Everyone Is Building a Great Road, but I'm the Only One Who's Struggling

I was very impressed by Sheng Yan because she was a sassy, ​​reliable and handsome sister when she first appeared. If Lin Du is as cold as snow, then the feast is as warm as fire. I see her as an excellent leader, and I'm looking forward to seeing her grow in this book. She has a resolute character, an informal and wanton style of doing things, a clear mind, independent thinking, a strong core, a sense of responsibility, and a composure that has been polished by time. And we need more stories of great growing women. I am very much looking forward to this new story. The character of Feast is very suitable for me. Please support our Ah Zhi!

Here comes the update as soon as I see it! All I can say is that it is indeed Ah Zhi, the little feast is really cute! Although he and Qiedu were written on almost the same timeline, they wrote in two different styles. Although the daily life written by A Zhi was a bit light-hearted, he still felt sorry for Feng Yan [almost crying], a little bitter melon, but now she has the care of her teacher. A Zhi will update soon! !

It's a good watch. It tells the story of a feast. I wonder if the two protagonists will be on the same page in the future~ And I thought Lin Du Feisheng's signing of the feast plate was so free and easy. I want to watch it again. Haha, it's so pretty, and it still has a funny vibe as always [star][star]

The overall plot is still very smooth, and the characters are also very three-dimensional. They are not the kind of spirited people like Lin Du, but the feast has a sense of great wisdom and foolishness. If Lindu is like the snow on the top of the mountain, then the feast is more like a winding river, quiet and stretching. But the author's choice of words and sentences... Qidu Wushuang had been finished a long time ago when I read it. Although the words and sentences made some sense, there were far fewer mistakes than now. Still a stream of consciousness sentence, still a sick sentence😮‍💨 eg: The white porcelain face of the woman looks like an old statue that has been cracked by the years, with clear mottled cracks. Give an example of apology. Actually, I just want to thank the author. Because I have been talking about pragmatics recently but I have never been able to find a suitable example sentence (basically monolingualism), until I read this sentence. OMG, incomplete subject, incomplete sentence structure, mixed attributive, redundant adverbial misplacement, these problems can appear in one sentence at the same time. It is a perfect sentence! Thanks to the author for providing class materials🥹

Right! I just thought of writing a book review. The protagonist of this book is Feng Yan. When I read Qie Du, I was very curious about Feng Yan's experience. Feng Yan is also a baby with amazing talents and strives to move forward. He and Du Du are two people with different personalities, and they are also very lovable! But it doesn't feel the same as the character of Feng Yan described by Qie Duli. Maybe it's because he's still young? After all, people will grow up (maybe? Qi Duli feels like a handsome sister. It's really cute here. The cuteness of the little Zai Ziyan is about to overflow the screen. I really like this little feast. It's really cute.) Needless to say, Ah Zhi's writing style is great. It's very comfortable to read. I'm reading it word for word! Tiger! I want to add more! Not enough!

1. The heroine has no cps, but others in the main protagonist group have cps. I am afraid that people will want to see pure cps, so the author did not mark the cps. 2. The proportion of men and women is normal. There is no situation where a sect is all male except for the female protagonist, and there is no situation where all high-level positions are male. For example: the female protagonist's family, the Jiang family, the head of the family, the head shop, the elder, etc. Are all female, and the female protagonist's master is also a female. Currently, the proportion of women in the protagonist group I have seen is high. 3. Good writing style, quotation from classics, logical, slow pace. If you like fast pace, read with caution. The description of food in the article is greedy, so don't read it at night 4. The three views are very upright. Those who are on the right path are those who are on the right path. There is no situation of bullying the weak and fearing the strong. 5. One more thing I forgot to mention is that there is no phenomenon of female rivalry or female abuse. The female images and group portraits are well portrayed. But after all, everyone has different tastes and different standards for articles. The above is just my personal opinion.

The Tiger King has opened a new book, this time it's the lovely Jiang Yan, who is honest and smart. I'm looking forward to the growth of little Jiang Yan, and also looking forward to a different world of cultivating immortals. Ww Can Lin Dudu do a show?

It's so beautiful. The whole article makes people feel very comfortable. There are no surprises at all, and it contains a lot of female content. Each character is created with great care, even the small characters have their own brilliance. I personally feel that the author's writing skills have improved again. Protagonist, feast. In fact, I personally feel that Yanyan is a black sesame glutinous rice dumpling, which gives people the feeling of an honest person, and everyone will want to take care of her, but it will give you some contrast from time to time, but it is still very cute. The author has given her a very full and solid core, so there is no doubt that I like her, and I will convince all readers! Hehe~ Oops, I just like when the protagonist of a fairy tale has a spiritual pet by his side [shy] I love the theme of group portraits so much, and the writing is so great. I will always follow the author's fairy tales!

