I Feel Uncomfortable If I Don't Do It for a Day

Junshiro Otome is very beautiful. The story is short and the author does not use degrading words for women, but also uses shounen and abandonment. You can tell that it is his own at first glance. I highly praise it.

It's so fragrant! It's so fragrant🥺It's hard to find books on Tomato. Many of them are not very good at writing, but this one is very fluent! The first world of puppy boy ghost cute love! The writing and wording are also very comfortable! This is a female channel!

Finally, we can see normal men's outfits. We grown-up women need to see this to have the strength to live a happy life. It's a bit silly later on, and the male protagonist's character is getting more and more boring.

The setting of the story is very attractive, and the sense of immersion in the otome is good, so I give it a four-star encouragement. However, each chapter only has about 10 chapters, and the main plot is often ended in a hurry. Even if I personally think it is an open ending, it gives people the impression that it ends abruptly midway. The completeness is not enough, and the reading satisfaction is only about 70%. It fails to fully display the charm of the story. I hope to break out of the fixed length limit and spread out the story completely and polish it in place. Qualified open ending: The core conflict of the main plot, the character growth arc, and the key foreshadowing have been closed, leaving only selective blanks and room for imagination. For example, after the protagonist completes the core decision, the future direction will not be written to death, or the afterglow of a certain branch line will not break the core logic and leave key questions unresolved. The reader can extend it independently based on the previous logic, and there will be no sense of fragmentation that "the story is not finished." But I was very engaged in reading it overall, except that the ending was a little rushed, and I still have regrets about many foreshadowings and character placements. I look forward to a more detailed and complete polishing in the follow-up, so that the story's aftertaste can be smoother.

It's so comfortable. This book is so cool, and the male protagonist is more interesting than the last. Please give me more slimy puppy boys🥰 And the Ultraman part shocked me that it seemed to be a 2v1 but the result was so exciting (if you are not interested in reading the book, you can watch it by yourself) It's so fragrant, so fragrant. The ghost man in the third part is also a real puppy. Well, it's so cute and adorable. Please have more clingy male protagonists like this🥹🫶🏻 I don't know if the author can read this. If you don't like my little suggestions, let me know and you can delete it. But I still hope that the author can listen to the suggestions and change it [Love]: It was the Ultraman article. The male protagonist appeared in front of me after fighting the monster, and I asked him where he ran to. When asked why he couldn't see anyone, he lied and replied, "He was hiding because he was scared when the monster appeared." But before that, I had been looking for him regardless of the danger. Although it was an excuse to transform and fight monsters, his answer still seemed a bit irresponsible, at least it sounded uncomfortable. So I still hope that the author can greatly change the way this dialogue is conveyed. For example, you were "scattered" by the fleeing crowd, and after the monster was defeated, Mingxu "suddenly" appeared from the next corner and rushed out in front of you. He was "cowardly" and cried and said that he had been looking for you but luckily you were fine... Although they were all lies just to transform and fight monsters, they sounded more pleasant to the ear [Love] [Love]

I love it so much! ! ! 😭Oh my gosh, the first story is so well written... Puppy Man is so good oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Big confession😭😭🫶

The front looks particularly nice. . Now I saw the one who went abroad to study, and I was really angry. I was really, oh, I can't do it. It gave me a heart attack, and I felt like I was being blamed all the time. Of course, I haven't finished it yet. I read the first four chapters, just these two gods in our department, and I really can't do it anymore. I think these two gods can go directly to ascend, and don't harm me, okay? I feel like I am really weak and then I suffer. Well, after watching the previous ones, I felt that I didn't feel this kind of aggrieved. But in this one, I felt like I was being treated. What the hell, I don't like to see me being wronged. We grown-ups just want to kick, punch, kick, and get out of anyone who is unhappy. One slap for one person is not enough, and it is not enough for one person to give the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms. Oh, why am I so miserable? I have to suffer for such a god, I can't bear to see myself suffer. . But I think the author's writing is still very good, keep up the good work┗(TT)┛

I really like the first two stories! The atmosphere of the first story about the Die Xian (? Ghost) was well rendered. It looked a bit scary at first, but later I found the ghost completely cute. The second story gave me a very novel feeling. Like! Thank you to the author for writing these stories [Sending Hearts]

This sense of immersion is so strong, the setting is delicious and the writing is also good The first world is good, but the rest is average.

