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It's good-looking, and the protagonist is well-cast. I've only seen 10 of them so far. I encountered a very uncomfortable point. Just ignore the protagonist's wishes and forcefully stick to the female mercenary. This situation is actually particularly common in early transformation novels, or novels about children who travel through time. But for me personally, this is a very uncomfortable point. It's uncomfortable to do something against the protagonist's wishes. The protagonist's physical boundaries are violated. I have to take a moment before continuing to read. Anyway, in my opinion, having such close contact regardless of the protagonist's subjective wishes, especially if it is a stranger meeting for the first time, is a serious offense to the protagonist. The character of this female mercenary is also extremely unexpected. He is a mercenary. I have been struggling in society for an unknown amount of time. How could I behave so intimately with strangers? Very inconsistent. Then he had just been injured and had just fought with wolves. The smell of herbs was true, but where did the fragrance on his body come from? The smell of blood is pretty much the same. Just like Sophia, he is the same age as the protagonist and is a child. It's not obtrusive to do something so intimate, because that's how children interact with each other. But you, a female mercenary, I forgot your name, you are already an adult, and it is wrong no matter how you think about it. It's not like something a serious adult would do.

The world view is relatively standard for Western fantasy, and there should be no private settings. The character creation is top-notch and everyone has memorable moments. The little lolita who appears to be a bitch but actually lets herself go, the arrogant little lolita who is willful but not unruly, the little lolita who is well-behaved and sensible and makes people feel distressed, and all kinds of lolita controllers (this world will come to an end, right? The storyline feels like a weak point. It feels a little step-by-step and lacks ups and downs, which means it's not interesting enough. It may also be that the writing is too detailed and the text information is diluted greatly. The result is that the Roland City volume reaches the point where it should explode and the emotions cannot be mobilized. Instead, this feeling is finally over. Overall, this is a book with great potential. It can be seen that it has a relatively far-reaching idea, and the author is quite enthusiastic. In the past seven days, it has been worth 10,000 yuan a day, so I still look forward to it with five stars.

It's worth reading. The writing style is not bad. From the mysterious black robe, it can be seen that the author is good at writing stories. It can give people the position of masters, as long as it doesn't turn into a chronicle of transforming into a dragon lady and then a god [Like]

This book is definitely worthy of this score. I'm tired of reading those cute protagonists who only act cute and the cute plots that are as useless as boiled water. I should use it to write this kind of just right secondary school with legendary and epic scenes, instead of treating it as a simple standard. The sign only comes with some sense of shame in the protagonist's character, or the kind of plot that feeds you history in different ways. It should be interrupted, and it should be exploded or not (I'm talking about you, Bai). The hometown next door is almost all the formulaic Nanbeng useless cute plot... As for the setting of the waistcoat, I have seen many authors either slow to reveal it and kill the enthusiasm of readers, or they have no emotion at all. It is better not to write. Although this book has a few minor flaws, in general, it has completely written what should be written, whether it is the characterization of the characters or the emotional support, so I don't quite understand why this book only has a low score of 8.1 Points. Maybe some plot points are not my highlight. Anyway, I am looking forward to the climax of the next chapter.

The logic is strict, there are many foreshadowings and regular recycling, and there is no sign of a new author at all. The character creation is actually more of a group portrait, and each character has a distinct personality. It is basically okay except for a few gods and figures that affect the perception. However, as a refreshing article, it is not enough to be interesting and exciting, but more like an everyday article. In fact, the cool article label can be completely removed, so that no one will read it with a filter and be persuaded to leave. Also, I really like the Emerald Warrior, and I hope there will be a good ending [laughing] Although it is cruel to say this, I still recommend that you read this book more, because it is slow-paced, but the explosive points are only so much. Now it only reaches the Elf chapter, and there will probably be Blood Tribe Chapter, Orc Chapter, Holy City Chapter and the Final Chapter later. There is still a lot of content, so if you read one volume and read it all at once, you will have a much better impression than chasing it day by day.

