I Picked up a Little Sister and Came Home, but I Didn't Expect That She Was a Sick Girl.

The front is very good, the middle is very good, Lin Bao is a great, gentle and strong little angel, Gao Shen is also a person, I haven't finished watching it yet, I just watched Chasing Wife, it just caught us Lin Bao and tortured us, the abominable Gao Shen came out and elbowed me, I want to snatch Lin Bao ૮₍ꐦ -᷅ ⤙ -᷄ ₎ა At first, I really liked the character Xiao Yi. He is cute, possessive and sinister, which suits my XP very well. However, after planning the kidnapping and condoning the harm, my favorability towards Gao Shen was really reduced. [Grief]

It's good to read, I hope I can read it, why do I always find my favorite novels when I'm about to go to school [crying]

First of all, I gave this score not because it is very good, but because it is too low. This book cannot be said to be less than 8 points. This book deserves 8 points, of course. Sharp comment: First of all, why did Shen immediately become possessive after being picked up? Why love? In my opinion, how can a child with a mental age of 6 years think of love first. This is a bit unreasonable. I thought it was rebirth, but I didn't see the so-called rebirth after reading it over. Secondly, the young Shen and Lin before Tsukuyomi were a bit hypocritical. It's really hard to understand Lin's behavior before Tsukiyomi. (This characteristic is shared by many people in this article) He still forced Shen even though he knew she had a mental problem. This is a problem in many novels. I know this is creating conflicts to promote the development of the story, but there are better ways to deal with it. Third, Tsukuyomi, in the world of Tsukuyomi, it would be better to let Lin spend her whole life in it and let her watch her "normal sister" get married and live a life of old age, illness and death. It would be better, and it would make her more anxious. Praise the author, the author is very interactive. Basically, I will read every article carefully and there will be responses. It is a very good author. Except for the questions I pointed out, the author has done a pretty good job. It may not be classic enough, but it is still a masterpiece. The work is above average, and the language is relatively simple, without too much over-embellishment. However, I hope that the author will just make it up next time, otherwise it may really cause drama, such as "The Story of East China Normal University" I would recommend that the next time the author writes about a yandere, he should write about a yandere who has been raised. A yandere who has grown up is not suitable for the author. It is best to write about an iceberg yandere. The kind of coercion that is said (troublesome) while being willing is too touching. As the author's debut novel, this work is already very good. At the same time, I hope that the author can refine the words next time. Only when he has hope can he create a classic. Only by thinking about it day and night and investing his body and mind in the novel can he succeed. There are also some minor problems that the author could have avoided by paying more attention. Besides! ! ! ! ! ! ! What does not update mean? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? If you are sick and call for sick leave, just say it if you are not feeling well. I don't want to update a chapter in three days. I don't want it to happen again. I will give you a gift (although it is not much) and update me. Thank you to the author.

Five stars for the fairy setting and beautiful writing! The combination of dual heroines + yandere + redemption really irritates me! The process of Lin Wanxing pulling Shen Zhiyi out of the darkness was really sweet and sad, especially the part of "Chasing His Wife at the Crematorium", which made me scream like crazy! Although there are dark elements of kidnapping and imprisonment, the author handles it just right and the tension is full. The sisters just rush and it's over [laughing]

This novel is very authorial. This is the first time I read a novel with such an active author. Almost everyone in the comment area can see the author, okay🥰. At the same time, I was very happy while reading it [laughs], so I must give it five stars. Emotional value provides full [love]

Personal evaluation: It is also very interesting, but it only has more than 100 chapters. Although I haven't finished it, what should I read after reading it? The author updates very slowly, a little faster, and the requirements are not high, four chapters a day. As for the content of the novel, I personally think it is very interesting. If you don't like it, that's fine. Finally, if you also like this novel, give the author a five-star review.

