama, but I feel that he will fight for the heroine... And then confess (buish) Who knows, I watched the scene in Ypeltal, where my aunt looked for delicious sweets among a pile of knives and laughed. (This is the wonderful motivation for me to study hard!) Now I still support Dawu... After all, I have too many snacks. There is a sentence "tacitly agreeing to give me the care of a lover in the name of a close friend", which is very delicious! ! ! ! Can you explain it briefly? I strongly support and recommend it. Please tell me to watch this! ! ! ! There are also different viewing angles, which are also very delicious. Watching up close how to "fall"... Falling under the heroine's pomegranate skirt... Is a heart-stirring feeling~! General: I'm looking forward to whether there will be a double-power plot in the follow-up, or a scene of pretending to be a b-name... (Selfishness) and the follow-up development of the emotional line... (Squat) and praise the author's superb writing skills... Goodbye! ! !

It's so beautiful. The author is also very kind and beautiful. He will explain some things that we don't understand. He is also very attentive. It's the first time I encountered this kind of touching feeling. It's really special and beautiful. I tied it immediately. I feel so little. The author, please continue to work hard. More people will definitely read this article in the future. Don't give up. ૮ ´͈ ᗜ `͈ ა♡

This is the first time I read a fanfic with Du Juan as the protagonist. It feels so strange. When I searched online before, I didn't find it yet. However, the writing is really good and I can see the author's meticulous writing skills. I hope to keep up the good work and strive to update 108,000 times a day.

So far it's pretty good, and the author's knowledge base is also very strong. But there is one thing, the author feels like a man? Although it is written about a female protagonist, many of the descriptions give me a male-feeling, very similar to the kind of girl that boys stereotype.

It is the most beautiful Pokémon book I have ever read. The battles are very passionate and the tactics are logical. Various battles can show the perseverance of Dujuan. She is not just a flower like other heroines. The daily descriptions are also very interesting. The number of words is large*▽*

It's super good-looking. It's really rare to see Pokémon fanfics with multiple male protagonists in Tomato. The author's writing is very good. [Like] [Like] There is no big cheat from the beginning. The growth between the female protagonist and her partners makes me feel soft. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] But one thing I don't like very much is that I feel that the golden finger given to Daigo by the author is too big. I don't feel that the golden finger of the heroine is particularly powerful, but I immediately arranged for Daigo to have a steel slate, one of the 18 stone slabs of Arceus. I feel that the golden finger of the male protagonist may be a bit more than that of the female protagonist. I prefer that the female protagonist is always stronger than the male protagonist. This is my first time writing a review. If there is anything wrong, please point it out tactfully, thank you!

All the plots are well-founded, and the author also made a lot of plot annotations, which are very easy to understand and written with great care. The interaction between the protagonist and the elves is also the most detailed one I have seen so far. Pictures of various Pokémon have been added since Chapter 30 [Sending Hearts] The plot is very smooth and perfectly interprets the development story of a growing heroine. None of the characters appearing in it are OOC. The battle scenes are well-founded and the descriptions are particularly careful. There are also many humorous words that amuse me from time to time. Laughing hahaha, the interaction between the protagonist and the elves is very real, and every plot point has the source or creative inspiration, which is rare in reading novels. The emotional line becomes more exciting as it goes to the back, haha, and the character's self-narration with the change of perspective of the character, these are all very touching to my heart. I haven't seen such a good-looking Pokémon fanfic in a long time.

Come on, this book is really good! It's very passionate, and it captures the feeling of bonding. It's not too invincible, and its combat power isn't particularly bad. The secondary creations it proposes are also very interesting, and it doesn't use particularly popular Pokémon, but relatively unpopular ones. I like this very much. Most of the current Pokémon articles use those very popular Pokémon, which is already very boring to read. Come on, I will always support you! I hope that some of them can be added, such as the Big Steel Snake, Crystal Light Flower, Shield Sword Monster, Ice and Snow Dragon, Salt Stone Treasure, Baby Tyrannosaurus, King Bronze Elephant, Gear Monster, Chuanshan King (Alola), Nianmeier (Waiting Cui). (๑˃̵ᴗ˂̵)و

I can feel the author's love for the world of Pokémon. However, in some chapters, there are too many supplementary texts and very little effective content. It is difficult to read if you are not a serious Pokémon player. There are also some very shocking descriptions, such as red lips and ding tongue, which make me often suspect that the author is a male [facepalm] The advantage is that the battle descriptions are very detailed. If you put it in, you will feel the passionate fighting spirit. The growth line is slow. It is expected to be a long novel.

