After I Transmigrated Into a Book, the Little Sister I Pampered Became Yandere

The front is very good, the middle is very good, Lin Bao is a great, gentle and strong little angel, Gao Shen is also a person, I haven't finished watching it yet, I just watched Chasing Wife, it just caught us Lin Bao and tortured us, the abominable Gao Shen came out and elbowed me, I want to snatch Lin Bao ૮₍ꐦ -᷅ ⤙ -᷄ ₎ა At first, I really liked the character Xiao Yi. He is cute, possessive and sinister, which suits my XP very well. However, after planning the kidnapping and condoning the harm, my favorability towards Gao Shen was really reduced. 🥺

It's good to read, I hope I can read it, why do I always find my favorite novels when I'm about to go to school 😢

First of all, I gave this score not because it is very good, but because it is too low. This book cannot be said to be less than 8 points. This book deserves 8 points, of course. Sharp comment: First of all, why did Shen immediately become possessive after being picked up? Why love? In my opinion, how can a child with a mental age of 6 years think of love first. This is a bit unreasonable. I thought it was rebirth, but I didn't see the so-called rebirth after reading it over. Secondly, the young Shen and Lin before Tsukuyomi were a bit hypocritical. It's really hard to understand Lin's behavior before Tsukiyomi. (This characteristic is shared by many people in this article) He still forced Shen even though he knew she had a mental problem. This is a problem in many novels. I know this is creating conflicts to promote the development of the story, but there are better ways to deal with it. Third, Tsukuyomi, in the world of Tsukuyomi, it would be better to let Lin spend her whole life in it and let her watch her "normal sister" get married and live a life of old age, illness and death. It would be better, and it would make her more anxious. Praise the author, the author is very interactive. Basically, I will read every article carefully and there will be responses. It is a very good author. Except for the questions I pointed out, the author has done a pretty good job. It may not be classic enough, but it is still a masterpiece. The work is above average, and the language is relatively simple, without too much over-embellishment. However, I hope that the author will just make it up next time, otherwise it may really cause drama, such as "The Story of East China Normal University" I would recommend that the next time the author writes about a yandere, he should write about a yandere who has been raised. A yandere who has grown up is not suitable for the author. It is best to write about an iceberg yandere. The kind of coercion that is said (troublesome) while being willing is too touching. As the author's debut novel, this work is already very good. At the same time, I hope that the author can refine the words next time. Only when he has hope can he create a classic. Only by thinking about it day and night and investing his body and mind in the novel can he succeed. There are also some minor problems that the author could have avoided by paying more attention. Besides!!!!!!! What does not update mean???????????????????????? If you are sick and call for sick leave, just say it if you are not feeling well. I don't want to update a chapter in three days. I don't want it to happen again. I will give you a gift (although it is not much) and update me. Thank you to the author.

This novel is very authorial. This is the first time I read a novel with such an active author. Almost everyone in the comment area can see the author, okay🥰. At the same time, I was very happy while reading it 😄, so I must give it five stars. Emotional value provides full ❤️

Five stars for the fairy setting and beautiful writing! The combination of dual heroines + yandere + redemption really irritates me! The process of Lin Wanxing pulling Shen Zhiyi out of the darkness was really sweet and sad, especially the part of "Chasing His Wife at the Crematorium", which made me scream like crazy! Although there are dark elements of kidnapping and imprisonment, the author handles it just right and the tension is full. The sisters just rush and it's over 🤭

Personal evaluation: It is also very interesting, but it only has more than 100 chapters. Although I haven't finished it, what should I read after reading it? The author updates very slowly, a little faster, and the requirements are not high, four chapters a day. As for the content of the novel, I personally think it is very interesting. If you don't like it, that's fine. Finally, if you also like this novel, give the author a five-star review.

I read it at noon yesterday and now I have finished reading it in the early morning. After reading it, I am like Feng Feng, awesome Klass, okay. Does the author know how delicious he writes? After reading it, my depressed child no longer has OD, and he no longer cuts pig trotters. I want to read 200 copies of this awesome Klass every day. Beanbao helped me generate the author's bikini photo, and Doubao told the author tomorrow's sports lottery number. The author is awesome, OS finally let me see something good. Loading is also very fast. It must be highly praised and supported. It's not old-fashioned at all, it's awesome and it ends the game directly. ! It's awesome, ok. I wish the author directly that one one will get one, two two will get four, four forty six, seven seven forty-nine, okay?

I really like Girl 1, but I felt so uncomfortable watching it from the beginning of the kidnapping. Maybe I'm a little bit more controlled, but I feel a little uncomfortable watching it anyway, and I always feel that Shen has done something wrong with Lin's father's company. It's very unethical. Although yanderes are crazy, treating Xing like that really makes Xing feel aggrieved. The scene after the key star just escaped made me even more uncomfortable. I stayed up all night, and my heart ached while watching it. After thinking about it, I'll give it 5 stars. Come on, author. I want to see how Shen can make up for Xing's feelings of kidnapping. It's really too much for Xing. 👍

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Girl 1 is so pretty. I finally see the sister relationship I imagined 😄