Pokemon: Miss Roxanne's Wonderful Adventure

It's a rare Pokémon heroine fandom! Moreover, as a fan with multiple male protagonists, I am very excited and excited! It can be seen that my wife's knowledge is very solid. She is very professional in the knowledge and tactics of Pokémon battles. The plot is very familiar and the relevant introduction of each chapter has end notes. The writing style is very mature and not a novice, so it will not make people look embarrassed. I hope that my wife will work hard and update more and not give up writing! The only small comment I would like to make is that Dujuan doesn't seem to have a big golden finger (not that I know the plot, most time travelers have their own plot or a rough plot), and there is only one Pokémon who is not as proficient in communication as Meowth (in the book plot, when communicating with Cocodora, he is not proficient in communication). I can't help but worry about Dujuan, because in the future there will be threats from the Ultimate Cave, threats from the future in Daigo's dream, and threats from various mythical beast battles in the theater version. I hope Dujuan will become stronger! I hope to see the day when Du Juan becomes the strongest Pokémon trainer! Oh, one more small point. Watching Pokémon animations and playing games are a lot of fun to capture Pokémon in the wild. However, almost every Pokémon owned by the heroine was obtained through various channels of transactions (money transactions and knowledge transactions with Daigo), which lacks some of the flavor of the original work. By the way, I'm curious if there are CPs for Pokémon and humans? I just asked if there was any other meaning, because I remembered that when I was a child, I watched the Pokémon fanfic with the heroine and Mewtwo CP (eyes moved)

It's good to read. The novel overall feels very solid and has a sense of anime. It's currently the heroine's career line. There are not a few male guests who have appeared yet. I'm looking forward to it. The only thing that's a little weird is that the heroine talks like a weird uncle when getting along with her best friend, and there is also a sudden squeal during the game, which is completely unnecessary😅

It's so rare to find a Pokémon fan who doesn't have a stud, doesn't have a harem, and isn't OOC, so I've struck gold. Du Juan is a really cute little girl, and I can clearly feel the author's description of her growth (the apostle of destiny outside the world, the savior who will eventually save everything). And as for the emotional line, I'm all in Dawu, the mysterious stone man, you are still too supermodel. Who knows the delicious taste of I am your guardian, knight, mentor, loyal friend, senior, companion, guide, brother, angel investor and soul mate (stop, stop, there are not enough people to stand here)!!! I hope that the author can continue to work hard to write this book, and he must write millions of words for me to enjoy (I am joking, but I still hope to write a long story. If it is a short story, I will really regret it for the rest of my life. Waiting for updates every day...

Beautiful! Many battles are played very seriously and can be understood by non-players. The protagonist is a genius but he is the reincarnation of a treasure expert and works hard. There are no adventures or cheats from beginning to end, so it is completely recommended! The only suggestion I would like to make is some rhetorical techniques used to describe the heroine, which are relatively out of touch with the Internet... Well, in other words, it is a bit awkward at times... I completely like Ning Nu, so it is not that there is a problem with the original intention of describing the protagonist, but the use of some words and phrases is a bit out of line with current trends. One recommended improvement plan is very simple. When writing from the perspective of a male character or an ordinary third-person perspective, it should be personified. Don't let people come and describe it. Let the sun, moon, flowers, wind and grass gaze at the heroine. For example, when writing about a female character with a curvaceous figure, don't write about "graceful" in human evaluations. Instead, write about willow branches being blown by the wind and flowers drooping their heads. When writing about a heroine from the perspective of a male character, you can also let the sun replace this perspective, write about the fluff on the cheeks under the sun, and the long eyelashes when you squint your eyes slightly. In short, improving this aspect will prevent female readers from getting into trouble, which is actually quite important. And don't use words such as catkin and jade feet that are fine in themselves but do not fit the theme. Even if you use them, make sure that the context paragraph has sufficient atmosphere.

Nice! It ignited my passion for Pokémon. It's the best thing I've seen on this subject so far on Tomato! There's no substitute for it at the moment. It's just that at first it was a bit awkward to use some words like Xiao Nizi and so on. It's actually pretty good.

I really like this setting. Du Juan is really cute. Unfortunately, I have never found anyone who writes about Du Juan. Among all the regional curators, my favorite is Du Juan 💕 and 💕. The male protagonists are also the ones I am interested in, especially Daigo (is there really anyone who doesn't like Daigo?), But it's a pity that there is no N. It's really gratifying to see Du Juan getting stronger step by step. The author didn't strengthen without thinking, nor did he keep suppressing his fighting power. I feel that this rhythm is very suitable. In addition, every time I see Du Juan's highlight, I am so excited that I have to watch it several times 🤦 I really look forward to Du Juan winning the championship and saving the world. The protagonist must have a happy ending!! Finally, I would like to ask the author, is the ending without cp, split ending or something else [sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's good to read, but the emotional line is a bit short (I came here because I wanted to have multiple male protagonists), but it's a new book after all 🤭 Let's read it again, I hope the emotional line and the battle line are parallel

It can be clearly seen from the whole article that the author has a thorough understanding of Pokémon's tactical knowledge. In terms of battles, the battle descriptions are very exciting and passionate. In terms of emotional lines, I actually came here for the multi-male protagonist. There are very few Pokémon multi-male protagonists in Tomato. On the emotional line, I feel that every pair is very compatible.

It is also a very delicious fanfic. When an anime fan saw the analysis of Pokémon, he was immediately shocked and praised it... The rhythm is very good, and it does not feel sluggish (it feels like the process of slowly growing up, which is also very good!!) (Mainly because I am still not familiar with Pokémon and the story lines of previous generations...) As for the emotional line... It's very interesting... As the heroine grows up, I want to see the interaction with Daigo... And I hope there will be a scene between the two heroes (the tacit understanding of fighting side by side...) "Your back will always be protected by me (... Brain supplement). It's refreshing and delicious. And Watanabe... I feel a bit cold-faced and cute... A person with a lot of inner drama, but I feel that he will fight for the heroine... And then confess (buish) Who knows, I watched the scene where my aunt was looking for delicious sweets in a pile of knives. (This is the wonderful motivation for me to study hard!) After all, there is too much food. There is a tacit understanding in the name of a lover, and it is very delicious!!! The changing of perspectives is also very delicious. It's so exciting to watch how you "fall" up close and fall under the heroine's pomegranate skirt~! General: Looking forward to whether there will be a double-power plot, or a scene of pretending to be a b-name... (Selfishness) and the subsequent development of the emotional line... (Squat) and praise the author's superb writing skills... Goodbye!

It looks good, but my impression of Pokémon is still about Ash Ketchum winning the league championship (?). I haven't watched it in many years, so I clicked on the fandom to taste it. I didn't expect that there are so many series of Pokémon. I searched while reading it, and it was not difficult to read with the notes given by my wife. The writing level is quite high, not a novice, and I also know a lot about Pokémon. It seems very enjoyable. But the pace in the early stage is a bit slow. If it is a long story, just ignore it. It is a bit time-consuming to read and search. I hope there will be more. I have not seen many similar fanfics on Tomato. I hope it will not be discontinued. There are still some descriptions that are a bit unsatisfactory... I hope they can be improved. Also, I am not very interested in the plot of the battle. I can't understand most of them, but I will try to search more. The most important thing is that I hope the author will do more.