Little Feast, you are so cute, you are so cute, you have a kind of obedient, dull feeling when I was a kid, I felt so pitiful for you [I almost cried], I have carefully tasted it, my writing has improved, and I really like this Little Feast, there are so many delicious new books, I feel hungry every time I read them

As expected, Tiger's writing style is still so good, but I still prefer the kind that shows a genius at the beginning. It may make me enjoy reading it more, and I like it more. I don't know if Yanzi in this book has that kind of boyishness, but I am already looking forward to him meeting another female protagonist! I hope to see more plots, divine dramas and Peking operas. Unfortunately, it is not group portraits, but 40% group portraits. The pace is a bit slow

Incomparably beautiful, the writing is smooth and delicate, and the plot is thrilling with twists and turns. Ah Zhi is really making progress! ! ! The childhood form of Feng Yan is really cute. It can be seen that A Zhi loves her characters very much. Not only the protagonist Feng Yan, but also the master Mo Wujiang, the senior sisters Lianqiu and Sheng You all have their own characteristics and cuteness. The love between mother and daughter, master and apprentice, and sister are all very well portrayed. Of course I What I like the most is the group portraits in this book. It's so beautiful to see a group of proud young people shouldering heavy burdens and protecting their homeland... Now I'm just waiting for the update, and by the way, I wish for a side story about Jiang Yitong () My mother must have been an extremely proud and willful young man! I was stunned when I saw this cross-section in the middle section. . I really want to know whether the world that Little Feast lives in is real... If there may be a guest appearance by Qie Du later, how will the teacher integrate the setting back?

Little Feast really impressed me! He is still a little bitter gourd, but he is still cute and cute, and he has that feeling of "I'm fine but I want to be patted on the head". Ah Zhi's writing style has really improved. His daily writing is light and warm, which made me want to laugh and feel distressed at the same time. Moreover, the timeline is obviously similar to that of Qiedu, but it has a completely different flavor. This is really awesome. When I watched it in the middle of the night, I was so greedy that I went through the refrigerator. Ah Zhi, you have to pay for my weight! Please update soon, I'm starting to feel empty.

All I can say is that the writing style is really good, and it's really comfortable to quote scriptures, at least that's what I think, and I share the same worldview with my uncle, Aiwujiwu, okay [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It looks good, and it feels like The Supreme Sect comes from two different perspectives and has different experiences, but both have a youthful atmosphere.

I don't know if the positioning of the two books is different, but I always feel that compared to Lin Du's book, I often feel that I can't understand the Feast book. There were so many gorgeous words piled together that I was dazzled. I flipped through two or three pages without knowing what the author was talking about. When I made this comment, I was watching Feast Absorbing the Dragon. A description after Ergou put the gem on Feast's forehead, what treasure mirror, galaxy, and cloud seal were passed through, I could only feel that the description was very beautiful and advanced, but when I asked what it was about, I had no idea what it was about. Regarding the subject of cultivating immortals, I think the author is as good as ever in terms of the warmth of human feelings, the unique carved feeling of the world of cultivating immortals, and the chivalrous and heroic handling style. However, I still wonder if I am trying too hard to depict certain details and using too much force, resulting in the words failing to convey the meaning. When I had this feeling a while ago, because the author's last book was so brilliant and excellent, I in turn wondered if I had been so immersed in Internet literature that I couldn't calm down and read a good book that I was really willing to carefully study the vocabulary. This caused me to blame myself and force myself to read this book with great concentration. If I encountered something I didn't understand, I would read it from beginning to end several times until I finally understood what it was saying. However, the turning point came again. During this period, I accidentally discovered a collection of Wang Zengqi's short stories at home. After reading it from beginning to end, I discovered that the simple language and pure expression can also shock my heart. That's why I couldn't help but express my opinions when I read the author's book again in the past two days. So am I being picky by comparing the work of a literary master with online articles catering to the market? I feel that even when writing online articles, the author is always pursuing good articles and moving emotions. That is why he will carefully consider and present beautiful descriptions one after another. So my thinking is that gorgeous vocabulary and advanced techniques are not necessarily the best, sometimes mediocre is also true. Although I have said a long paragraph, my personal opinion still admits that this is a good online article with unlimited potential. After all, everyone has their own preferences for radish and cabbage, and even famous writers do not have obscure and abstract expressions. I actually hesitated for a moment here. People don't say criticism easily. I've been talking for a long time and it didn't help the author. So do I really have to say it and only add trouble and burden to the author? After all, it is difficult for me to change my speaking style just because of someone else's words. However, when I think about the Internet, a hundred flowers are blooming, and all kinds of opinions emerge in endlessly. I feel that if this sentence is written in a messy way, some people will think that this sentence is written beautifully, which is really normal. So for the author, what really needs to be considered is what he wants to do, rather than being influenced by my few words. So I sent this comment.

