Zhan Shen: After Falling in Love with Brother Drag at First Sight

I haven't finished reading it yet, but I can post my thoughts ◦`꒳´◦ʔ About how Xiaonian, who fell in love with Brother Drag at first sight, should catch his mother-in-law in his hands and make love with a domineering magician (bushi) The overall plot of this article is too fast-paced. Maybe I prefer slow-paced stories, so I gave it four stars. But readers who like Shen Qingzhu CP can join it. The writing style is concise and clear, the narrative is not procrastinating, and there are not too many useless words. The plot content is very easy to understand. Xiaonian's character design is interesting, and the identity of a magician is destined to be associated with the word romance (I also hope to see Xiaonian bombarding Brother Drag with various magician romances hhh). Can the shameless pursuit of Brother Drag continue? Shen Qingzhu's character has not collapsed so far, at least that's what I understand. The hard-spoken and soft-hearted Brother Drag will always have some compassion. Xiaonian must seize the opportunity! The viewing time is not too long, and it gives me my initial feelings. There are still few chapters so far, and I look forward to the future plot development. ૮ ៸៸៸º ᗜ º៸៸៸ ა

There should be applause here Support the four great gods: Music, Little Snake, Magician, Cook By the way, I would like to ask the teacher if he agrees to start the project (also ask for the birthday and appearance of Xiaonian) If you agree, I will open it on the lofter. If you disagree, just pretend I didn't say anything. The following is a summary: Fast updates, fast pace, the main character is stronger than Qiye. Xiaozhu OOC🈚 or very little, there is no plot of Xiao Jiao Wife, the full text describes the normal emotions of normal people Recommended

I really like Teacher's writing. Others are either very OOC or the protagonist is too annoying. Although it's normal to cheat on the protagonist, it just feels weird. There is a feeling that the protagonist is out of tune with them. Teacher's writing is really integrated by its own After joining them, I also changed one regret after another with my own ability. The emotional portrayal is also very good. The friendship between young people is really touching. Although it is love at first sight, the relationship is subtle and long-lasting. The delicate and touching feeling is the deep love that lasts for a long time. It is really great.

It's good to read. The golden finger of the Zhan Shen fan I read before was even more exaggerated than that of Lin Qiye. I finally found a logical one [Adoration]

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it's good, it's good, it's good, it's good, it's good, it's good, it's good, it's good, it's good, it's good, it's good, it's good, it's good. [Crying][Crying][Crying][Crying] The only flaw is that there are a little bit of dragging brother scenes (it gives me the feeling of a supporting role). I hope there will be more dragging brother plots. After all, it is a cp novel, and I still hope there will be more interaction between the young lovers. Of course, the writing is still better than most fanfics, and everything is mainly arranged by the author. Author, come on, come on, come on, I will keep chasing [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] (I will change the rating later if I think it is good)

It's so beautiful🥺Men are menstruating when they see it🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow out of the corners of the mouth, Yancheng Qiantang River tide😱So handsome😘It's God, it's roses that light up my darkness The life of darkness made my world meaningful😊I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I shed tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression😋 is plants.

Overall, this is a pretty good book, very interesting to read. Overall, it's light, but warm. It's really nice to have everyone together, I really like it. This is the only book I have seen so far in which the protagonist is not seriously cheating. In other words, the protagonist is not cheating at all. But I like to read this kind of book. The protagonists in other books are too cheating. And the writing style is light, without too much fancy words, it is very simple, and it is also very clear at a glance, which is quite good. The protagonist plays a straight ball, there are not too many twists and turns, the straight ball defeats Tsundere, okay, the straight ball is a perfect match for Tsundere! ! ! After watching it, I kept laughing, and the corners of my mouth never dropped. Not only because of the protagonist and Brother Yan, but also their interactions with their friends, they all felt warm and reassured. In addition, the overall pace of this book is fast, and the original novel does not have that much plot description, so it is recommended for those who have read the original novel to read it. Anyway, when I see it now, I think it's delicious. Well, yes, it's pretty good. You can watch it, you can watch it [blowing kiss]

It's very interesting, but I think the scenes of dragging the brother down are a bit lacking. I want to see Xiaonian hit the ground running, and the arrogant Shen brother is shy. As expected, loving without knowing is the best thing. I hope my wife will continue to work hard. I really like this book (please reply!)

