Freshman Year Begins, Keeping the Cool School Beauty in Black Stockings

This is the real Godly Wen, who has absolute dominance over the harem, and it is not some stupid redemption through hard licking. The real redemption is to give her material and status but she must be obedient. If she is not obedient, there will be nothing. The protagonist is not like other god-like novels, the fake god-like novel is as serious as a virgin. The protagonist of this book plays real and exciting games. Come on, author, keep writing, preferably more every day.

Okay, I have read dozens of chapters so far, and there is really nothing wrong with it. Brothers, if you like multiple heroines or harems, you can give it a look. The author brother's awareness of lightning protection is still good. It is quite good in the tomato refreshing genre. Something is wrong now when I see Chapter 92. Brothers, the traces of his AI polishing are a bit more prominent. I feel that it is a bit AI, the protagonist has a bit of a human-machine feel, and the description feels a bit formatted. .

The main tag is "No Dog Licking", which is different from other heroic novels where the male protagonist is humble and pursues girls. The male protagonist in this book has absolute initiative. Money is a tool to control others, not a bargaining chip to please. [Learned] While some other powerful male protagonists will unconditionally tolerate the female protagonist, give unilaterally, and wrong themselves, the male protagonist in this book takes full initiative and will not be humble to please, which is suitable for readers who hate dog-licking plots. ✐———— Also, if you have money, you can use it immediately. There is no depressing scene of long-term suppression by villains or humiliation if you don't have money. You can use money to solve all conflicts as long as you appear on the stage, which gives a strong sense of relief. There is no plot [no cuckold, beggar, and minotaur] to avoid the most disgusting points for male readers. It is guaranteed that there will be no plot of empathy or betrayal by the female protagonist throughout the whole process. The possessiveness of boys is fully given, and the reading has a strong sense of immersion. [Sinister smile]

He is a very special writer. He has no pretentiousness and started out as a system. However, without Shen Zhiyi's dark side and Yan Qingwu's capital side, he would not be able to achieve anything. In addition, there is no feeling of a powerful stallion. Although there are many women, it is more due to the influence of capital and native family. Mu Changge is a school beauty. She was harassed because of her beauty, but her native family has no father, orphans and widows, her younger sister goes to school, her mother is weak, poor and harassed by relatives. She urgently needs a man to stand up and give her a sense of security and financial help. Because her father died early, she developed a character that always takes her husband as her priority and never fights for it. By chance, she became the first woman after the male protagonist established the system, and became the main palace. Su Banxia is a beautiful doormat, the cat and dog combination of Han Shuyao and Gu Nian is also very interesting, and ex-girlfriend Gu Xingyue is also a perfect ex-girlfriend.

It's a great bathroom. The bathroom room is in a great location. The decoration is beautiful and warm. The room is clean and tidy. The upgraded Home Inn has very good sanitary conditions. There is a parking lot. The front desk service is enthusiastic. The staff are very good. The shower water flow is large. The hot water temperature is suitable. The bathroom items are neatly placed and the TV is large. The restrooms are very close to various tourist attractions, making travel convenient. Will come again~~ The service attitude is good, the bathroom is clean, the bath towels are packaged, so you can use them with confidence, there is breakfast, the steamed buns taste good, you need to swipe your card to go to the elevator, I feel very safe, the bathroom faucet is large, and the shower is very comfortable

As a book review, it should be an objective evaluation, stating the advantages and disadvantages of the book (my opinion) Advantages: The male protagonist does not lick or do anything, and has control over the harem. The previous female protagonists have portrayed them more perfectly. Disadvantages: There are too many heroines, and the heroines who appear later have basically no words. The heroines in the front are hidden and appear once in the next few chapters. The system rewards are diluted, the strategy progress is diluted, the sense of loyalty is diluted, the characterization is not clear enough, and there is too much homogeneity. It is recommended to reduce redundant characterization, strengthen the description of the female protagonist, and add some daily life of the male and female protagonists, so that it will not make people feel tired, let the male protagonists have their own space, and just treat the marginal characters as untouchable. The heroine can be written in XP, otherwise the heroine's character will be too single For example: 1 Be strict with yourself 2McDonald's 3 Chi Lu 4 female imp There are many more similar ones, I hope the author will keep up the good work

