[Child generation, original Ravenclaw heroine, CP George Weasley, slow love]
George Weasley*Original heroine Doreen Burns
Lion's Court* Eagle's Court
Lightning protection:
This is the author's first book. The creation was interrupted twice due to external and own reasons. Although it has been completed, when you click in, you will see:
1. The overall plot is incoherent, and the foreshadowing about the villain cannot be recycled well.
2. The main line is not very clear
3. The protagonist's relationship was not confirmed until the fourth grade, and there were very few scenes.
4. As a work that explores an ordinary person's youth and future ups and downs, this book is incomplete and its skills are immature.
Summary：
Doreen is an abandoned trash. She lives in a garbage dump. Her last relatives left her when the magic riot occurred. When she gave up her will to survive in the flames, magic appeared.
This is the story of a cautious witch who becomes more powerful. Here, she meets a very annoying person - George Weiss.
The first time she waved her fist in the magical world, the first time she read the Unbreakable Vow, the first time she exposed her Boggart, Doreen returned in despair and gave up the fight with George.
Instead, he had a brain cramp and wanted to hold her hand.
This was incredible. When George Weasley was called out by her eyes and voice again and again, when his name became unique even if it was Public Enemy No. 1, He could no longer remain indifferent: he was hated by her, stopped by her, and seen by her, everything went as planned.
Reader comments
It is not a cool novel. It focuses on the daily life and frustrations and hardships experienced by the protagonist. The original plot accounts for a small proportion, the time of the event has also been changed, and almost only key nodes appear.
The protagonist is a very ordinary person, not strong or smart, and has the shortcomings of ordinary people. She is a sensitive girl who thinks a lot and cares a lot. So you will make mistakes and get frustrated.
There is a little villain who will occasionally come out and jump around after being defeated, like an annoying little flying insect.
Although it's a bit late to officially be together, it's still different after falling in love.
The daily interactions with friends are also very real, such as quarreling and having a cold war but then making up, or feeling sad that a friend has a closer friend.
I am personally not satisfied with the handling of Barty Jr. His role is only worthy of a sentence (obviously he has more personal roles than Voldemort), and I personally think that cosplayers should be dedicated to every detail, but it may be that something that is not within the scope of cosplay has been exposed.
It's rare to see this kind of gentle writing style nowadays, so after reading the early 20 chapters, I decided that it deserves to be read by more people. I hope the next plot will always be online. I like the delicate, sensitive and fragile psychological description of the young Doreen very much. The young George is also very cute in his awkwardness. Doreen's gloomy childhood needs many little suns around her to heal. Maybe this is why the CP chose George Weasley.
The early stage of the heroine's character is like a fire that never goes out, with the power to destroy the world. The more you get in the future, the more afraid you will be of losing it. Instead, you will become awkward and care about what others think. Fortunately, the heroine has been growing. Maybe she will never be able to accept the loss, but she will no longer be trapped in the same place.
Looking at the troubles that the heroine got into in the early stage, I directly hallucinated that I was a child. Fortunately, the heroine still knows how to ask adults for help. She really has the recklessness of a newborn calf who is not afraid of tigers. How can a person get into such a big disaster? [Cover face]
The heroine's uneasiness and panic are all portrayed very delicately. The relationship between the heroine and Amelia is also very good, and the emotional line with George has a unique flavor.
Maybe it's because I wasn't focused, but I felt that many of the plots were vague and not very specific. The author is already very good lyrically, but the narrative can be improved.
I think this book is a very good book. The writing is very delicate and gentle. It is not only about love but also a book about growth. It uses the HP world as the background to write the story of the heroine's tenacity and growth. I think the heroine's background is tenacity, courage, and unyielding. Although she will be frightened when facing new things, she will be expecting and overwhelmed at the beginning of making friends, and will make some small mistakes. She will also be grateful for the kindness of others, and will lose herself because she attaches too much importance to friendship. But in the end, she will face herself bravely, admit her mistakes, and grow up bravely. This is the commendable thing about this book. It's not a cool novel, but a story about growing up. I think it's very touching and relevant to life. I think this book resonates because many people over-emphasize friendship and lose themselves when it comes to friendship. The heroine gives us one of the solutions.
The words have a sense of unreality, especially at the end of the first grade, which conveys the chaotic spirit and emotions through words. It was so delicate that it reminded me of some things from the past. Although a little sad, it is undeniable that it is indeed a very good book.
It is not a cool novel. It focuses on the daily life and frustrations and hardships experienced by the protagonist. The original plot accounts for a small proportion, the time of the event has also been changed, and almost only key nodes appear. The protagonist is a very ordinary person, not strong or smart, and has the shortcomings of ordinary people. She is a sensitive girl who thinks a lot and cares a lot. So you will make mistakes and get frustrated. There is a little villain who will occasionally come out and jump around after being defeated, like an annoying little flying insect. Although it's a bit late to officially be together, it's still different after falling in love. The daily interactions with friends are also very real, such as quarreling and having a cold war but then making up, or feeling sad that a friend has a closer friend. I am personally not satisfied with the handling of Barty Jr. His role is only worthy of a sentence (obviously he has more personal roles than Voldemort), and I personally think that cosplayers should be dedicated to every detail, but it may be that something that is not within the scope of cosplay has been exposed.
It's rare to see this kind of gentle writing style nowadays, so after reading the early 20 chapters, I decided that it deserves to be read by more people. I hope the next plot will always be online. I like the delicate, sensitive and fragile psychological description of the young Doreen very much. The young George is also very cute in his awkwardness. Doreen's gloomy childhood needs many little suns around her to heal. Maybe this is why the CP chose George Weasley.
The early stage of the heroine's character is like a fire that never goes out, with the power to destroy the world. The more you get in the future, the more afraid you will be of losing it. Instead, you will become awkward and care about what others think. Fortunately, the heroine has been growing. Maybe she will never be able to accept the loss, but she will no longer be trapped in the same place. Looking at the troubles that the heroine got into in the early stage, I directly hallucinated that I was a child. Fortunately, the heroine still knows how to ask adults for help. She really has the recklessness of a newborn calf who is not afraid of tigers. How can a person get into such a big disaster? [Cover face] The heroine's uneasiness and panic are all portrayed very delicately. The relationship between the heroine and Amelia is also very good, and the emotional line with George has a unique flavor. Maybe it's because I wasn't focused, but I felt that many of the plots were vague and not very specific. The author is already very good lyrically, but the narrative can be improved.
I think this book is a very good book. The writing is very delicate and gentle. It is not only about love but also a book about growth. It uses the HP world as the background to write the story of the heroine's tenacity and growth. I think the heroine's background is tenacity, courage, and unyielding. Although she will be frightened when facing new things, she will be expecting and overwhelmed at the beginning of making friends, and will make some small mistakes. She will also be grateful for the kindness of others, and will lose herself because she attaches too much importance to friendship. But in the end, she will face herself bravely, admit her mistakes, and grow up bravely. This is the commendable thing about this book. It's not a cool novel, but a story about growing up. I think it's very touching and relevant to life. I think this book resonates because many people over-emphasize friendship and lose themselves when it comes to friendship. The heroine gives us one of the solutions.
The words have a sense of unreality, especially at the end of the first grade, which conveys the chaotic spirit and emotions through words. It was so delicate that it reminded me of some things from the past. Although a little sad, it is undeniable that it is indeed a very good book.