Think Life Is Boring? Come Be a Magical Girl!

There may be some paragraphs in the first few chapters that are too long, but this is a common phenomenon for newcomers to new books. After reading half of it, I feel that the overall story is pretty good. The rhythm of the plot is quite comfortable for me. The story is not depressing. It is a good choice for relaxing in the book world [Chigua]

The overall effect is very good, and the rhythm is very suitable to me, but the segmentation is a little flawed. Next, I'll give you some subjective comments. First of all, this book focuses on daily life, and it can be seen that it has a very life-like atmosphere (it is suspected to be the author's autobiography). There is no big problem in the connection of the plot, it is very smooth, not too watery, and it looks very good. It can be seen from the battle scenes that the author is a newbie. It is a bit unfamiliar, but it is much better than what I saw before when I was King Akaashi. Finally, I would like to give some advice to the author. If you want to get high ratings and popularity, the most basic thing is to write an outline. No matter what, you must not miss this. This can ensure that the story is stable and controllable. You know what you want to write and will not take off immediately and mess up the rhythm. It is enough to sign up for stable updates. Two chapters a day of 5 to 6 thousand words are enough. If the platform is unstable, the flow will not be pushed, and the sudden drop in the number of people will also reduce the push. I hope to see it completed.

Although the content of the protagonist's abilities is not too novel, the writing is very good and the high school life is well described. It is very solid.

It's okay. It was the evil association that threatened me to give me one star, but the opponent was successfully defeated by me, so I can only say that the association has done all kinds of bad things!

I went to confess my love to Fang Liang, but he kept hanging on me and made me blush. I felt so uncomfortable. What should I do?

So far it feels okay.

It looks good so far, but the daily transition is a bit too bland.

It's great, the plot and character description are very good, but the kissing is not good [laughs]

OK It is suspected to be the author's autobiography, and the high school life is quite vividly written. It's just that the updates are intermittent, a bit sparse. If you don't keep updating, the traffic will be gone.

Looks interesting