Not Being Able to Command an Individual Soldier Is Not Good Logistics

What a pity. First of all, the content is very novel, the overall storyline is also very good, and the protagonist's image is also very good. It is worth watching, but ah! But the writing style or writing power is not very good. There are many places that are obviously very flammable, but the author does not ignite it, which makes me feel out of breath when I read it. The author's writing skills are also not good in the group portrait part, and the feeling of the group portrait is not depicted. In terms of emotional expression, I also feel that the expression is not delicate enough and too formulaic. Many places feel like writing a "composition". Five stars encourage me, because I feel that this novel could actually be written better. There are many areas that are worthy of refinement. What attracted me to continue reading was the overall story frame and the image of the heroine. However, the author's writing skills are not enough. When I read it, I felt like I was not up to par. It was a bit uncomfortable. It is really a pity. The outline is very good. If the high-burning plot and group portrait characterization can be strengthened, it would really be better QAQ

First of all, the character background is really good, and logistics soldiers are rare. Then I talked about my biggest feeling, which gave me a sense of powerlessness. It's that feeling of powerlessness that comes with being unable to sing the highest part of the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau after being prepared for a long time. I feel that the author wanted to write a pretense of a scene in which the oars and oars were turned into ashes while talking and laughing, but it gave me the impression that it was almost there, but it ended up falling flat. It's different from other situations where I knew he was going to pretend but was caught off guard anyway. This kind of situation is when I was waiting for you to pretend, and you also pretended but it wasn't enough. The language is not good. If there is any offense, it will be deleted.

I recently read one of my favorite articles. The perspective of logistics is very good, especially since the protagonist does not have to be a numerical monster.

Let me summarize it first. It's a plain and refreshing article. As far as the conceptual process is concerned, there is no problem, but the pace is too fast. I think the only regret about this book is that there are too few words. I think the content of this book can be expanded into a novel worth 500,000 to 800,000 yuan. The process is too fast, and some things are just skipped over in a hurry, which makes people less than happy to read it, but after reading it, I don't have so many regrets. You can see the heroine's perseverance in this article, and you can also see some of Balabala's qualities. The author's description or cognition of logistics work types. For me who don't know much about it, I think it is very complete and shows me a different composition of the army. I think among the military-related articles in this app, I think this one is excellent. Its direction and vision are very different from other books. I think this book is very good, but it's a pity that there are too few words.

It's very well written, keep writing. As long as it doesn't collapse, I will keep reading [][][][][][][][SHY][SHY][SHY][SHY][SHY]

I never thought a short story could be so complete and beautiful. 1️⃣The storyline is rich and the characters are three-dimensional. The pace is fast, but the story line is complete. 2️⃣It is very comfortable to read through as a whole. It has logic and plot, no deliberate sensationalism and no inexplicable love. 3️⃣Me! Real! I like it so much! ! !

A very good story about an interstellar military academy. There are no exaggerated plots, only personal abilities and efforts. It is very touching. It is not the illusory feeling of coolness that comes with a golden finger, but satisfaction and success achieved by relying on one's own abilities [Like]

I can always find a new book in every period of fatigue. It is not a new update, but a novel content. It can be S-level, SS, SSS, and even higher. However, in the memory of focusing on oneself in the face of unchangeable talent, I have only read this one. Lin Wan's existence changed the mainstream view and changed the fate of some low-level sentinels such as Shen Zhizhou. Times have changed now, and there are fewer and fewer human trafficking subsystems. The system in this article is a merit system. Its only purpose of existence is to accompany and give, to bring new life to its host, Lin Wan, who is also a hero. After completing its mission, it will quietly leave. No one knows its existence, but Lin Wan remembers it, and the interstellar people remember the short-lived Lin Wan! Finally, heroes should not leave sadly. If you can make a wish, I hope there really is a merit system in the world so that heroes can have a chance to be reborn.

