Living Alone in the Sun for a Night, I Gradually Turned into a Girl

The poison is terrible [laughing] It is true that 20,000 yuan is a very small salary. I need a few hundred yuan in live streaming rewards. I took over the cram school to make up the money, but then I turned around and wanted to turn it down [laughing]

I think the protagonist is quite charming, but the introduction says that Shen Zhiwen tolerates Yan Bao, gives encouragement, and helps him get out of trouble. However, I feel that there are very few appearances and the introduction does not match [currently working on the draft]. I feel that there are many characters now, but the primary and secondary relationships are not very clear. I hope it can be adjusted, because the subject matter and the characters are very novel, and the foreshadowing can be filled in time. The relationship between the characters can be clearer. I think it might be better if the priorities are separated and rounded out. [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss]

Good! ! ! It's very routine and the process is exciting! ! !