(Light novel + multiple heroines + daily life + no thunder)
Makoto Fujii, who only knows how to pick up girls but doesn't know how to fall in love, wants to find the best girlfriend.
So he started by inviting the beautiful girl who wanted to learn to be bad in a double row, and got to know many beautiful girls such as high-ranking scumbags, low-self-esteem juniors, runaway girls, piano queens, etc. As a result, he found that there was a person pursuing them who had the temperament of a romantic comedy protagonist.
Well, let me, Makoto Fujii, tell you, children, times have changed, and pure love has retreated from the environment.
Reader comments
It's quite natural to avoid lightning. The female protagonist has suitors and even fiancés, but she doesn't like them. On the contrary, her relationship with the male protagonist develops quickly (the fight starts within three seconds of meeting). I don't know what the use of those subsequent suitors is. As long as the female protagonist's feelings are not repeated, it should be fine.
There is a lot to write about about the fiancé, and the author will avoid lightning.
Looking forward to the follow-up plot.
It's actually quite good. The settings of the male protagonist and each female protagonist are very good. The writing is a little tight and the pace is actually a little fast. However, for the increasingly fast-paced Red Persimmon, this may be the result of the author's compromise. I don't know if the author can see it, so don't doubt yourself. It is already a very good novel, but the market is like this now. The audience for Riqing is not large. Readers are impatient and polarized. Otherwise, it is extremely awkward. For example, the high-rated Niu Gui Shen Buddha on the recommendation list. The more twisted the male and female protagonists are, the greater the audience. Otherwise, it's just a cool article that pursues the ultimate and can't stand a little grievance. For example, I don't see any problem with my teammate's fiancée. It makes sense no matter how I explain it, but many people still can't accept it. Anyway, just keep going. I felt very comfortable reading it, and I hope it won't stop updating.
Hey, reading the comments, I think there will be a very strange plot, but it feels good. I definitely can't play Bai Yueguang without cutting it. I didn't see it in the first thirty chapters since the green. It feels okay. They all say ntl. If you don't take the role of the suffering master, there is really no way.
It's okay, nothing surprising. It's just that the world of the second dimension is hard to say. To say whether the turtle is real or not, the male protagonist has always been firmly chosen. It may be that the author wants to strengthen the NTL flavor and the reason why the female protagonist is willing to be scumbag by the male protagonist, and reasonably open a harem, so the presence of the male partner is strengthened.
The content is unexpectedly good. Although I slept a lot, it is surprisingly clean and clear, just like a stream. It is smooth and has the sound of cicadas. It is a very good work. If you have other works, I hope you can recommend them to me. I will definitely subscribe and support them all. It is really good.
It's very good. The writing is good and the plot is novel. Tomato is considered a high-quality movie and it can be played at the starting point. Everyone talks about the fiancée problem. In fact, it's not bad. The fiancée has created an image of someone who doesn't like her fiancé and doesn't like being bound by an engagement. It will definitely explode later. It's really not green.
The protagonist's image is relatively clear-cut, a literary and artistic character with rich emotional and interpersonal interactions. But I always feel that the female characters currently appearing have relatively weak experience, maybe because the number of words is currently low. To be honest, I would rather have a high-level PK with the male protagonist, that would be more interesting. For now, I don't have a favorite female character. Don't join the ranks of stock traders
The fiancée thing is just one star away
The writing is good and the plot is okay.
The most important thing is not to lick the dog.
Some novels engage in unprincipled dog-licking behavior in the name of love. The male protagonist of this book loves clearly and understands but is not humble. He will not be unprincipled and stalker just because of love.
I liked it very passionately and walked away gracefully. Easy to pick up and put down.
The plot is only eight points, but I give the male protagonist two points for his character!
It was really good to read. Although the plot was not finished and it ended too quickly, the few unfinished chapters completed the story. This is my first review. I have only given five stars to other books and never written reviews. In the end, the author did not perfunctory readers. I hope the author can write better next time.
Literary Neptune's journey to find love? The writing is quite literary and artistic, just be careful not to get sick. Also, the male protagonist is a bit high, so not all female protagonists can take it. However, it also fits the profile of someone who knows how to pick up girls but not how to fall in love. If we really want to talk about it, I will probably have to talk to my ex-girlfriend, Bingzi, otherwise it will all be one-sided [laughing]
It's fast-paced, but the author controls it very well. The writing can also be improved. Overall, this book has relatively little stomachache content, preferring to be a fast-paced and enjoyable read. If you are worried about stomachache, don't worry.
As of Chapter 50, with this subject matter, the book is as good as a hedgehog cat
I will carefully study the male protagonist's seduction techniques in this book
This kind of writing style and subject matter seems unlikely for Tomato to survive, but the light novel section of Qidian will be read by many people. Anyway, support it.
