Ultra: Obtain the Light of Carmilla at the Beginning

The writing is very good, but can the emotional scenes be removed? The battle scenes would be great.

It's very interesting. It has common human greed, human backbone, a story about wanting to wear a crown and having to bear its weight, and a warrior with a despicable personality but who is still brave enough to fight for humanity. The protagonist is indeed Ultraman, who can put aside his prejudices and save everyone within his power. This is very interesting. Anyway, the people here have many sides. It can be called a profound reflection of the complexity of human nature, or it can be called a bit separated in personality. It depends on your personal interpretation. Finally, although I quite like reading Lily, it's best not to touch it. Ultraman and human beings in Endless Life are based on longevity, but the main reason is that many authors are very easy to break down when writing this. Obviously they have written very well before, but when they write about emotions, their books collapse to death due to too many tomatoes.

The combat power is severely suppressed, and the experience is actually limited. The pressure level is too heavy

Yes, there is no problem. The female protagonist does not bring any bad side effects, the conflict of values is not big, and the introduction of the character does not seem abrupt. His writing skills declined severely in the later period. The content that returns to the main world is currently 14 chapters long and cannot lead to the main character, and the content tends to be cliche and boring.

Well written, I hope there is no cp

Great book! What a great book! A simple and clear explanation of why Leo was whipped hard by Seven [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] Just pretend I didn't say it

Not bad, keep up the good work. When I first saw the cover, I thought it was about Ultraman's power acquisition in the MC-based world view. After reading it, I found that it turned out to be an arcane world with an original world view. Humans have a certain ability to resist aliens. The protagonist, as a bottom-line existence, has his own life, and the earth also has its own power. This is very good. The setting of classic Ultraman plus Leonix, who was "betrayed" in the process of protecting mankind, and reflected on his own existence as Ultraman and at the same time as a human being. There are almost no poisonous spots, and food and grass can enter.

It's hard to open that Minecraft game, but the author is a cloud player.

It's very good. She is a rare female Ultraman. The characters, plot, protagonist and supporting roles are generally well written. The good, evil and desires of human beings are also well expressed. I just don't know how to arrange the boss at the end of this book. The protagonist has a lot of light. In the end, will they be separated or all integrated? And how to write the protagonist's final destination and self-definition? In other words, the ending must not be a mess.

1 It would be very poisonous if the identity of Li in the article was known. 2. When will the author go to other worlds? Is the expected number of words more than one million words? The author should pay attention to his health and don't update too late in the underworld. The main character appears a little less frequently. Group portraits cannot be written like this.

The writing is very realistic and very interesting. It is an Ultra fanfic. It describes the bravery, greed and various psychology of human beings. Some emotional lines interspersed can also enrich the life of the human body. Otherwise, just watching monsters would be too boring [laughs]

The writing is quite good, but the fighting part is the fighting part. You can write some emotional lines, but don't overwhelm the protagonist. It's okay to mention it a little to enrich the emotions. I also suggest that sometimes you don't write the secondary parts too much. Once you are used to writing the protagonist, don't use a large space to describe a supporting role, unless you really want to establish a heroine.

A rare female Austrian question, encouraging the author

I'm very confused. I feel that the overall plot is pretty good, but I can't stand the emotional drama. I'm confused about whether to save it or not [face covering]

Very good, but I have a small suggestion. You can add a teammate later. Although I have the power of Leonix, I still think I can add a teammate, otherwise it will be easy to be kited. I also have a small suggestion. I can add the small theater in the introduction to the text later. I think it is quite interesting. As I said before, can I add some teammates? Although the protagonist has monster pets, the protagonist in the MC world and the real world cannot be perfectly balanced at the same time, so I think it is possible to add teammates. For example, if the protagonist draws a light, he can decide to give it to others. Of course, the highest control is still in the protagonist's hands. If he feels that it is not possible or is threatened, he can take it back at any time. After all, Ultraman is traditionally an Ultra Gangster, and one more person can become Ultraman and the speed of rescue is also fast. Otherwise, it will be like being targeted by flying a kite.

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It's okay, he's an Ultra spirit, but I feel like not many people are watching and I might be in jail [Thinking]

The battle scenes are pretty good to watch, and I also like the interaction with Seven, but the female neighbor is really abrupt and embarrassing. I skip it every time I see it. How can I put it, except for the emotional line, it's pretty good. It would be better if there was no CP. I want to see the scene where the father of copywriter Riott and the others see the female version of Bai Bei!

It can be seen that the author wants to sublimate the book by writing about the ugliness of human nature and the protagonist's reflection on human nature. However, the writing style is a little green, which may make it look weird. The author generally wants to imitate the Showa era. The description of the main world feels very strange. The Leo world is barely readable. The author should read more excellent works to improve his writing skills. However, it can be seen that the author is also working hard. So come on, author, you must keep writing @ hometown.

Come on, writers writing about female Olympics, don't stop. What we want to look at is the protagonist, not the supporting role. I can understand that you want to portray it, but you can't have so many. Familiar characters are okay, but forget about self-created characters. And to be honest, the protagonist has disappeared for so many chapters. This is about to become a poisonous point [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

The writing is okay. It's a rare female Ouwen. Just don't abuse the protagonist. There are too many anti-stress articles now. Come on! Update quickly! [Shy]

It's quite good-looking, except for the sudden appearance of the female neighbor and the lack of detailed description to create feelings. It doesn't matter if you ignore or skip it. Pretty good in other aspects

The battle scenes are well written, and the overall storyline is all online. If you don't like watching male videos, you can go straight to the daily articles. You can tell that the author is a boy just by reading the text (referring to male stereotypes)

Will the author's protagonist regain the ability to transform into Carmilla in the future?

I saw a dozen of them, they are very nice

Beautiful, I like Carmilla

It would be better if there were no emotional scenes

When will Carmilla come out too?

It's nice to watch. I'm just curious about one thing. Those villains know that villains in other worlds can only fail in the end. Why don't they lie down? It doesn't make any sense at all. There is no reward for winning and there is punishment for losing. Even if you win, why don't they change your form and kill you for a second?

It's so beautiful. I'm in love with Carmilla. Can I gather the Galatron Legion together?