It's very beautiful and has excellent writing style, so I want to ask if there is a female protagonist, will it be a double female protagonist? [Adoration][Sneaky smile]

The main character has been cast off. I think this word count is okay. The main reason is that there is no need to be cast off in the beginning. The slow pace and the characterization of a few people are currently being criticized. I won't talk about the slow pace. Those who like to read will naturally read it. Regarding Yara and the previous guardian (forgot the name), the plot of Yara is indeed terrible, but it is also very real. There will always be gods in such a university. The main reason is the protagonist's attitude towards Yara. You can see it. The protagonist is not that tough on social aspects. It might be better to just write the protagonist to persuade the roommates to stay away from Yara and form a small group for isolation, but it will have a strange smell and is not in line with the style of the Oath Sage. As for how to deal with this character later, either directly reduce the plot, or influence her (I guess it is the latter), one rhythm is faster, the other slower, or let Yara realize it by herself in a certain incident. As for the two guardians, these are two basic tools, but I don't understand why they wrote a plot where they stick to the protagonist. Could it be that these two will be useful later? Or does it simply reflect the charm of the protagonist? If I had known that the academy chapter was so good, I would have wished to finish the foreshadowing part faster. In short, the shortcomings do not hide the good points. The advantage of the novel is that it can redeem the perception brought down by its shortcomings. Since I am relatively accepting of these shortcomings, it is a high-scoring masterpiece in my mind😚

This is my favorite book except "Lord of Mysteries" (ÇワΟ). This book is not like other books. The anti-routine is one of the highlights. The protagonist is portrayed normally or even favorably (I like protagonists with three correct views). More importantly, not only the protagonist, but other characters are also very vivid and distinctive, that is, they are lifelike and will grow step by step, and the reasons for promoting the development of the story are very reasonable. (The most important thing is that I think the author's future is limitless and I invest in it in advance) Come on💪! ! ! I believe you, the author, can do it! ! !

I haven't read them all yet, but it's really annoying to keep posting and repeating words. The plot unfolding after the first volume is quite surprising. Mainly because of the ups and downs of the plot. Except for the plot at the end of the first volume, the ups and downs are mostly gentle now that I have read half of it, and then the exam part. To be honest, I am not very cold. I hope there will be changes in the middle and later stages. The description of the protagonist seems a bit monotonous. The protagonist does not really stand up. If I say it again, except for a few chapters at the end of the first volume that surprised me, the rest of the writing is very bland. It doesn't make people feel how much growth it has made it become more powerful, but the growth is rarely written and it's a bit like a summary. I think the pace can actually be faster in the beginning. It would also be good to write posts after the transition to the early and late stages. This is just a personal suggestion. Let's check it out later. I'll comment later when the plot picks up. How's it going? In fact, the main thing is to post. There are too many comments from others, covering up the protagonist himself.

There are many people writing on this subject, and I have read quite a few, but this one is one of the few that is written in a non-embarrassing, comfortable way. The characters that have appeared so far are very vivid and memorable (don't underestimate this, many readers of junk Western fantasy novels may not be able to tell who is who after reading more than a hundred chapters). The motivations of the characters, including the protagonist, are also reasonable, and there are no abrupt or embarrassing plots. Overall, it is highly recommended.

A book I discovered last night has now equaled it. It was so interesting that I was so happy watching it [laughs][laughs][laughs][laughs] I enjoyed watching every plot. Occasionally, some of the small episodes are very interesting and not boring at all. This Western fantasy novel is really considered to be excellent. It's not toxic at the moment. Author, please update [laughs][laughs]

It feels good so far. It is indeed slow-paced, which is much better than the fast-paced ones I usually watch. I've only read five or six chapters so far, and I think it's pretty good, but I always feel like there's an inexplicable embarrassment in the first chapter? But overall it's still good. Give it a five-star support. I've paid serious attention to it and added it to my bookshelf.