The writing is quite good. I finished reading it in one afternoon. What can I say? In the end, the protagonist's treatment of other women except for Mu and Su is a bit too homogeneous. I mean the attitude of the protagonist, but these female characters themselves are still quite vivid. Come on, I can only say

Advantages: The urban harem god novel is not like other god novels where you need to complete tasks and earn 100 million directly every day. The characters have distinct personalities and unique characteristics. They do not pretend to be cool for the sake of showing off, nor do they deliberately keep a low profile because of the people around them. The ex-girlfriend who broke up did not regret the plot of stalking her, but portrayed her very well; she is not fast in driving, but she can play wildly. Disadvantages: The AI flavor is a bit heavy, and the heroine's emotional line is a bit weird. It feels like playing a game. After one or more heroines are turned on, other heroines appear in the same background. For example, Mu Changge, who was placed in the queen's position by the author, although her plot is not completely gone after the strategy, she basically appears when it is necessary to advance other heroines. If it weren't for the characteristics of the characters, some of the characters in the front may forget who they are again.

In fact, it feels okay, and it feels like a god. It's just that after watching it for a long time, I always feel that the protagonist is a bit artificial at times, seems a bit sloppy, condescending, and less humane. Sometimes you have to be reserved even though you obviously like it, but sometimes it feels better to take the initiative. Be reserved when you should be reserved, and be proactive when you should be proactive, so that you will feel more like a human being.

The front part is the most ordinary novel, with a bad plot and some poisonous points. It was originally meant to pass the time, but in chapters 70 and 80, some of the plots are quite touching and eye-catching, and the characters are particularly three-dimensional. The problem is that the previous plot is too watery, and it is difficult to think about the writing. The pen exploded, but it ended like a bean. A little flash can't change the mediocrity. However, I can write something unique and worthy of four stars in Tomato. It's not a waste of time. I hope to see the author's truly polished work. I feel it still has great potential. I look forward to [Sending Hearts]

It's really well written and looks great. Although it's a bit cliche, it's not bad at all. The writing is okay. Please give me a good review to support it. And the author, can you add some updates and give me a nice word?

This is the only one among the novels about heroes and heroines. The male protagonist does not follow the traditional dog-licking mythology routine. He takes the lead from the beginning. He does not deliberately kneel down and lick the school beauty. He takes the initiative in both finances and relationships. There is no forced Madonna-style redemption plot. Moreover, the entry threshold is low, the fun points are intensive, the pace is fast, and there is no delay. There are also multiple heroines in the setting. Each character has different memory points and distinct images. When dealing with the relationship with the heroines, he is not a stallion or an illogical backlash, which is very good.

I'm following the big team here to post a book review. This work is an outstanding work by Shen Haowen. The story is interesting, the characters are distinct, and the postures are rich (many chapters need to be searched by yourself); the protagonist's generosity is not reflected in how he uses money but how he uses money to control people. Of course, I personally feel that this book also has shortcomings. First of all, the setting of several female protagonists was forced in the early stage in order to establish the character of the protagonist; secondly, there are too many storylines inserted, which makes the structure of the story not so strict; thirdly, the details of many storylines are not so full. For example, in the manor stage of the style contest, a lot of life content is completely missing. But on another level, if the author enriches the story line and releases a supplementary version, the quality of this book will probably not be inferior to that of Jin Lin.

There's something about it. Although some parts are not refreshing enough and a little bit toxic, in general it's a relatively good Shenhaoshuang article, with a score of 8.5 Or above. If the details are polished, it can get a score of 9. Keep up the good work.

It's great. It's so beautiful. I saw 35 in one go. They are all trivial matters.

Absolutely beautiful! Absolutely nothing corny! Absolutely no brainlessness! I definitely didn't say anything sarcastic! It's great that the heroine is lucky enough to meet the hero even when she's in trouble!

