Ultraman: The Female Ultraman of the Minecraft World

The writing is very good, but can the emotional scenes be removed? The battle scenes would be great.

It's very interesting. It has common human greed, human backbone, a story about wanting to wear a crown and having to bear its weight, and a warrior with a despicable personality but who is still brave enough to fight for humanity. The protagonist is indeed Ultraman, who can put aside his prejudices and save everyone within his power. This is very interesting. Anyway, the people here have many sides. It can be called a profound reflection of the complexity of human nature, or it can be called a bit separated in personality. It depends on your personal interpretation. Finally, although I quite like reading Lily, it's best not to touch it. Ultraman and human beings in Endless Life are based on longevity, but the main reason is that many authors are very easy to break down when writing this. Obviously they have written very well before, but when they write about emotions, their books collapse to death due to too many tomatoes.

The combat power is severely suppressed, and the experience is actually limited. The pressure level is too heavy

Yes, there is no problem. The female protagonist does not bring any bad side effects, the conflict of values is not big, and the introduction of the character does not seem abrupt. His writing skills declined severely in the later period. The content that returns to the main world is currently 14 chapters long and cannot lead to the main character, and the content tends to be cliche and boring.

Great book! What a great book! A simple and clear explanation of why Leo was whipped hard by Seven 😏😏😏 Just pretend I didn't say it

Well written, I hope there is no cp

Not bad, keep up the good work. When I first saw the cover, I thought it was about Ultraman's power acquisition in the MC-based world view. After reading it, I found that it turned out to be an arcane world with an original world view. Humans have a certain ability to resist aliens. The protagonist, as a bottom-line existence, has his own life, and the earth also has its own power. This is very good. The setting of classic Ultraman plus Leonix, who was "betrayed" in the process of protecting mankind, and reflected on his own existence as Ultraman and at the same time as a human being. There are almost no poisonous spots, and food and grass can enter.

The writing is quite good, but the fighting part is the fighting part. You can write some emotional lines, but don't overwhelm the protagonist. It's okay to mention it a little to enrich the emotions. I also suggest that sometimes you don't write the secondary parts too much. Once you are used to writing the protagonist, don't use a large space to describe a supporting role, unless you really want to establish a heroine.

It's hard to open that Minecraft game, but the author is a cloud player.

It's very good. She is a rare female Ultraman. The characters, plot, protagonist and supporting roles are generally well written. The good, evil and desires of human beings are also well expressed. I just don't know how to arrange the boss at the end of this book. The protagonist has a lot of light. In the end, will they be separated or all integrated? And how to write the protagonist's final destination and self-definition? In other words, the ending must not be a mess.