Love-Struck Obsession: I Became the Young Lady's Only Salvation

9 Points excellent work This is a yandere novel that is very comfortable to read. His emotions are very delicate and not too abrupt The psychological description of the male protagonist is very good. He did not use straightforward words, but instead used descriptions of the heroine and the scenery. And the most praiseworthy thing is that he wrote about the normal reaction of a normal person when encountering a yandere. Moreover, the male protagonist is not mentally retarded, nor does he run away without thinking, but has an emotional change. The heroine doesn't harm the hero without thinking The only problem is the male protagonist's feelings for the female protagonist. From God's perspective, you can understand it this way (a warm man who just broke up with him met a yandere, and because of his kindness in his heart, he took her to his home for a few days, and then confessed his love to his parents after meeting his parents. The man actually agreed. I seriously doubt that it was the man who felt guilty about the 500,000 yuan and his father's benefactor, but the author slowly made up for his emotions later on.) "Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it.

I have read Chapter 110 so far, and the author's writing skills are quite good (especially the description of life elements). Is Lin almost controlled by Su's mysterious drug? From the original lively young man described by the author, he has become a taciturn and confused walking zombie now. Especially when Su asked about Lin's father's physical condition in the car, Lin remained unmoved. When returning home, his father mentioned Lin's mother and Lin said a few words as if a small switch was turned on. Su is happy, but I don't think this is the result Lin wants.

The writing style is pretty good in Tomato, and the style is not monotonous. The style of emotional narration and action details is somewhat similar to "In the Mountains, She Lost Control" that I have read before 🤔, but some plot details are not right. However, some authors actively responded to corrections in the comment area and raised the score. I hope the author will not be perfunctory (——)

The early stages of this book are very well written, at least so far. The emotional confrontation between the male and female protagonists is very well written. It's very real, and it's the feedback of a normal person when he encounters this kind of emotion (it's not that he hates the heroine, but he also likes the heroine, and the heroine does help him a lot, he just wants to be free). It's not a brainless yandere. The heroine actually doesn't feel like a yandere, but a kind of mental illness. For the male protagonist, it's not like other novels that only care about the body and not the mind, but I think the turning point is when the female protagonist starts using that drug. That is, if the male protagonist relies on this drug to achieve a sweet ending with the female protagonist, I think the rating of this book will definitely not be high. My suggestion is that the male protagonist later discovers that the female protagonist is using that drug and then escapes. During a scene at the father's crematorium, he apologized to the male protagonist, and the male and female protagonists were together. I think this ending is quite good, because the heroine is not overly exaggerated. The heroine really likes her, and the hero also loves her. I just can't stand the lack of freedom

If you've watched it for ten minutes, could you please give me a review? 😢 How many chapters should be updated every day [what]

Although the plot arrangement is a bit "up and down", and there are some unreasonable places, the emotions are very delicate. I haven't read much. Less than thirty chapters, it gave me a light and peaceful feeling. It was carefully prepared, but the handling was not smooth. But the author also said at the beginning that this is a debut novel, so it is very good. I will continue to follow it. So far, there is no yandere feeling. It is a very warm daily writing trend. I like this kind of feeling of holding the pipa and half covering the face. Next, let's taste it carefully.

After reading the first 30 chapters, the writing style tends to be realistic and delicate. The emotional development of the male and female protagonists is self-explanatory and logical. It is not pure fantasy like some other articles. Friends who like realistic writing style should not miss it.

This book is very beautiful. It is one of my favorite books on Tomato. The emotional descriptions of the male protagonist and the female protagonist are also very delicate. It is also very close to life and daily life. Why didn't you watch it? It's because the author's writing is so close to daily life that it's easy to bring yourself into it. I'm like a person living in a basement. When exposed to such content, I am not in the mood to watch it. Very pure love very very very beautiful.

It's well written, with a lot of empathy.

The details, emotions, and images are all well drawn. I've read Chapter 22 so far. From what I've read five years ago, I think there's nothing wrong with giving a five-star title.