This book is undoubtedly very interesting. After reading this book, I drew card packs in kards. I drew 10 officer card packs in one breath, a rolling wood card pack, 70 gold cards drawn during the entire establishment period, and -70 rolling trees with cars, and the invincible scum master. I was undoubtedly very happy to draw the scum master, so I formed a Yingbo survival set to prepare for the completion. , Ended up being beaten to death, no no no no no, I was undoubtedly very angry when I was beaten to death. All in all, I don't feel that this book has any poisonous points at the moment. It's just that I may have read too many college articles and am not very interested in various competitions. The writing is good, the article is quite fluent, and there are a lot of words in each chapter. If you listen to a book, one chapter can last 15 to 20 minutes. All in all, this book is really good, I like it very much, but the total number of words is too small, the author is great, please come on.

The writing is really good. The slow pace is like reading a TV series. The writing of each volume makes the plot very comfortable. I haven't seen this type of book for a long time. I feel that it can be adapted into anime. I hope this book can be updated continuously. The only shortcoming now is that there are too few.

The writing is really beautiful! 😋😋😋 Highly recommended! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] The portrayal of the protagonist Al/Mi is very good! So far, there is no sense of violation. The characters are also well created. The ones who impressed me the most so far are Luger and Lord Emerald Wolf Warrior. Luger is the kind of bear who has a naive feeling, and he has a really good personality! The part where he was bullied was really touching. I could feel the powerlessness of being an orc civilian and the heart-wrenching feeling of being threatened with the store that my parents were lucky enough to run... [I almost cried] … Emerald Wolf Warrior Hehehehe~ It's really fun to see Thomas's arrogant behavior just now~ Hehehe~[smirk][snicker][snicker] The most important thing is! There are so many words in each chapter! Delicious! 😋😋😋 (Our language organization skills are not very good, and the words do not convey the meaning... Anyway, I praise the author!!!) [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

Rating to the top! It makes you feel like you are watching a show. The characters and scenes are described in great detail, but there are not too many descriptive sentences. The characters are very comfortable. (There are just too few people) Still beautiful, still crying. It's really like watching a child grow up. Please keep updating! The big brother who writes novels! ! ! !

It's not bad. Although the cool parts are few and slow, but this can actually make the cool feeling accumulate. I hope the author can write better about the part where he explodes his vest in front of some of the protagonist's old friends. Let's see if he can make me happy after waiting for so long. I've only read half of it now, and it's still good.

ᕕ(◠ڼ◠)ᕗ Is a novel that can be followed for a long time. There are a lot of foreshadowings, and the author's grasp of the plot is also able to support it. There is nothing wrong with it except that the pace is a little slower. However, it is not a fast-paced and enjoyable novel. It is not a problem if it is more daily. [Full] Also, strengthen the Emerald Warrior (

I've read a lot of stories about Bianbaiwen, and I really like this kind of warm-paced one. Personally, I think the plot is quite interesting. Obviously, there may be some minor flaws in the front, but it's not a major problem. I hope to continue to work hard, and I'm looking forward to the rest of the plot.

Tsk, it's another good book, I'm going to start writing the essay again First of all, if you can't accept the sexual repost, don't read it. There are also post posts, if you just want to read the plot, that's fine, but I think the author's way of posting posts while advancing the plot is really good. The first chapter of the plot may be a bit delayed, but this book is only a month old. The author's progress on the plot is similar to that of other new books, but it is already 500,000 words. It can only be said that the author has written more carefully and posted more posts. If you like quick plots, don't read it. The second thing is about the protagonist's vest. When I read a book, I usually don't put the protagonist into that vest. Al has Al's characteristics, and Amy has Amy's characteristics. You can take your time whether you want to blow up the vest or not. This is a vest in the first place. How can it be good if it explodes so quickly? Little by little, there will be more guessing, but don't be too brainless, as you will become constipated after reading it. If you don't like vests, you can actually join. After the protagonist is reborn, he can basically be regarded as a new person. Amy's characteristics and personality are very complete. The first part may be affected by Al's personality a little bit, but later it will be natural. Then there's the author's writing style. Don't worry about this at all. It's getting better. It's basically the best among new authors. There's still room for improvement compared to the established ones, but it's okay. Finally, there is the issue of updates. I can only say that you, the author, really don't code all day long. You are a human being who writes so much every day. Tens of thousands of days is just normal, and there are no breaks. You should pay attention to your health. (These are all personal opinions, if you think it's wrong, it's my fault)