It's beautiful, and the details of life are written in a very immersive way [Blow a kiss]

What a great book! I'm fascinated by this. Play this key for me and give me a decisive review! It's really a great idea. I hope the author will write more about other male protagonists () who also really like the bond between our cuckoo and Pokémon! [Adoration][Admiration][Please update]

I haven't read a novel in two months. I choose to believe this time. I don't need a reason to believe.

The author writes very well and is very attractive. I'm going to insert something below, please search it online [cry][cry][cry] ①The latest speculations on "A Dream of Red Mansions" and "Journey to the West" ②The relationship between Western words and Chinese ③The battle between man and beast ④Simplified Chinese (Chinese, Han) ⑤Metaphors from outstanding literary and artistic works from all over the world, such as: "Calabash Baby" (What should the Chinese people do) "Under the Stranger" (What are the Eight Magic Skills) "The Little Prince" (the identity of the little prince and the rose) "The Truman Show" (Chu People - Chasing Qin and Avoiding Chu) "One Piece" (World History, Celestial Dragon) "Spirited Away" (the identities of Qianxun and Xiaobailong) Neither Jin Yong nor Qiong Yao's butts are straight. ⑥Ossuary churches in Europe, gossip cities around the world, and Australian dingoes Wake up, everyone [love] [love] [love]

It's so good to watch, it's rare that the heroine in the story has multiple men, it's very shocking and delicious [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [love] [love] [love] [love] The author's writing style is really great, it has the feeling of Pokémon, and it is very rigorous and comfortable. I feel so happy when I read it [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] ][Love] Oh my gosh, the author's battle descriptions are really passionate. It feels like I'm fighting in an anime. When I listen to the book mode, I feel so excited👍👍👍😋😋😋😋🤓👍👍👍

It can be clearly seen from the whole article that the author has a thorough understanding of Pokémon's tactical knowledge. In terms of battles, the battle descriptions are very exciting and passionate. In terms of emotional lines, I actually came here for the multi-male protagonist. There are very few Pokémon multi-male protagonists in Tomato. On the emotional line, I feel that every pair is very compatible.

A very good book, without any stupid cheats, and it can be seen that the author is very familiar with Pokémon. I personally think the plot is also very interesting. It can be seen that Dujuan will become a legend step by step, the kind of existence that others admire. I hope the author can keep writing and never give up.

It's very interesting. I like it (=^▽^=). It's really well written, and the writing style is smooth and not embarrassing. I will always support the author, but I don't know if there are only a few male protagonists introduced. I hope I can write more, and I look forward to itＯ(≧▽≦)Ｏ

It's very interesting. I haven't found a good Pokémon article in a long time.

So handsome! It's rare to see Bao write such a passionate battle. The bond between the protagonist and bkm is very heart-warming. Looking forward to her subsequent growth! Os wants to see more lines from the second grade Also, the settings for the stunts are so cool and I love it!

The author has a very good grasp of the rhythm of the plot, which is unmatched by many authors and must be praised. The fighting also allows me to immerse myself in the sense of animation. More importantly, the protagonist is not pretentious at all. I hope that I can travel with the summoning master Hoopa and the most beautiful Pokémon Dianxi later (because I really like these two fantasy Pokémon) [laughing]

I really like this second tone. The fighting and skill settings are very nice. The B-squares get bigger toward the back. The chanting is ignited. It has the kind of unfolding of a precious phantom. If I have to talk about the pain point, the heroine's language is occasionally inappropriate, like that of a group friend, but it is not insulting within the acceptable range, and the emotional scenes are okay, at least it is a bit enjoyable to watch.

It's so beautiful. The author is a treasure expert and knows Pokémon very well. It looks reasonable and smooth. There are even notes on the places where you have doubts while reading. It's a slow flow and has interactions with Pokémon. It's really beautiful [like]