The content is not toxic, and the OOC is not serious. It is the CP article that I have seen that best matches the character of Brother Drag, and the emotional line is also perfect! Love at first sight is amazing. Come on, author, update, I hold the flag for the author ₍ᵔ•ᴗ•ᵔ₎

Such a normal Zhanshen fanfic, oh my god (in a daze), it's not a boring full-length cool story like Goldfinger at the beginning. Although Xiaonian has a great status, he is still growing up. Everyone is so cute. Watch Drag Brother's Last Origin of Hell. People were really heartbroken and cried. In short, the writing is so delicate and gentle. When I saw the end of the text, I felt like I had finished reading it. I am not a person in the story, but I still want to read their story🥺

It's really beautiful, the characters are very fitting, and not OOC at all! The corner of my mouth never came down when I saw it before. It was so enjoyable. Two little bitter gourds, they must be happy. [Crying] [Crying] 99! When I read the original work, I really liked Drag Brother. He is handsome and he is really righteous. His previous experience was so miserable. Help🆘I cried to death😭. Such a gentle person should be loved and cherished. ㊗️99 Wuwu teacher, come on!

Nice! Nice! Teacher, why are you so good at writing! I simply can't get enough of it! Ahhhh, teacher, you are simply my god! My poor language cannot express my praise for the teacher, but the teacher's writing is great! Ahhhhh! Can you please give me more? I'd love to see it! Can I just change my unseen number to three digits? (If it really doesn't work, double digits will do [shy])

It can be regarded as a very natural book among the Gods of Destruction, and it doesn't feel OOC at all. The protagonist is not a Long Aotian type, so it doesn't feel too abrupt. The writing is really good! ! The emotional scenes are also quite natural, and the young couple is so sweet and at ease😌! Overall very good! It's still too short. The author will update it soon! !

After reading it for so long, I actually forgot to rate it. I'm sorry (つд⊂). Overall, the writing style is very, very good, and the cp is also very, very easy to beat. The regulations are clear and the story line is clear, especially in line with xp. I highly recommend reading this book, ehヾ(@^▽^@)ノ

Superb and beautiful, highly recommended! ! ! The protagonist is not as invincible or brainless as other fanfics, but a bit weak. However, the protagonist's true identity, love story and plot are very interesting. I recommend it! ! !

Good-looking cp guy, specializing in writing. Well, although the author said that someone may have set it up But I don't think the character design is broken at all~

I can't stand it anymore. My mouth has not dropped since I read this book. It's really good to read. There are no exaggerated facial expressions. There is no other book where the main character shows his disease vividly when he appears. There are not so many metaphors. The important thing is that the author has read the original work.

It's really good to watch, not OOC at all. The plot is very good and the characters are very vivid. I don't know why the rating is so low. All in all, it's amazing. I didn't have any high hopes at first. After clicking in, I was amazed after reading three or four chapters. Highly recommended! ! !

It's shocking and delicious. This is the first God-killing fanfic I've read (I haven't read the original novel or the anime). It's super awesome\(//∇//)\I've been reading novels for so long, and it's rare that I can finish them in one sitting.

I don't know why this rating is so low, but it's really good-looking. The author's writing style is very good. Every piece of writing is very detailed. The foreshadowing in the front and the back are all completed. Then it is a completely sweet novel. Nian Nian and Brother Yan are really sweet [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] Everyone's ending is very good.

It's so beautiful that once you click on this book, you won't be able to get out of it. I couldn't sleep at all after listening to the book all night. Although the overall pace feels very fast, the emotional line description is really great! However, there is no particularly detailed description of the main plot. It ends after Brother Shen turns into an angel. Of course, in addition to the bond between the love protagonist and the Night Squadron, which is also very good, the writing style that feels like a group (?) Is also very good. The biggest change in the main plot is that Brother Shen did not go undercover to enter the Ancient God Church. Generally speaking, the pace is relatively fast (or very fast), the author's writing is also online, and the protagonist's setting is super interesting! Push hard push.

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, very satisfied (nod) (*^ω^*)

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good

Overall, this book is relatively good. Xiaonian's identity and personality are quite likable. I believe Brother Yan will like it more. I believe their lives will be very, very happy in the future.

It's so good. After reading it, I flipped back and found that the whole text was finished. It's such a pity. I felt that I finished reading it in a short time. ᗜⰙᗜThe teacher's writing style is also super good. Some sentences are directly sublimated and superb ദ്ദി(˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧

Okay, okay, it looks good, Brother Drag is also very arrogant.

👍🏻Very good-looking (personal point)

This book is very good-looking. I think the characters' personalities are well developed. The pull between the young lovers is also very nice. It's very good quality.

I don't know how to say it, maybe I just think it's good. The big magician and his arrogant kitten feel good. I hope there will be more other theaters in the future. Come on, madam, don't make me hungry. I feel so little sugar and I can't feel full. 😱😱😱

I really like straight-ball kids like Gui Jingnian