The pacing of the first few chapters is a bit slow. It can indeed be seen that Da Da is just starting to write, but it is not a problem to jump directly ( I have seen Chapter 40. Judging from the current performance, it goes without saying that it is great. I gave it five stars because five stars is the upper limit of the rating (and of course this book caught the airwaves very well for me) The plot is quite novel and exciting, with few or almost no routines. The characterization is impeccable, with colorful and distinct characters. The pace is a little draggy, but it's not a big problem The writing is downgraded for me😭 What a masterpiece QAQQQQQQQQ

I think this book is fully worthy of a rating of 9.3-9.6. Regardless of the empirical reflection or Sera's six-year waiting, when the protagonist feels a little relieved and blamed for his sister's death, and feels such emotional hatred for himself, I feel that the protagonist is truly alive. The social contradictions of class consciousness that are difficult to change reflected by Ruger, Sera's repression, Lucas and Genia's cheerfulness, and Lilith's tsundere are all the highlights of each character, but Littie at the beginning was indeed a little too much.

Good reviews. The language level is relatively good. There are no poisonous points, the character quality is relatively ideal, and there is no intrigue (for the time being). There are not many plot innovations and the plot is relatively slow. There are more stickers. Overall it's better than many books.

The atmosphere is rich, and the biggest advantage of a slow-burning work is that the author really knows how to play it; the script is kingly but not unconventional, and everyone's characters are very cute 🥰The fantasy of the West is quite high-end, and the only daily fun, it is straight to the point [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] (it all pays homage to the daughter of the reincarnated hero. Will there be a little white dog in the ending who drinks medicine and makes Amy give birth to a wolf elf daughter [laughs]

It is a book with a full Western fantasy style. It has its own book style. The character plot and dialogue are very in line with the Western style. It is different from other Western styles. This book feels very light and comfortable to read. The sequence chapter is particularly well written. Destruction and Rebirth. My understanding is that the heroism written in the early stage of the Western magic book is very good. This is probably the most satisfactory one I have seen on 🍅. The second volume is more daily, and the main plot has not started yet. The whole process is a daily side plot. I hope that when the second volume is completed, the next volume can enter the main plot as soon as possible. The Demon King just defeated the Demon King's subordinates who are trying to make trouble in the dark. I personally suspect that the head teacher of the school's magic law department may be an undercover agent after all, from the royal side. If I were the Demon King's subordinates, I would probably lurk around the Royal Family and slowly infiltrate into it, and then infiltrate into the academy founded by the protagonist's former partner. I am looking forward to the subsequent development of the main plot.

The twists and turns in the plot are really good. It's really enjoyable. Hua Zhihu, I may never forget you in this life.

It can be seen that this is the first time for the author to write a book, and his attitude is very serious. It is a rare feeling that he treats readers as friends. Well, the subject matter is relatively new, maybe it's because I haven't eaten fine rice bran before, but I like it better anyway. As for the fact that other people have no sense of boundaries towards the protagonist, isn't this their selling point? I've read online novels, why are they written with so many morals and boundaries? The original purpose is to look at different lives. In addition, the writing style is gradually improving. To borrow a sentence from the author: Just treat him as a developing author. Anyway, it looks good. I love watching it.

Okay, okay, although the author is writing a book for the first time, he writes really well. The only regret is that I am still in the early stages [crying] and want to read the whole book in one go. But I hope the author can grasp the rhythm of the plot [OK] Such good fairy seedlings are rare [Send my heart]

It's very good-looking. Although some female characters do like to forcefully get close to the protagonist in the early stage, I like this kind of plot. I like being bullied and admired by the beautiful big sister. The book review section said that Lei was probably confused after reading it for the first time. Is it possible that the little lolita also needs Long Aotian to be full of aggression to be satisfied?

To be honest, it's not like the author is writing a novel for the first time. The language fluency is very good, and the plot is also good. But seeing that the protagonist in the current chapter is still in the form of a lolita, I prefer a girly one [smile] [air kiss]