The Article of Loyalty Is in My Hand, and I Have All the Fairies in the World

Dressing is right, cultivating immortality is right, and having multiple heroines is also right Without beauty, it would be a waste of effort to cultivate My dream is to write out all the mysterious plots I have seen in a pure love way. This is just a small step towards my dream. PS: All the characters in this work are adults, and all the characters involved in the protagonist are first-time experiencers. All characters can take corresponding responsibility for their words and deeds. Reference for the realm of this article: Refining Qi→Building Foundation→Crystallization→Golden Pill→Energy→Nascent Soul→Transformation into God→Enlightenment→Ecology→Ascension to Immortality

It's fun to watch. Let's see if you can accept the character modification. I don't think it's a big deal. The overall look and feel is very good. There are no plots that make people uncomfortable. Moreover, the plot is relatively compact and the setting is good. It made me want to buy Guigu Bahuang and play [laughs] I've seen the latest chapter. Why are so few people reading it? I really think it's pretty good and the lightning protection is in place. Maybe it's because the first junior sister directly modified the character entry and accepted it, so many people didn't read further. But to be honest, the subsequent heroines only added loyalty entries after the strategy was completed. I haven't seen any surprises so far, and there are no poisonous points such as Lily, Bitch, Soul Penetration, and Green. I hope the author can finish it [Sending Hearts]

Yes, after reading the first few chapters, I thought it was a dog-licking story, but it turned out to be a dog-licking story invaded by female videos. Guinan, the male protagonist of Nourishing the Stomach was very stressed out. I liked it when he accepted the junior sister and soon stopped writing. However, the transformation process and psychological description of the junior sister are a little flawed. It would be better if it was more reasonable. I haven't read it yet. I have a very pure character and I have to continue to maintain it. In the end, I am a little confused about how the male protagonist can judge whether Yuan Yin, who has a higher level of cultivation than himself, is there. [What] should I add a judgment function or patch to the system? Finally, I don't know why so many people are cheating. I feel that it is quite good.

It's pretty good in Tomato's new book. As for the criticisms of the comments, they are more subjective. From an objective point of view, there are no obvious criticisms. What I like better is the section after conquering the Master in the early and middle stages. The feelings about the Master are well written. The kind of little woman who resents but loves to death. The writing is OK, but the cross-map section is a bit stiff. The author may be able to add some small foreshadowing and foreshadowing about Yinshan and the monks in the early chapters, instead of leaving the reader confused as to where everyone else in the world is going and doing when crossing the map [Thinking]

The plot is smooth, there is not much lag in the plot, and the writing is enjoyable. I hope the author can write better results [Like]

The junior sister who has luck and talent is only at the 1st level of qi training. The protagonist has no luck and no talent. He takes his body through time and can't break through the 4th level of qi training, and then discovers a small secret realm. The good-looking, selfish and cautious little junior sister who is good at the first level of Qi training, and is also beautiful, actually enters the secret realm with the protagonist. . . .

It's a bit toxic in the early stages, it depends on personal preference It's okay in the middle and later stages, but I feel like after taking in the girls, they become the ornaments of the small world [Explore] A few questions: Is Yongning Prefecture just left alone? Shouldn't a natural disaster of this level bring about a loss of life? The cultivation level of the women in the family has increased a bit too slowly. At present, I feel that few can come out to help the male protagonist, and the male protagonist's combat power has increased very quickly. By then, the female protagonist has not had time to come out of the small world, and the male protagonist will be preparing to go to the next state [shocked]

He has a strong sense of lightning protection and the plot is pretty good [like]

This should be one of the books that I think is quite good. After reading it, I look forward to the author's updates every day, because there are not many good books to read. I also hope that the female protagonists Ming Yuzong received in the past will have more roles.

[Top post] The writing is smooth, the plot is ups and downs, the characters are vivid and fascinating, the story is touching, and every word is a work of ingenuity. The plot is compact and the foreshadowing is exquisite, making you want to read it! ( ╹▽╹ )

It seems so good at the moment that I can't stop it. The only drawback is that it can only accommodate two entries. I hope the author can change this in the future and accommodate a few more entries. I hope the author can work hard to update it so that it doesn't end badly.

Golden Finger is relatively new. It doesn't seem to be poisonous at present, and it can be eaten very quickly. Let's raise it with five stars first.

It seems quite comfortable so far. I hope it won't be too cliché to accept one by one. It would be too cliché for all the female supporting characters to be transformed into vases that were taken care of in one stroke.

Looks good, but no corners are covered with wood

It's okay. The only thing is that the protagonist's realm has improved too quickly. He may have gone from practicing Qi to crystallization in just a month, but people around him are not shocked at all. They just say that he is extremely talented.

Xiancao is very well written, lightning protection is very natural, and the protagonist upgrades quickly without compromising his combat power.

Okay, the system template borrowed from Guigu. Then the protagonist takes a sword at the beginning, and then teaches him with a stick [laughter]

Looks like gender change😳

Interesting, relatively new subject matter

It is at the top level among similar books

The system is quite new, but I feel like I have seen the same characters in a dozen books for some people.

The heroine's personality entries are divided into several parts. The male protagonist can change some of the personality entries, but overall it feels like being controlled by the male protagonist. I think it's pretty good, and the writing is also okay.

Not bad, the plot design is quite good😁

It's pretty cool. It would be even better if you could play the Drunken Mad Knife, which allows you to chop infinitely [angry] Authors, don't be influenced by the rhythm of the comment section. Just follow your own outline.

Interesting! The character is normal. It looks more comfortable (so far)

It's very rhythmic and feels more fresh when read compared to other system novels.

Love it. I wonder if the author has eaten any unripe grapes.

The writing is quite good, but it's just like collecting stamps. After the previous heroine collected them, she couldn't find this person at all.

In the Naomo game, which is a fairy-like game, cultivation and resource acquisition are all handled in one go. The more important thing is to draw lines to conquer the harem.

Come on, write about the emperor's uncle's big brother