Entertainment: My Double Takes the Stage While the Real Me Works Behind the Scenes

Overall, it's okay. The body and vest have a slight sense of warmth, but the descriptions in some places are a bit deliberate. The overall rhythm is a bit too fast, the events are fermented and resolved too quickly, and it feels like it is over before the emotions rise. The development line of some events can be lengthened a little, so that readers will have a better reading experience. The foreshadowing and the introduction of related characters will be a bit stiff, such as that of Senior Sister Wen. There was a bit of an uncomfortable feeling when Senior Sister Wen invited me to sing. I felt that the protagonist gave the song too easily. Even though he was from the same school, he only agreed to give the song after meeting him a few times, and the requirements for the song were not written out. It gave the impression that he would give the song whenever someone asked the protagonist. It gave people a very disrespectful attitude towards the composers in his previous life, which was a bad point. It was also the case with Xie Nan and the girl named Tang before. It felt like they gave these songs for free. Now that you have a talented persona online, don't give out the songs casually, as this will give people a slightly cheap feeling. But overall it's still okay, and it's good to watch during leisure time. Come on!

The subject matter is novel. Apart from anything else, what I am looking forward to from the beginning to the end is the emotion in the sentence "I, Long Aotian, will protect Liu Bo to the death", so I hope you can add more interaction between the protagonists. Dark blue, add dots. Old self, love you, old self!

Well, I just feel a little uncomfortable being teamed up with others for CP, but there's nothing else.

It feels pretty good. The protagonist and clones are very enjoyable, but there are too few. Come on 👍👍👍

Sure enough, the one who loves himself the most and takes care of himself is his old self. The protagonist and his doppelgänger should not be mamas [smile][smile]. One bad thing is that he treats his roommates too well. He only introduces work and writes scripts to them after they have only known each other for a long time. This is just a novel. If it were based on reality, he would have been stabbed in the back by his roommate 🤦 🤦 🤦

The writing is very good! Compared with other literary copywriters, this book is really good. The protagonist is very cautious and thinks carefully about everything he writes in the lyrics. Moreover, the world is not so brainless, and the uncomfortable plot disappears quickly (for example, being raped online, and then being warned by a lawyer the next second, and the country also supports it, and there is another one I forgot, but it is an uncomfortable plot anyway, and it disappears quickly)

Narcissus yyds! The author's writing is very good, but when the protagonist writes songs for others, can he also talk about the price and contract? Otherwise, it feels like giving it away for free, which is uncomfortable.

It's beautiful and quite cozy. I like the relationship between the main body and the clone. Roommates, other mystery writers, Xingyao... They are all normal people. Then, I didn't think about it at first, but I realized it after reading the comments. Don't you need to sign a contract for a song? Even if we don't talk about price or sharing, maybe his identity already has a fixed price, so at least the act of signing a contract must occur. Is it about copyright? When I wrote my short mystery story before, I made it clear, signed it with "Mystery Journal", and even hired a lawyer. Not even once on the song side. The script provided was not clearly written, everyone knew it was for Long Aotian. You need to at least talk about it and clarify the situation, right? The main reason is that the singer from Thousand Years of Love acted a little mind-boggling. Finally, I saw something about the song in Chapter 70. And indeed, it feels too easy to ask the protagonist to sing. After all, there is no system to provide music library, so I hope to pay more attention to these works. They are good works. I wish you write better and better.

It's simply delicious. Let the author write it like this. I knocked so hard that I twisted into maggots on the bed. The characters are all very good. I really like it 🥰🥰

Super pretty! The choice of the protagonist is also logical. It is not a blind batch of works, and there is no deliberate description of emotions. The readers will be stricken to death [admiration]. I hope the author will continue to update more and never stop updating. [Sending my heart] I feel that the pace is too fast later on, and there is no such delicate description as in the early stage. Taking the works out is like completing a task, which is to produce the work - praise - visit the class - produce the work. There is no interaction. It looks so awkward but I can't tell what is awkward 🤔, the feeling of not being able to explain, so uncomfortable