HP Was Forced to Become a God in the Magic World

Followed from jj, comment again. First of all, this is really a great HP fanfic! ! I like this story so much. The author created a utopian Hogwarts for us. Although there were difficulties in the process, it was not a problem at all with Elsa's push. And Elsa blends into the original trio so smoothly, as if it comes naturally, and it's the four of you who should go on adventures together. At the same time, it also allowed me to see a Hufflepuff who is upright, brave, down-to-earth and wise. When the HP mobile game was launched, I did not hesitate to choose Hufflepuff. This is also my favorite house. And it's very nice to see Hermione still firmly sitting on the throne of first grade! Baby Hermione is already the best witch, and Miss Know-It-All is obviously a compliment. The emotional line is also very smooth. I can only say that "straight women" are the deadliest in seducing people. It's hard to imagine that Elsa has been unable to seduce Hermione and she still hasn't figured it out. Hermione's confession is really beautiful. The confession in the letter really touched my point. It's a bit serious and cute. At the same time, it also echoes the small details in the previous article. The two of them really hit it off. Whether it's academic or emotional, everyone at Hogwarts agreed that they would be together, including me off-screen. So many years of getting along have closely linked the two beautiful girls, so I never thought that Elsa would reject Hermione, they should be together! ! This also shows that the author's description is very good. The two people have a sense of camaraderie. I don't think they are official couples, but the magnetic field and temperament of the two and the tension between them. Including the author not blindly following the original work, but seeking progress from the unreasonableness of the original work, including the surname issue, Ron's unscrupulous remarks, etc. Although there are small flaws, they are definitely still good. It is really rare for HP to complete the story. Thank you to the author for the story, I really like it! !

The expansion of the worldview and the completion of details make the world appear more rigorous and real, and I highly praise it. The writing is smooth, the narrative rhythm is also very good, humorous, and the characters basically follow the original characters. I almost didn't feel OOC. The overall reading is very comfortable, and it makes up for a lot of regrets I had when watching the movie. The protagonist is still young, so it's pure love [shy] It's still a bit one-sided, but I suspect Elsa is pretending, and Hermione has made her feelings clear. In addition, there are other sub-CPs that are also very good to drink. The senior ones are very fierce. Just take a look. After you finish this pair and that pair, finish your house and mine. I watched it again after catching up. Hey boss, I suddenly felt that the plot was pushed too fast. I think it could be slower. The main plot could be extended more so that I would have more plot to watch [crying]

It's very beautiful. The heroine blends in more smoothly. It adds a lot of descriptions of the Muggle world that are not found in the original book, the interaction between professors, descriptions of orphanages, and descriptions of the wizarding world in other countries. I like the part where the heroine and Hermione write letters the most. The emotional descriptions in the whole book are very delicate, and the writing is also very smooth. It's almost equal. Good luck to the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

I just came into contact with this book the day before yesterday. I originally wanted to go to bed at 12 o'clock, but I didn't expect to click on this book and stayed up for two hours. It was really good. The author's writing style is delicate and smooth, and every word is attentive. The more you read, the more interesting it becomes. The characters are vivid and three-dimensional, the plot is delicate and full, and fascinating. The words and sentences are extremely skillful (you can't miss the strategy once you read it), the story is moving and highly contagious. There are 3,000 words in front of me, and there is no dust in my chest. This novel makes me feel refreshed and my soul has been refreshed. Each word is precious and has a long meaning. It is really a wonderful writing style that makes the wind and rain shake the pen and the poem turns into weeping ghosts and gods. Moreover, the author's update frequency is very high and the volume is large (although, I still look forward to the author giving a surprise, such as updating 20 chapters a day [laughs]) Old books can be read hundreds of times, and good articles are worth reading again and again.

I feel like I need to use my brain to read this book. I dare say that if this story is finished, it will be a complete HP double heroine classic.

This one is really good to read. I think HP is as good-looking as this one and the other Professor Cat, and the author continues to update it without interruption. The interaction between the protagonist and Hermione is also written very delicately and is very enjoyable. [Shy][Admiration][Blowing a kiss]

It's really beautiful. What I like most is the heroines' concepts about women, which are very inspiring. Secondly, there are many supporting characters in female love (Johnson and Parkinson are my favorite deputy CPs). Highly recommended for everyone to read To know how much I like it just look at my reading time

This book is simply the best book I have ever read, bar none. The emotional description of the whole book is very good, and there are many small details that are very good. It adheres to the original work, but does not completely rely on the original work to continue the following story. It has its own appropriate imagination. Oops, I can't do it anymore, I can't comment. In short, let me put it bluntly, this book is absolutely amazing! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's very interesting. It writes a lot of stories about self-created characters and the plot of the story is also advancing at the same time. The pace is a little fast but the writing is very good. The character description, plot and story are also very vivid. This is the first time I have seen this method of promoting stories. There is a lot of supplementary information. I personally feel that the information and reports are a bit too much and a bit cumbersome, but I can accept it. The update speed and frequency are also very fast. I am very happy! ! ! Love the author very much! ! ! Come on, teacher! ! ! [Sending Hearts]

Very vivid and high-quality writing. Because the protagonist is localized (a lot of Chinese food appears) and the text is more equal, to me this book feels more comfortable than the original. And the author's descriptions of small details always make me smile kkk. Very delicious, recommended!

It's really good-looking, full of details, and the plot is well-written. It doesn't feel too vague or too general, which makes you lose interest in continuing to read. [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] [I also strongly recommend] [I also strongly recommend] [I also strongly recommend]

Very good. You can see that everything is good after Shen Nong tasted it. His strength comes from little by little effort, not like a giant golden finger. The description of the emotional line is very delicate. Several times I felt like I was going to break the window paper but I was still pulling. The process is quite well written. The number of CPs may be relatively large and they are basically 100. Let's take a look at the others first. There are no knives at the moment. If I get poisoned, I will immediately change the review to one star.