I really like Girl 1, but I felt so uncomfortable watching it from the beginning of the kidnapping. Maybe I'm a little bit more controlled, but I feel a little uncomfortable watching it anyway, and I always feel that Shen has done something wrong with Lin's father's company. It's very unethical. Although yanderes are crazy, treating Xing like that really makes Xing feel aggrieved. The scene after the key star just escaped made me even more uncomfortable. I stayed up all night, and my heart ached while watching it. After thinking about it, I'll give it 5 stars. Come on, author. I want to see how Shen can make up for Xing's feelings of kidnapping. It's really too much for Xing. [Like]

Oh [love] oh [love] oh [love] Oh [love] oh [love] oh [love]

Girl 1 is so pretty. I finally see the sister relationship I imagined [laughs]

I read it at noon yesterday and now I have finished reading it in the early morning. After reading it, I am like Feng Feng, awesome Klass, okay. Does the author know how delicious he writes? After reading it, my depressed child no longer has OD, and he no longer cuts pig trotters. I want to read 200 copies of this awesome Klass every day. Beanbao helped me generate the author's bikini photo, and Doubao told the author tomorrow's sports lottery number. The author is awesome, OS finally let me see something good. Loading is also very fast. It must be highly praised and supported. It's not old-fashioned at all, it's awesome and it ends the game directly. ! It's awesome, ok. I wish the author directly that one one will get one, two two will get four, four forty six, seven seven forty-nine, okay?

What the author wrote is also very consistent with my xp, but when it came to the kidnapping and imprisonment part... I felt a little sorry for Lin Bao. He looked like Sister Ren and Sister Duan in mind and spirit, so I added it to my bookshelf. [Send my heart] The character's personality is particularly outstanding! Lin is too soft-hearted, too crazy, too cruel.

In an instant🙃, the rules were subverted😏Who am I and who am I? Demons dance wildly🤨Right or wrong, I can suddenly understand😈The devil makes the truth begin to resuscitate😠In the fog, who is whispering🫢The highest glory, enjoy loneliness🤫Conquer with struggle🤬Conquer the anger in the world😡~The clouds are dark, the wind is roaring😡Can't let me stop - Journey Rain or shine🤬🤬The gods😇 under my feet😋 have paved a heroic road for me😔(unparalleled in the world)😏a drop of tears turning back halfway😭I only have to fight😡fight After the sky full of stars fell🥵I prayed not to leave🙏don't leave🥲The temperature could no longer be retained🥶Love has become cold😰😓cold😩(callback horse zebra😭🙏)

You all go and cook me two plates of vegetables

So far, it's okay, but Shen's possessiveness... Was a bit too strong in the early stage. She wanted to catch Lin, and catch the light that pierced the darkness. There is nothing wrong with this in itself, but the definition of the emotional turning point is a bit abrupt, and it always felt a bit awkward when I read it. But this is not bad. It is much better than those books that make me feel stomachache after just one glance. It is still within the tolerable range. Shen's possessiveness always makes me feel suffocated, and many things she does make me feel... Fearful? It makes me feel that Lin will be miserable in the future! ! ! (After all, I am a slow reader and it takes me a long time to finish a book.) However, it is quite fun to bring Shen's perspective. The world is only gray and dark, and I feel that it is meaningless. As a result, Lin breaks into this world unreasonably. She arbitrarily tears apart Shen's world with hope and light, telling Shen that your world should not be a lonely blackness, but the dazzling splendor of the extreme. You still have hope, a future, and me! What is this? I don't know much about it. I can't explain it. For now, it's redemption. But for Shen, this redemption needs to be firmly in his own hands. He can only own it, enjoy it by himself, and outline it by himself. Other dirty colors and muddy flesh and blood can't get close to it, and the light can't radiate him. No matter who you are, the light can only shine on yourself, and you can only absorb the power from it. If you can't control the light, then remove everything that can be illuminated by the light, leaving only yourself and her. Nothing in the world is important. Only she is the center. She will want to lock it, imprison it, put it in a place where no one can touch it, and raise it! If one day, the day comes when Shen really can't do anything, will he ever think about crushing the light into pieces, rubbing it into his own bones and blood, into his own heart, and into his own soul? Then we will be completely integrated into one, and you will always be mine... Do you think that as long as we leave at the exact moment, we can be reincarnated together, and in the next life, you... Will still be mine. So when that light penetrates the darkness, it is sinless, holy, and redeeming! But in the eyes of the other party, He is guilty. He has brought her broken thoughts that she had long abandoned and buried in the corner. A mortal's thoughts will pull the aloof and holy God off the altar, corrode the other person's soul, and make Him fall into the mortal world. People are greedy, and they can swallow light into their stomachs, store it in their hearts, put it in their minds, and carve it into the depths of their souls... Eat the pulp to know the taste, and the fangs will eventually appear. Ouch! After all, I have never read a book, I can't say anything, I can't write anything... In the end, I can only say that the author can actually write better, but it is not bad now and can be read, but remember to avoid some poisonous points in the next book. After all, not everyone has such a good appetite and high patience! ! ! [Laugh][laugh][laugh]