Teacher, I love you 😘, I can eat such delicious Odaiwen~(¯▽¯~) The teacher's wording is also very precise. I didn't see any insulting words in the article. It's very good, very good. Teacher, please update more ૮(˶ᵔᵕᵔ˶)ა. I wish the teacher a big fortune and show me more Odaiwen. I love you teacher (๓´˘`๓)

All the acting sisters, please come and watch seriously! The plot is very interesting and novel. I read a few pages and was completely hooked. The teacher's words are also very appropriate and not insulting to women. The girls in the first world warmed my heart when I saw them, and I felt like I briefly experienced JK's youth😌There are also big dogs that male ghosts like... Big dogs are wolves🐺

My favorites at the moment are the first and second stories, I enjoyed reading them (ˆつ⩊⊂ˆ)੭The author's writing style is also very interesting, and it's very smooth to read ៷>ᴗ<៷ Looking forward to it

I really liked it😍😍😍, everyone vomited out their food! ! ! Come and eat this! The dark male ghost (really), the cute puppy, the husband Mingxu, Furui Xiaohe, the brother is too delicious (a little less)! My mother, my grandma, my brain has become big, my boss, don't run away! Boss, the food you cook is so delicious. I love you, boss. You are like a god to me. ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧

Super pretty! The first male ghost world is very immersive, the description is very realistic, and the setting is eye-catching. The puppy ghost is so cute ww

Not bad, not bad, not bad. Give five stars to encourage the author. I think the first and second stories are the best, followed by the story about the fourth magical boy and the little dragon. I think the other stories are almost boring, so I skipped through them. I will rate them before I finish them. Good cheers, author. I hope you can write better and better, and regain the feeling of blood first and second stories. Come on⌯>ᴗo⌯ .ᐟ.ᐟ

Hello Otome, the boss corrected some readers' comments in the comment area. It was particularly reassuring [Adoration] [Blowing Kiss]. One star was deducted (actually I wanted to deduct half a star but I didn't). I always felt that the ending was a bit sudden (especially my brother's one, because of 🍅review restrictions TT). Anyway, I look forward to the follow-up [Blowing Kiss]

It looks so good that it made my mother cry. Doubao generated the numbers for tomorrow's lottery for me and gave them to the author. The Otomo girls enjoyed it so much that they felt so immersed in them. The ghost man was so cute. The little sisters were also very cute qwq Darlings, don't miss this book. It's so good that it made me cry😭😍 I'm still reading the first story and I can't help but rate it. It's not embarrassing at all. The author's writing and knowledge of three concepts are all online! ! Author: I love you mua!

My favorite so far is the first one, which is as cute as a puppy. I didn't really like the chapter about the three magical boys. I personally felt it was weird. Although the three of them served me, that paragraph made me feel like they were more worried about the friendship between the three of them. It was really a bit like the bond that would maintain their friendship in the future.

It's super pretty, but a bit short~ The magical boy is too delicious. The female protagonist in the post-apocalyptic world is the strongest, and all the superpowers are amazing, but the male protagonist is unlikable because of his stupidity. In the apocalyptic novels I read before, many of the heroines were like dodders and had to rely on strong men. Now they have really improved a lot.

One word: Fragrant! Two words: super fragrant! Three words: Very fragrant! The sense of immersion is great! Boss, I want to hang out with you from now on! ! ! I want ten meals in ten days! ! ! ! ! [Punch out][Send heart][Send heart]

The first one is the best, the later one...

OMG I love this article! The male protagonists in each of the author's stories are very original, and the overall viewing experience is particularly good. My favorite one at the moment is An Jin's story, which was so good, but unfortunately it stopped abruptly. I hope the author can write some extra stories, and I also look forward to the author continuing to update! [Love] This guy is so secure, and his reaction after he realized we liked him was so cute.

So few, so few, not enough to watch the chef, and (sobbing) he actually found a treasure for me. The boss's ideas are really interesting, and everyone in the world is not wronged. It's so cool for me to see.

B all over the world,,,,, it feels so good, so good, so good [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

The writing is so good, it is very suitable for my taste. The writing is humorous and sharp, and the words are very careful. It is very comfortable to read. I can't help but comment after reading the first story. It's such a cute puppy. It's well portrayed. The girls are also very lively. The bad guys are also punished quickly by Lao Ji. This is how Lao Ji has a great harvest of friendship and love.

It's so satisfying, the human body chapter satisfies my heart of watching Ultraman when I was a kid and growing up. It would be great if Ultraman could be written in more detail [crying] It's just that the guy at the end added it a little too hastily. Please write more, goddess [crying]

Shocking and delicious, give me the fragrant fragrance [sending my heart]

Wow, I can't bear to part with the two best friends in the first article. Best friends, let's be together for the rest of our lives. [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]

It tastes so good [eating melon], I feel so good after eating the short story [admiration], the male protagonists were all so delicious yesterday😋.

There are currently 12 volumes updated. It's very interesting to watch. Every world has something new. Those who like to watch other people are blessed. The sense of immersion is also very smooth, especially the wording is very comfortable. The first 7 volumes are particularly beautiful! Those who like pure and refreshing writing can consider it before reading the following copies. Volume 8 can be skipped, volume 9 is temporarily interrupted and may get stuck, and volume 10 will make the young master angry if you stay under someone else's roof. I don't know why there is such a big difference in style between the later volumes and the first seven volumes🤔