The author's writing style is very good, and the description of the war is very accurate. The only regret is that it is like reading the abridged version of the article. Many relatively realistic scenes are not written. Every time when it is the most exciting, it can drive the reader to a very burning scene, but the result is nothing. The heroine is so powerful, and it is broadcast live, but the opinions of the senior management and the masses are not written. If these are added, and it is written to about 200-300 chapters, it will be a very exciting novel! It's still a five-star review. I look forward to the author's next book. I'm very hopeful!

The cruelty of war has always been amazing. Without good commanders, those who have sacrificed their lives to achieve victory will always use the confidence planted by their predecessors step by step to find a possible opportunity. When a morning star appears, they will stand till the end and tell the truth. There are many opportunities and many ways.

The writing (●v●)✍🏻 is very good. The heroine is three-dimensional and vivid, very vivid⌯oᴗo⌯. It is a book that can be read. I want to know the following short article. Why is it called a short article? Because the author is too short, I haven't read enough and it's over. It's hard to calm down [crazy][crazy][crazy]

It's good to watch. I only saw the first game, but the pace is just right, neither procrastinating nor perfunctory. Every small match point has something new to watch. I hope it will be the same in the future [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Well, the ending came unexpectedly. I feel like I've reached the ending just after I read it. It should be the shortest novel I like to read, right? But, it's really beautiful! It's not long just for the sake of being long, every chapter is the essence and makes people cry when reading it! I generally don't read novels without CP, and I generally don't write book reviews, but this article, like the heroine, remains in my most beautiful memory! I hope the next article will be a little longer [Sending my heart]

A very real war, cruel and ruthless, but the writing style and Lin Wan made this article not overly depressing, and the plot pace is also fast. Lin Wan's character is very full and charming, but she was a bit disappointed at the end. Will she be able to write an interstellar extra? I want to know how Lin Wan will be commemorated.

I rarely review a book, but the heroine of this book is outstanding. It makes me believe that there is really such a determined soldier who is maintaining the entire battlefield in logistics. It's a pity that it's too short. It would be great if it could be expanded into a longer story. Many supporting characters are not portrayed deeply enough. But I really like the heroine.

I'm really touched. This article made me cry. Compared to the hot-blooded mecha battle, the protagonist is more calm, steady, reliable, precise, and gentle. This is the first time I read an article about a logistics professional protagonist.

Good-looking, but not good enough. He's still a cub.

It's so good-looking. The role of logistics is very good and very attractive.

A comfortable short interstellar article. It was the first time I encountered an interstellar military school essay competition. After finishing the competition, I rushed to the battlefield and it didn't take long for the battlefield to die. The heroine became the commander-in-chief and mankind finally won. The total of the article is only 220,000 words. There are no weird points, it's quite comfortable. The heroine's system is purely about good people and good deeds. The heroine's logistical thinking is also a novel perspective in handling most wars.

It's a book with no flaws, many plots moved me very much, and the rating of just over 7 is too low [Punch Out][Punch Out]

What a charming writing style. Reading this book, I feel like giving the heroine a thumbs up is actually humiliating the heroine. It's very beautiful, but it's a competitive novel without CP. The heroine has no teammates in the narrow sense. Her teammates are only herself. She uses all her brains to figure it out. She's too strong.

Very nice article

Overall not bad

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"It's enough." "He who sees everything is destined to bear everything." "Life should be like that. It's not because of how strong you are, but because you are willing to take the time to think about it." "Afraid." "But, some people have to do some things." Lin Wan said.

The protagonist is not so much a "woman" as a "person" This is the highest compliment I can think of.

It's good to watch, but I feel like I'm in a hurry to finish it. It would be better if it could be written in detail.

The author really likes the sentence pattern of "It's not... It's not... But...". It must be included in every paragraph later. I suggest you modify it. When listening to the book, it feels like listening to the parallel sentences in a composition. I can't stand it anymore.

Five-star praise [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] is really super good-looking, with a female protagonist. It is suitable for people who like to watch strong women. It has already tied the number [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts]

It's so beautiful that you won't regret watching it. The story is concise and compact, I like it😍