The writing style is very good, but it's not suitable for Tomato [laughing] There is no golden finger in the Nikgaru harem novel, and the protagonist seems to be a Japanese native [face covering] With these two points, I guess it won't be any better! But the author's writing is very good, the plot rhythm is also good, and the character creation is also very good! The next book will be a time traveler with a system, and more people will definitely read it [laughing] There are still more people in Tomato who like mindless and cool articles.
It's awesome, it's really awesome, such a plot that I can't put down, if I go deeper, it will be another Qiongming movie [face covering]
Has the author watched the movie "Ex-Girlfriend" from Qidian, Takanashi and Kashiwagi?
Overall, it's pretty good. I read the latest chapter of the maid in one go. The male protagonist is quite reasonable in his approach to relationships, not timid, and knows when to do things. This is more in line with my appetite. There is no Shura field in other stories. It looks more comfortable. I hope the author will continue writing. I don't know if this kind of plot is in line with the taste of other brothers. I still recommend it.
From the back, when the protagonist faced the temptation of a beautiful woman, he didn't swallow his saliva or glance around, only indifference. What I also think in my heart is that even if he is beautiful, I still have to keep a distance from him. For this reason, it is much better than other novels. Other novels are just like Brother Pig. When he sees a girl, he can't walk. When he sees a girl, he goes up to lick her. When he sees your request, he goes up to help. I don't know how to refuse at all.
Great, no need to say more
Very good looking, the male lead is of high rank and doesn't lick dogs
Author, you must keep at it, Onege, I would be bored without you. I really like this book.
It's a very standard Tokyo romance novel. Even if it's about a yellow-haired male protagonist, he still feels powerless when facing someone with a higher status than him.
Not bad, you can take a look
I thought it was a comprehensive comic. To watch this kind of city, it is better to read a comprehensive comic.
The writing was okay, so I stopped reading. The fiancée part made me feel a little psychologically uncomfortable. I wish the author good luck.
The writing is great. There are no brainless supporting characters or any messy pretentiousness. The character portrayal and emotional description are very good. Come on.
In just a few dozen chapters, you can see that the author's design is very real. The male and female protagonists have their own consciousness, life, love and efforts. Each character has its own characteristics. There will be no bloody plot where the male protagonist is a scumbag for the sake of scumbag, and the female protagonists are like objects.
It's good-looking and realistic, and makes the people around you come alive.
That's it for now. The beginning is really well written. Personally, I think the character of the male protagonist at the end changed a bit too quickly, and it felt like various settings were forced into the story. But it is quite in line with his own experience. On this point, it's a matter of opinion. I also wish the author better and better as he writes.
It's quite natural to avoid lightning. The female protagonist has suitors and even fiancés, but she doesn't like them. On the contrary, her relationship with the male protagonist develops quickly (the fight starts within three seconds of meeting). I don't know what the use of those subsequent suitors is. As long as the female protagonist's feelings are not repeated, it should be fine. There is a lot to write about about the fiancé, and the author will avoid lightning. Looking forward to the follow-up plot.
It's actually quite good. The settings of the male protagonist and each female protagonist are very good. The writing is a little tight and the pace is actually a little fast. However, for the increasingly fast-paced Red Persimmon, this may be the result of the author's compromise. I don't know if the author can see it, so don't doubt yourself. It is already a very good novel, but the market is like this now. The audience for Riqing is not large. Readers are impatient and polarized. Otherwise, it is extremely awkward. For example, the high-rated Niu Gui Shen Buddha on the recommendation list. The more twisted the male and female protagonists are, the greater the audience. Otherwise, it's just a cool article that pursues the ultimate and can't stand a little grievance. For example, I don't see any problem with my teammate's fiancée. It makes sense no matter how I explain it, but many people still can't accept it. Anyway, just keep going. I felt very comfortable reading it, and I hope it won't stop updating.
Hey, reading the comments, I think there will be a very strange plot, but it feels good. I definitely can't play Bai Yueguang without cutting it. I didn't see it in the first thirty chapters since the green. It feels okay. They all say ntl. If you don't take the role of the suffering master, there is really no way.
It's okay, nothing surprising. It's just that the world of the second dimension is hard to say. To say whether the turtle is real or not, the male protagonist has always been firmly chosen. It may be that the author wants to strengthen the NTL flavor and the reason why the female protagonist is willing to be scumbag by the male protagonist, and reasonably open a harem, so the presence of the male partner is strengthened.
The content is unexpectedly good. Although I slept a lot, it is surprisingly clean and clear, just like a stream. It is smooth and has the sound of cicadas. It is a very good work. If you have other works, I hope you can recommend them to me. I will definitely subscribe and support them all. It is really good.
