Apocalypse Survival: I Conquer the World with Absolute Hypnosis

After reading the latest 68 chapters, I will write down some feelings. Compared with works with more than 100,000 readers, the author's writing skills are a little immature, but the foreshadowing, plot, and twists are not bad, and they are getting better and better. The protagonist's early powers don't seem to have SSS-level strength, but this is a huge foreshadowing that is connected from front to back. It is not abrupt at all and has traces to follow. It can be seen that this article is relying on Shuangwen and Duonv, but I personally think that the story you told is much better than the first two, especially the villain professor is very good, and the later chapters are more interesting than the previous ones. Finally, I hope that the mentality of a few people will not be affected. For some boys, it is a poisonous point for a certain heroine to be touched by a male puppet controlled by the protagonist through her clothes, but the story you write is not only for those people.

It has everything that a multi-female protagonist novel should have. The protagonist Goldfinger is strong but the enemies are also intelligent and not weak at the same level. So far, the protagonist has not been frustrated and the plot is not considered cliche. The five stars encourage the author to stick to it and not to stop updating!

This book has come to a complete conclusion today, there is no unfinished chapter, and I have filled in all the foreshadowing that needs to be filled in. In the whole article, I did not deliberately write some disgusting passages to disgust readers, as some commentators who thought they had a glimpse of the truth said. In fact, this story was planned from the beginning. This is indeed my first work, and it has many shortcomings. Although it has avoided many minefields, there are still two poisonous points: a male zombie dragging (initially hugging) the female protagonist to run away, and the ancient gods who hold the power of the universe peeking at all [apocalyptic survival game] players, including the protagonist. I will pay attention to these in my future works. At that time, some readers and friends advised me to give up and restart, but I thought of the readers who kept following the updates and giving gifts every day to the readers who use their love to generate electricity. I am determined to finish the story I wrote from beginning to end, and not to become one of those bad writers I once hated. Now I can proudly say that I have finished telling this story seriously.

It's good, but the pace is slow and the battle of wits is exciting. Readers who like fast-paced and refreshing novels don't need to read this, because the protagonist cannot crush the people he faces, and the most is six or four 😂

The plot is okay but this section is a bit toxic. Although the plot is reasonable, it is still a bit toxic. I copied a section and watch it for yourself to see if it is toxic or not. This does not mean that all his women have been seen. In the miniature model the size of a fingernail, Tang Keke's posture curled up on the bed is clearly shown. Lying on his side, the faint light on the Yinlan panel flickers on and off. On the second floor, Lin Shuying's sleeping posture covered with his black coat is clearly visible. Everyone is seen by these superior things. The author, I would like to ask what is the use of S-level loot? Wouldn't it also drop the stone if you kill someone with superpowers? You can awaken that person's ability with a stone, so what's the use of this S-level plunder? Is there any difference between the two of them?

I love watching it. The plot structure and world view are both good. The battle of wits made me break out in a cold sweat (bushi). The key is that the male protagonist is not at all 🐢ah 😄 I must highly recommend it.

After reading Chapter 79, the world view is quite big and there are a lot of foreshadowings. I hope that the foreshadowings can be recycled later. The author also listened to the advice and changed the bad points. In summary, this novel is very interesting. Come on, author.

It can be seen that the author wrote very carefully

It's good to read. If you're bored, you can read it.

The plot is pretty good, but the pace is too fast and not enough to watch.