Yandere: I Became the Eldest Lady's Only Salvation

9 Points excellent work This is a yandere novel that is very comfortable to read. His emotions are very delicate and not too abrupt The psychological description of the male protagonist is very good. He did not use straightforward words, but instead used descriptions of the heroine and the scenery. And the most praiseworthy thing is that he wrote about the normal reaction of a normal person when encountering a yandere. Moreover, the male protagonist is not mentally retarded, nor does he run away without thinking, but has an emotional change. The heroine doesn't harm the hero without thinking The only problem is the male protagonist's feelings for the female protagonist. From God's perspective, you can understand it this way (a warm man who just broke up with him met a yandere, and because of his kindness in his heart, he took her to his home for a few days, and then confessed his love to his parents after meeting his parents. The man actually agreed. I seriously doubt that it was the man who felt guilty about the 500,000 yuan and his father's benefactor, but the author slowly made up for his emotions later on.) "Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it.

I have read Chapter 110 so far, and the author's writing skills are quite good (especially the description of life elements). Is Lin almost controlled by Su's mysterious drug? From the original lively young man described by the author, he has become a taciturn and confused walking zombie now. Especially when Su asked about Lin's father's physical condition in the car, Lin remained unmoved. When returning home, his father mentioned Lin's mother and Lin said a few words as if a small switch was turned on. Su is happy, but I don't think this is the result Lin wants.

The writing style is pretty good in Tomato, and the style is not monotonous. The style of emotional narration and action details is somewhat similar to "In the Mountains, She Lost Control" that I have read before [Thinking], but some plot details are not right. However, some authors actively responded to corrections in the comment area and raised the score. I hope the author will not be perfunctory (——)

The early stages of this book are very well written, at least so far. The emotional confrontation between the male and female protagonists is very well written. It's very real, and it's the feedback of a normal person when he encounters this kind of emotion (it's not that he hates the heroine, but he also likes the heroine, and the heroine does help him a lot, he just wants to be free). It's not a brainless yandere. The heroine actually doesn't feel like a yandere, but a kind of mental illness. For the male protagonist, it's not like other novels that only care about the body and not the mind, but I think the turning point is when the female protagonist starts using that drug. That is, if the male protagonist relies on this drug to achieve a sweet ending with the female protagonist, I think the rating of this book will definitely not be high. My suggestion is that the male protagonist later discovers that the female protagonist is using that drug and then escapes. During a scene at the father's crematorium, he apologized to the male protagonist, and the male and female protagonists were together. I think this ending is quite good, because the heroine is not overly exaggerated. The heroine really likes her, and the hero also loves her. I just can't stand the lack of freedom

If you've watched it for ten minutes, could you please give me a review? [Crying] How many chapters should be updated every day [what]

Although the plot arrangement is a bit "up and down", and there are some unreasonable places, the emotions are very delicate. I haven't read much. Less than thirty chapters, it gave me a light and peaceful feeling. It was carefully prepared, but the handling was not smooth. But the author also said at the beginning that this is a debut novel, so it is very good. I will continue to follow it. So far, there is no yandere feeling. It is a very warm daily writing trend. I like this kind of feeling of holding the pipa and half covering the face. Next, let's taste it carefully.

After reading the first 30 chapters, the writing style tends to be realistic and delicate. The emotional development of the male and female protagonists is self-explanatory and logical. It is not pure fantasy like some other articles. Friends who like realistic writing style should not miss it.

It's well written, with a lot of empathy.

The details, emotions, and images are all well drawn. I've read Chapter 22 so far. From what I've read five years ago, I think there's nothing wrong with giving a five-star title.

This book is very beautiful. It is one of my favorite books on Tomato. The emotional descriptions of the male protagonist and the female protagonist are also very delicate. It is also very close to life and daily life. Why didn't you watch it? It's because the author's writing is so close to daily life that it's easy to bring yourself into it. I'm like a person living in a basement. When exposed to such content, I am not in the mood to watch it. Very pure love very very very beautiful.

It's written like a god who comes to fry fish. It's so beautiful. There is a kitten meowing in the corridor outside my house. My family situation is also very poor. I didn't even plan to save the kitten. It rained heavily outside and this corridor is a relatively dry place. I really feel deeply. Could it be that Just because my life is relatively poor, can't I help others? Obviously I have always wanted to help others. There is no need to be embarrassed or inferior. I prepared pure water and intestines with the lowest salt content for the kitten. This makes me feel very good [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The writing is quite good. Some of the plots are very touching and can arouse emotions. I hope the author will think more about it in the future and leave appropriate foreshadowings. There are indeed too many of the same type. Write your own style and don't be biased. The foreshadowing and narrative in the early stage are very good. Don't be too anxious later and cause the plot to be overdone.

It is highly recommended. The first part is so-so. I don't say it is not good, but I feel it is not as good-looking as the second part. It is highly recommended. I don't know what I have experienced in the first part, but the author's writing suddenly gets better in the second part. It is very good-looking.

It's really good-looking. I just hope that the male protagonist can be made tougher in the future, and he gets beaten all the time.

It's very interesting. It's a bit too close to life. I don't dare to watch it. I keep fantasizing. The more I think about it, the more I realize that my life will never be like this. The author is great. Please continue to work hard. I'll stop here. Okay, I take my words back. The sense of fragmentation is too strong when I see it in the back, as if the relationship in the front is fake, and suddenly I have changed into a different person. What the yandere pursues is to take your time and test step by step. Only through the competition and testing of others can you awaken your attributes, rather than suddenly awakening to self-strategy. This is too fake. There is so much foreshadowing in the early stage that the male protagonist suddenly feels that he has no feelings in the middle. This is too fake. The male protagonist also has an adaptation stage. If I really like someone, I don't think I will hate this feeling, and even take away the first time. If I can be liked by such a person, I will definitely not yearn for the so-called freedom.

I'm serious. This is the only book that makes me cry. When I read this article, I originally read it with the intention of playing, but I couldn't laugh while watching it. When I saw the words written by Xiaoyu's mother to Xiaoyu, I couldn't hold back the tears and kept flowing. I don't ask for anything else. I highly recommend this is a very good article.

I suggest you really read it. I am just a stranger (not a bastard), but after reading it, the writing is really good, as if I am watching my own life.

The writing style and story structure are all top-notch, but the most valuable thing is that this book may be Tomato's first book to write about the attitude of normal people towards yandere, not 🐢male, not super male

There has always been a sense of human-computer dialogue

If I want to be trapped, can anyone tell me whether I am imprisoned or not?

"Why do you hate her?" "I hate that she left so early." Lin Yu thought for a while and shook his head. "Don't hate." "Why?" "She doesn't want to leave either."

Liu Bei, don't watch with three, it will explode easily.

The author's writing is interesting. There are many places where he feels the same way. It is warm and comfortable. This novel gave me an intuitive feeling like the afternoon sun, not dry and warm.

Good article, really good article. I have nothing to say. I feel like crying. I feel the same.

All I can say is that the writing is very good, and it describes a lot of things that would happen in reality, but reality is often more cruel than in novels.

Is the male and female protagonist 99 happy? [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

The writing is sophisticated and the emotion is like a boss coming to the tomato🍅 to fry the fish.

Don't be blinded by the ratings. I hope everyone can feel the white sketch in life and the warmth in the gaps. This is the power of words

At present, the AI ​​taste is a bit strong, but the overall flaws are not outweighed, so I can give it a four points.

The writing is pretty good, but there are always some places where the left and right brains are fighting each other [laughs]