National Witch: I Also Had a Good Sleep Today

Lots of lolita. As for Menghua being more lively than the protagonist, I don't think there is a problem. It is only right that the protagonist also has his own emotional characteristics. In terms of settings, the main line is indeed being upgraded. The first volume focuses on the daily life in the school, the flirting life of several little lolita. As for the fun of fighting in the introduction, more combat plots appeared at the end of the first volume (Chapter 97), but I didn't see where the fun was. The first part of Chapter 97 is mainly about daily life. The second volume has started now, I'm looking forward to it. (Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it. If you point out any mistakes, welcome to discuss) In fact, I'm quite looking forward to the beginning of the second volume. It was indeed fun, but the pace became faster and faster later on, and the third volume was already broken and basically unfinished. There was so much foreshadowing in the front, and the rest was finished in just a few sentences. As for the emotional line, I think the relationship between the protagonist and Ellie in the second volume is too close. Ai Li also confessed her love to Lin Yi. Although Lin Yi didn't accept it, she didn't explicitly reject it either. In my opinion, isn't this a betrayal of Menghua? The plots in the first and second volumes are too separate and have basically no connection, resulting in the monotonous plot of the second volume. That space-time hound can connect the academy with the demon world, and it can also make the plot have some ups and downs. Wouldn't it be nice to intersperse some things about the academy? Also in the third volume, the plot where the protagonist recognizes Qingtong as his mother feels a bit nonsensical. As for the subsequent plot, the matter of the Dragon Worship Cult was written in a few strokes in a hurry. The matter between Menghua and Ai Li has yet to come to an end.

In fact, I think the author's daily writing is quite interesting. I want to see the interaction between Menghua and the protagonist [cry][cry][cry] Personally speaking, the first volume is my daily favorite, I quite like [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart] I haven't finished the second volume yet, but I still want to see the interaction between Menghua and the others [crying] You must keep writing it [crying] The interactions in Baihe's article are so beautiful [send heartfelt] I want to see the sweet daily life of Meng Hua and the protagonist [crying] In the extra chapter, please give me more words [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] And the protagonist is more of a mommy type but a lolita. The setting is quite interesting. I personally feel good about the character she has established. Although her growth is slow, the daily writing is really good. Why don't the author consider a more daily type? (There is currently no sword in the first volume. If you dare to kill Menghua and the others, I will beat you away) (I [cry] want to [cry] watch [cry] dream [cry] flower [cry] and [cry] the main character [cry] horn [cry] get married [cry] [cry])

It's quite good to watch, especially the daily routines in the front are very well written, the little loli is so cute ~ [lick screen] [lick screen] [lick screen] The latter part pays more attention to plot advancement and less daily routine, overall it's okay and can be watched. Just the ending

I feel that the element of sleeping has become less and less in the later period. At first, I thought I would just sleep in class [exploration]

It's okay, quite everyday. It just lacks storytelling. It could use more story content. I didn't see anything very interesting in the first ten chapters, and the main line is not particularly clear. If there is no main line, I can actually write more nodes to make readers look forward to it. It's a very warm book at first glance.

I want to watch the battle and enjoy it Later on I felt like it was not working, and I started to go berserk after writing not much of the plot.

I almost read the latest chapter in one go It reads fairly smoothly, and there's nothing major wrong with it. Even though the title of the book has Witch for All, it still feels different from 1999 Missing some magic imagination? Compared with others, the magic aspect is relatively unspectacular. The first volume is about daily life, and the second volume is about battles. Relatively speaking, the character descriptions in the second volume are not as exciting as the first volume. I'm just afraid that the protagonist will be upgraded too quickly and end too soon. It's great to be a white-haired dwarf for the rest of your life, right?

Five-star support