It's beautiful, it's beautiful, I love the setting of the yandere sister the most. Can the author also give me a Douyin account? I can't even find it on Douyin~~~Five-star praise given to you~[shy][shy][shy]

Overall, it's okay. Shen is a pure yandere in the early stages, absolutely dependent on and possessive of Lin. The main character is the type who will go crazy with jealousy as long as Lin nods, says something or smiles to him. She even organizes a kidnapping just to make Lin completely dependent on her. If you suggest this, this book is probably not suitable for you, because there will be imprisonment and hatred later. The only flaw that I feel is that Shen's character changes. I don't know if I missed something. The author describes it too little, which makes people feel that he suddenly changed from a yandere to a good... Lin's good dog. Except for that thing, you know, it would be better to describe this place in more detail. The change is too sudden, mainly because it changed without writing it in detail. The author's writing style is actually average, but his portrayal of emotions and some details are very good. If you can accept the setting, you can check it out! ! I wish the author better and better! ! !

It's really a good story, but there is one thing that bothers me about the soul-transportation. It happened to both the heroine and her mother. The original owner's father in the original article is the only one left. His daughter and his wife have both had the same core. I still feel pity for him. There are no other big problems.

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(It's just a personal expression, don't worry about it) (Don't ask me why I continue to watch even though I feel uncomfortable? Because I didn't read the introduction…) Author, I'm sorry. In fact, your writing is very good, but I need to delete the book now, not because the writing is not good, nor because the plot is bad, maybe it is not comfortable for me. When I read the early stage, I felt okay, but when I saw the kidnapping and imprisonment, it reminded me of some bad memories (I am definitely not blaming the author). Although it is a bit uncomfortable, I don't regret it ( To clarify again, I am definitely not blaming the author.) I am a nerd, I like to buy a lot of books, and read a lot of books. I feel that quitting halfway through reading is not very good. I feel a little disrespectful to the author. I am just saying this here to give myself a way to quit. DaDa writes very, very well. I also hope DaDa will continue to work hard. If my condition improves, I will continue to read. Come on.

I think the mastery point of this article is that Shen planned the kidnapping and started to implement it, so I am very interested in the crematorium in this article, but it is not as vigorous as I imagined. Lin should have taken out the manor and took the plane ticket and left (of course, I also know that no other author would have let her go), but it was her reason for turning back. Because I am not satisfied, and was threatened by Shen Na to commit suicide, or maybe because of my family, I have hated to threaten other people's love for you since I was a child. Shen's kneeling made Lin start to forgive her for the kidnapping case. I can only say that Lin Bao is still too kind-hearted, so overall I am not satisfied with this crematorium. Secondly, the author is very active and highly interactive with readers, and his writing style is also good, so I give this article 4 stars. The one star missing is that I personally think that the part about chasing the wife at the crematorium was not handled well, which is a bit hasty [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

I think overall it's okay, but I can still accept the heroine drugging her sister, but I can't stand it when the heroine finds someone to kidnap her sister. Overall, it's pretty good, yes.

It feels so good, almost as good as Erlang Shen watching Destiny Man. You look like Sister Duan, and I feel so good. Too bad it's not an overplayed Memoirs of a Dead Wife.

The person who can keep watching after seeing the kidnapping is a god [laughs][laughs][laughs] The author is a god, extra points

I fell in love with this book as soon as I saw that the heroine who was picked up began to behave like a yandere. It perfectly interprets morbid love and is not procrastinating. The plot is compact but not urgent and does not lack the necessary content. In short, it is highly recommended to friends who like to read yandere novels or want to get into yandere novels.

Although I haven't read much, the writing is OK. If you have anything bad to say, you can point it out to the author. He really listens to advice. For this attitude, I will also give 5 stars [send my heart]

Seeing my body warm and beautiful Is it about to end? Woohoo?

Personally, I think it's quite good-looking, and it really impressed me xp. The author is much more active, and I identified it as Hakimi [smile]

OK, this author is also awesome Klass, okay, I will tell you in the most direct, clear, and overwhelming way, go read it! !

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Both heroines feel very distressed [almost crying]