It feels like the author's fan fiction focuses on "sameness", and there are basically few people of the opposite sex. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] I can see that some of the author's ideas are reasonably integrated into it, but the plot goes by a little too fast. I think I can put a short summary instead of jumping directly. The plot is basically not sluggish, but sometimes it is a little too much to highlight certain characteristics of some characters, but this is a very common problem among fans, so it doesn't hurt.

The interaction between the two protagonists is very interesting and sincere. The three views are very correct, and some of the changes in the original work are original and original. It is not a rigid set. All in all, this book is the best HP I have read recently.

I like it very much, I like it very much, this is so beautiful, why the hell no one eats such a delicious product? Wenfeng seems to be as delicate as the original Harry Potter. Really delicious. I just hope it doesn't break, let alone break, don't break

The existence of the top three heroines in Harry Potter's double heroines

The relationship between the two heroines develops very naturally, without the feeling of being controlled by the author's big hand. ⌯>ᴗO⌯ .ᐟ.ᐟ If you don't like reading reports, you may find some chapters a bit boring, but it's okay if you can accept it. After all, these two love to write love words in their reports (,,>᎑<,,)

I like this novel, it's really, really good. I hope there will be more extras after it's finished. I really like watching the daily life of the protagonist and Hermione.

It's beautiful, very restored, and not OOC at all.

It's great, I've never seen such a comprehensive hp fan. Ah? Although I listen to it at night before going to bed, but how long does it take? ? ? Then I will talk about it carefully. First of all, this fanfic is obviously based on the original work. After all, it is different from the movie. The movie still beautifies some behaviors (I don't mean to praise the original work, because the original work has many stereotyped problems, and the proportion of male characters is particularly large. The male characters are very full, and the female protagonists are relatively thin, not to mention the female supporting roles are thin and mean). The author has explored a lot of iconic characters, who only have one name, or college (job), which is almost equivalent to creating a female group portrait from scratch, and it is not OOC, it is really great! Secondly, Harry is the protagonist of the original work, and this character obviously runs through the whole story and the main plot. He has been given a very big golden finger. He has survived the death curse many times and is the trigger of many stories. The author obviously respects his positioning (because it is really difficult to change. Unless you go through the story again for him, then it is better to read the original work, or abandon him and make your own, good guy, Original million words, right? It's just a joke. It's always OOC. If you don't believe it, you can read those. In the end, they may have been discontinued. And if you throw it all away, then just make it original. What do you call a fanfic?) His proportion is marginalized, which is indeed important, but Elsa and Hermione are more important, and the main plot is either fast forwarding or watching, and I have tried to avoid copyright issues. Third, the almost unique reconstruction of magical society makes everyone believe that this story is true because it is so real. Is it okay to give out candy while building it? I can say that this is a love for women, a love for women ideologically. I don't know if anyone can understand it. And it implements the importance of financial independence and mental clarity. Do you want to be strong? Yes, both are indispensable. The two female protagonists shine brightly, the supporting characters are as bright as stars, the relationships between the female characters are diverse, and the functions of the male characters change. It is obvious that the narrative power has been transferred. In my opinion, true love for women requires a closed loop of logic and the destruction of bad habits at the institutional level. The key to defining whether a work is love for women lies in whose hands hold the right to interpret the worldview and the right to write history. If there are women who still need to be saved, and if there are minority groups that still need to be not discriminated against by the majority, it means that the control is not enough. The original book reads: The protagonist defeated the big devil and the world returned to its bad state. What this fan wrote is: the protagonist defeated the big devil and renovated the rotten world. No one dared to object, and it was logical.

This is a good book, Chasing Tomatoes from Xiaolujiang

The best of the two heroines in HP spin-offs, bar none. Will the teacher continue to write extras? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhing, I really love this book to death.

Completely immortal Big, more updates I am a Muggle, and my impression of HP is that half of the class had Deathly Hallows. But there is no obstacle to reading at all. You can understand it without much effort. The interaction between the heroine and Hermione also really poked me, it's great to have two strong characters!

Don't ask me if it's your fault that I didn't get love

Madam, madam, madam, I like it very much. I have read countless books, and this one is definitely the best. I love Elsa, the characterization is great! I love the interaction, it's so sweet that I'm speechless!

It's really good, the writing is very good, and the development of the story is a bit unexpected and reasonable, and many difficult questions are filled in. It's really good to read.

It's a great book, with thoughtful thinking and delicate emotions. It's very good. I'm a little busy, so it's great to see so many people like this article. Congratulations to the author! I also hope that all newcomers who click here are willing to take the time to savor it. It is a really good novel with three correct views and a wide range of ideas. As a second author, it feels very good. It has been optimized on the original world view, which is very good.

Is there anything wrong with giving yourself full marks? The original intention of writing this book was simple: I felt that Hermione Granger deserved someone who could truly stand beside her. In the original work, she is smart, brave, and tenacious, but her brilliance is often compressed into the framework of "supporting role" and "auxiliary role." I wanted to write a story where she could be herself and have someone who could be worthy of all of her. So there was Elsa. An adult, sober person who wants to "straighten out" the world. Their encounter was not about who saved the other, but about two complete people deciding to walk a long way together. The supporting characters in this book also have their own arcs, but all these brilliance will not overshadow the two of them. They are the center of the stage, and the rest are the stars that revolve around them. That's it. Thank you to everyone who read to the end.

I like it very much, the plot logic is perfect, there are a lot of hidden CPs, and I think I have to watch it with my head in mind, and I think it's quite heartwarming.

A very nice book and very interesting [Sending Hearts] [Sparrow Food Masterpiece]