The writing style of Tiger King is even better, and the food it describes makes me salivate [laughs] I wish I could wear it and eat it myself. It is still a self-reliant farming version of a small sect. It is very great and looking forward to the update'- ̗̀ ෆ( ˶'ᵕ'˶)ෆ ̖́-

(Already admired by the early Feast) I look forward to the fall of all members of the Tongtian sect, I look forward to the gradual growth of the Feast, and I look forward to the story of the growth of the Tongtian sect. (I also look forward to Lin Du's description in this book. All in all, nice looking! 2026.5.1

The writing style of Paper Tiger is still authoritative, and the characters of Feast are also very good. I saw in the early stage that all the foreshadowing plots are flawless and very deep. I have a vague feeling that there may be group portraits in the future. I am waiting for the ratings to start. It will not be a loss for you. Ah Zhi, please be diligent in updating [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

I only read a little bit, and I feel that this book has a more female-oriented flavor than the previous one. The superiors of the Jiang family are all female by default. I like the part about the ghost house, "The soul returns to the mother's body, and the child will be born as soon as possible." I haven't seen the words about disobedience to women yet. There are not many male characters. Still recommended.

It's good-looking, super good-looking. I came from Qiedu Wushuang. I found out that the author has published a new book and I quickly read it. It's the first time I saw the metaphysics under the system of cultivating immortals. It's very novel, very interesting, and the writing is as good as ever. I'm looking forward to the following stories!

Congratulations to dear Ah Zhi for publishing a new book! (♡>𖥦<)/♥Little Fengyan is really cute. What a hard life we ​​lived as a child! Some small details are really heart-wrenching, a little bitter gourd ꒦ິ^꒦ິ. But I don't recommend watching it in the middle of the night (not) I'm Hungry (ᐢᴖ ·̫ ᴖᐢ). Come on Ah Zhi Ah Zhi! ٩(๛ ˘ ³˘)۶♥

It is particularly good. The female-centered thoughts are also very good. The love between classmates is also very warm and warm, with a touch of happiness. This is very good, and it also reveals a touch of sadness. I commend this Tiger King, the writing is very good, it is getting better and better, and the environmental rendering is also super good. I hope our "little fire" can grow up well. Let's work together with this tiger king! It's very beautiful, why don't you all go see it? (﹡ˆOˆ﹡)

This is a new book written by Tiger King! The writing is getting better and better! The description of the food makes people just want to go in and take a bite! The little feast is also very cute! ✌︎˶╹ꇴ╹˶✌︎In short, you won't lose money by investing!

I really recommend it. This book is also written by Ah Zhi. The protagonist is Jiang Yan (Jiang Kuan), who is the handsome sister Feng Yan in the book by Junior Master Shu. The writing style is still online, the character is also very smart, and you can detect the foreshadowing (I like to read this kind of IQ online novel)

After being short of books for so long, I finally found a good novel! ! I like the beginning of the world of mortals, the story of the steady progress of the feast, and the real and perfect world of cultivation described by the author. Everyone has their own story, and everyone has their own characteristics. It makes me feel that they really live in such a world with ups and downs and different colors. Regarding the narrative rhythm, I really like the smooth, smooth, and interlocking rhythm of the narrative. It is very enjoyable to watch! ! Looking forward to big updates from the author! ! ᕙʕ✿✪ᴥ✪ʔᕗ

This author's setting of the world of cultivation is the most comfortable I have read. It is very complete, the characters are also full, and the characters' behavioral motivations are very smooth. I can see that this book and the previous one want to explore different things. I like the perspective of different protagonists in the same world view. I also like the author's explanation of the right path and the evil path. It gave me a lot to think about.

Shockingly delicious. Ah Zhi's writing style is still very good. The timeline is similar to that of Qie Du, but they are two completely different styles. The feast is very cute, which is very contrasting with the cool senior sister who appears in Qie Du. Every character is full and beautiful. I can feel that the story line and world view are slowly unfolding. I believe in A Zhi's foreshadowing and look forward to the follow-up plot!

It's very nice. It's adapted from the original version of Ah Zhi Du. The writing style is still so good. 😋 There's a touch of warmth. When I read it, I felt that the characters of the feast are very good, beautiful and strong. And the kitchen repair is really rare.

Ah Zhi finally opened a new book! This post makes me feel so hungry in the middle of the night... It seems that the writing style of this book is better!

Five stars is the upper limit of the platform, not mine. Like it, like it very much! ! ! Ah Zhi's writing is really getting better and better! The feast is so cute! Wang Lianqiu is so cute! Sheng You is so cute! Everyone is so cute! I really like the group portraits and the bonds between the characters written by A Zhi. Although I read the Young Master's book first, the change of realm nouns between the two books seemed a bit awkward, but overall it's not harmful. But in the Dongming Realm, there is also the Lanju Realm and the Jiu Ning Realm. Isn't there too few small worlds for sneaking into? (Bushi) At present, it seems that the identity of everyone in Tongtian Sect is hidden, and some characters are still in danger of death. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot development. It's a very interesting process to connect with the storyline of Junior Master Uncle, so keep up the good work! ! !