It's not bad, I can watch it. I remember that the part about buying a yoga studio is a little bit toxic. I can't stand it, and I might be persuaded to quit. I forgot what the poisonous point is. I seemed to be eating when I was watching this paragraph, so I didn't pay attention. I probably glanced at it a few times. I passed it after taking a closer look, and then continued reading. I have finished reading it now. I am waiting for the update. I can only say that it is okay. The writing at the back is better than the front. As I was typing, I suddenly remembered something. A 50-meter yacht can carry more than 100 people. I was afraid that I had no idea. I went to Douyin to search After a while (the difference between yachts and cruise ships is quite big), domestic yachts have a limit on the number of people. Even if you put this aside, if you want to say whether 100 people (not counting the captain, crew, cook) can stand on it, then it must be possible. By describing the protagonist on the second floor, no one can get on, this space... And there are tasks to be done. It feels like the bus seats are full and a group of people are doing tasks inside. Can it be used? This point is okay. I don't want to dwell on this data. I mainly read the plot. The other ones are okay, I guess. The first one is just okay, but the second one is pretty good and has a lot of feeling. I just picked up a copy.

Absolutely refreshing article, it feels so good to abandon the brain (I am not saying that the author of this article is brainless, this is a personal preference) The details of everyone's expressions and actions are well written, the characters are vividly depicted, and they are very idealized.

Come on, author, as a student, this is my first reward from you, even though there is only one. A very light 3 cent gift. When I read Chapter 68, I saw that this author has written a new connotation. It is different from the angry worldliness and mindless domineeringness of other authors such as the harem gods. This protagonist wrote it. It would be better if it has a certain depth of content and a moral bottom line. And the main character is also very interesting, like the author. I think it's great. But the previous writing is indeed as bad as other authors. [Blowing kiss]

It's good, the male protagonist doesn't make people uncomfortable

Full marks without a doubt This book deserves a rating of no less than 9.5 Clear logic and novel ideas Also, I hope that since this book is novel, it might as well include two royal empresses. Although Baby Xingyue "left" when Su ran out of money, But Mu Changge was attracted to Su after he got rich, and everyone knows the power of Bai Yueguang. This is what Baby Xingyue deserves. I hope the author can consider this.

To be honest, according to Shenhao Shuangwen, it is quite enjoyable, but it is only a novel, and many things are only in novels. It is too boring in reality, so don't get involved. I have seen the scenery from high places. Well, that's it. According to Shuangwen, there is nothing wrong with giving it 4 stars or more. The writing is online, the plot arrangement is also reasonable, the plot and characters are not conflicting, and the handling is particularly good.

The book was gone that day, and it was the fault of Chapters 95 and 96. Did the author want to eat purple pills, and be careful about contracting embedded acute iron poisoning [laughter] [laughter] [laughter] Take it easy, don't stop updating [cry] [cry] [cry] The author's writing is really good, one of the few great novels in Tomato that I can read [adoration][adoration][adoration]

Of course it is a very good article, but I always feel that I have brought it into the wrong article [face covering]. I only see the powerlessness of ordinary people in the face of capital, and the envy of the male protagonist [already planted] [please update] [top post]

The plot is quite exciting. It's more interesting than ordinary literary works.

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The previous chapter is an ordinary novel, but starting from Chapter 14, the characters gradually become three-dimensional, which is a rare masterpiece.

I have read more than 300 chapters. Generally speaking, there are not many bad points, and the further you look at it, the better it gets. The description of human nature is good. I like the ex-girlfriend line better, haha, especially the description of high school. I always like it.

[Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] I don't know what to say. I finished other novels very quickly. I read several empty novels in one day. I can't bear to read this novel quickly. I slowly appreciate and fantasize every sentence, and I feel like I'm being fed.

The overall quality is still okay. There are some small bumps in the front, but they are still within the scope of reading. However, there is a big problem in the back. The protagonist exposes his parents, but the question of where the protagonist's money comes from is not mentioned throughout the whole process.