It's very good. The writing is good and the plot is novel. Tomato is considered a high-quality movie and it can be played at the starting point. Everyone talks about the fiancée problem. In fact, it's not bad. The fiancée has created an image of someone who doesn't like her fiancé and doesn't like being bound by an engagement. It will definitely explode later. It's really not green.
The protagonist's image is relatively clear-cut, a literary and artistic character with rich emotional and interpersonal interactions. But I always feel that the female characters currently appearing have relatively weak experience, maybe because the number of words is currently low. To be honest, I would rather have a high-level PK with the male protagonist, that would be more interesting. For now, I don't have a favorite female character. Don't join the ranks of stock traders
The fiancée thing is just one star away
The writing is good and the plot is okay. The most important thing is not to lick the dog. Some novels engage in unprincipled dog-licking behavior in the name of love. The male protagonist of this book loves clearly and understands but is not humble. He will not be unprincipled and stalker just because of love. I liked it very passionately and walked away gracefully. Easy to pick up and put down. The plot is only eight points, but I give the male protagonist two points for his character!
It was really good to read. Although the plot was not finished and it ended too quickly, the few unfinished chapters completed the story. This is my first review. I have only given five stars to other books and never written reviews. In the end, the author did not perfunctory readers. I hope the author can write better next time.
Literary Neptune's journey to find love? The writing is quite literary and artistic, just be careful not to get sick. Also, the male protagonist is a bit high, so not all female protagonists can take it. However, it also fits the profile of someone who knows how to pick up girls but not how to fall in love. If we really want to talk about it, I will probably have to talk to my ex-girlfriend, Bingzi, otherwise it will all be one-sided [laughing]
It's fast-paced, but the author controls it very well. The writing can also be improved. Overall, this book has relatively little stomachache content, preferring to be a fast-paced and enjoyable read. If you are worried about stomachache, don't worry.
As of Chapter 50, with this subject matter, the book is as good as a hedgehog cat
I will carefully study the male protagonist's seduction techniques in this book
This kind of writing style and subject matter seems unlikely for Tomato to survive, but the light novel section of Qidian will be read by many people. Anyway, support it.
The writing style is very good, but it's not suitable for Tomato [laughing] There is no golden finger in the Nikgaru harem novel, and the protagonist seems to be a Japanese native [face covering] With these two points, I guess it won't be any better! But the author's writing is very good, the plot rhythm is also good, and the character creation is also very good! The next book will be a time traveler with a system, and more people will definitely read it [laughing] There are still more people in Tomato who like mindless and cool articles.
It's awesome, it's really awesome, such a plot that I can't put down, if I go deeper, it will be another Qiongming movie [face covering]
Has the author watched the movie "Ex-Girlfriend" from Qidian, Takanashi and Kashiwagi?
Overall, it's pretty good. I read the latest chapter of the maid in one go. The male protagonist is quite reasonable in his approach to relationships, not timid, and knows when to do things. This is more in line with my appetite. There is no Shura field in other stories. It looks more comfortable. I hope the author will continue writing. I don't know if this kind of plot is in line with the taste of other brothers. I still recommend it. From the back, when the protagonist faced the temptation of a beautiful woman, he didn't swallow his saliva or glance around, only indifference. What I also think in my heart is that even if he is beautiful, I still have to keep a distance from him. For this reason, it is much better than other novels. Other novels are just like Brother Pig. When he sees a girl, he can't walk. When he sees a girl, he goes up to lick her. When he sees your request, he goes up to help. I don't know how to refuse at all.
Great, no need to say more
Very good looking, the male lead is of high rank and doesn't lick dogs
Author, you must keep at it, Onege, I would be bored without you. I really like this book.
It's a very standard Tokyo romance novel. Even if it's about a yellow-haired male protagonist, he still feels powerless when facing someone with a higher status than him.
Not bad, you can take a look I thought it was a comprehensive comic. To watch this kind of city, it is better to read a comprehensive comic.
The writing was okay, so I stopped reading. The fiancée part made me feel a little psychologically uncomfortable. I wish the author good luck.
The writing is great. There are no brainless supporting characters or any messy pretentiousness. The character portrayal and emotional description are very good. Come on.
In just a few dozen chapters, you can see that the author's design is very real. The male and female protagonists have their own consciousness, life, love and efforts. Each character has its own characteristics. There will be no bloody plot where the male protagonist is a scumbag for the sake of scumbag, and the female protagonists are like objects.
It's good-looking and realistic, and makes the people around you come alive. That's it for now. The beginning is really well written. Personally, I think the character of the male protagonist at the end changed a bit too quickly, and it felt like various settings were forced into the story. But it is quite in line with his own experience. On this point, it's a matter of opinion. I also wish the author better and better as he writes.
It looks good. Is the progress a little faster?
I think the rating shouldn't be so low.