Why Did My Protagonist Long Aotian Change into Feng Aotian?

It's a cool story. The character of the male protagonist is not so likable at the beginning, but he is not so submissive later on. The author is very good at writing backgrounds. The male protagonist is not a time travel, so there is no identity conflict. The previous one has an incomplete soul, and the amnesia foreshadowing will probably be filled in the future. The protagonist is a genius, not a loser, and has been well received. The problems of the previous work have been basically solved and will not be ignored. The future is promising, but it is still a bit short.

A very standard cool article template, which is rare in Tomato. The story at the beginning is very immersive. The plot, personality, and relationship between each character and the protagonist are well developed. It can also make people remember the character's personality and make it comfortable to watch. The follow-up needs to be about the character's growth, emotional portrayal, and recycling of foreshadowing. Everyone should be allowed to play their value in the plot, and be reasonably arranged to fit the character design and enrich the details. There is basically no problem. It mainly depends on the author's writing style, whether the story planning and plot direction have a clear outline. As long as it is complete, the rest is to inject your own imagined emotions into the content. I have read the latest chapter, and it is to my liking. I hope the author's life goes well and he can produce better content and works. Come on [Like][Like]

The plot is quite good. There is a bit of persuasion in the early stage, but you still have to rely on persistence, or you can just jump in after knowing it casually. I know this is a bit hurtful, but anyway, I personally feel like this, and then the plot in the future is actually getting better and better. It is a more typical plot, the typical one of cultivating immortals in the past, but it does not mean that it is ugly. , Anyway, I think there is no problem, and the most important thing is that the author is willing to listen to opinions, and what I personally like more is that the characters in the play are well portrayed, and I can feel that many of the characters are alive. To be honest, I have watched it once before, but I was really persuaded to back out in the early stage. I have finished reading it, but I am still willing to give it this score. It depends on whether I will get sick in the later period. If not, I think this subject is pretty good. Anyway, if the author does not have any literary problems, my suggestion is to be steady rather than wild. Ah, because I haven't actually read many novels, I don't know if this is a slow-burn or something. Well, anyway, overall, the direction is actually quite comfortable. The only thing is that sometimes the characters meeting each other really feels like destiny. The rest is okay. Anyway, it's just me. Because of the character portrayal, I am willing to continue watching. The plot is definitely very typical compared to those I have seen before, but I don't think it is bad.

It's quite interesting. It's called time travel, but the two souls of the protagonist went to the earth, and then died suddenly and returned to the original body, so the protagonist is always alone.

It's okay, but it's so short. I finished it so quickly. Just pretend to be a bitch... And be willing to be plotted by others. If the protagonist hadn't become wise, would there be any good results? He looks cool and unrestrained without asking for anything in return. "I'm just asking a question." Fast pace is not a problem, but logic has been abandoned for the sake of pace. The mysterious Mission: Impossible, did you read the script? I think this is a cool article. I won't criticize the cliche plot, but if it doesn't make sense, I have to say it. What does the blue top grade mean? It is still pretending to be a pig looking for feed. It is either the highest or the lowest, and cannot take the middle value. The test results are already super high. As for hiding one's ears and stealing the bell, it doesn't appear that there is something wrong with the protagonist. If Tianqi doesn't do it, he can quit. A little more mysterious misunderstanding, it's so beautiful

This is one of my favorite novels I have read so far! I like sisters like Wen Lingxi very much! ! ! The new year is very good, and Aunt Yue, I want to be a big sister! ! ! I also really like Shuangyu, a cold-faced iceberg girl! Feng Aotian and Lin Yan are also excellent! I also like this type of Su Wanwan very much! ! ! The author almost shared my mind when creating the heroine, she is my favorite type. [Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss] (Then let's talk about something to avoid lightning: in the early stage, it was very similar to Xiao Chunan. Some of the conversations with the former general and now the maid Shuangyu were a bit reserved. Many chauvinistic people may not be able to stand it, but I don't think there is anything wrong with it, because in the early stage, the male protagonist thought that he was just a pure Blue Star person, so It's understandable to talk like this to a stronger character in the game! After all, it's important to stay alive in an unfamiliar place. [Rolls eyes]) Overall, it's a relatively enjoyable story. I like the plot very much. When the male protagonist reveals that he has other girlfriends, there is no such a bloody scene. It is worthy of praise. The compensation is that he spent a few months on his honeymoon with Sister Lingxi. The male protagonist has a gentle personality, which I find very interesting. [Laughing] (If you are the kind of person who has read too many intrigues and intrigues, you may not be comfortable with this novel. But you can also give this novel a try to change your appetite!) I hope it doesn't end badly, please come on, author! Will update after a good rest! I will look forward to the follow-up development of this novel! ! [Shy][Like][Like][Like][Laugh][Ask for more explosive updates][Ask for more explosive updates][Ask for more explosive updates]

Give it five stars to encourage yourself. ദ്ദി˶˃ ᵕ ˂ )✧ First of all, I never expected that so many people would read my book. But because of this, I met like-minded book friends, and I also read "Villains Must Live!" "A fan of this book was once one of the thousands of people urging me to write a book, and my name may be different from other book lovers. Among them, I really like Alice and Lerina so much that I want to write them in my own book. It can be said that I started writing this book entirely because of this book. Since I am a new author, I really can't think of a unique gimmick that will attract people right from the beginning. And its opening really attracted me, and I was deeply impressed after watching it for so long, so I opened the book and studied it. But I promise, just by borrowing the gimmick and hook at the beginning, the subsequent plot, reversal, characters, structure, content, and system will be completely different. Please give me a chance, thank you very much. I don't think that's anything bad to admit. But if you book friends still feel uncomfortable, Xiaoluo apologizes to you from the bottom of my heart. I am very, very sorry. But if you can continue to look back, Xiaoluo also sincerely thanks you, thank you very much. Finally, no matter whether you like Xiaoluo's book or not, I hope you will go well, be happy every day, and be in good health! ! ! I want to finish writing this book, and I hope everyone can give me a chance. Please. [Cry]

Obviously the protagonist's IQ is not very high, but the author just likes to arrange some wits battles for the protagonist

It is a novel with high potential, but the plot tends to develop slowly. It can be seen that the author wants to write a more comprehensive and full story. Although the setting is relatively cliché and is a cliché of time-traveling games, the author's writing style is good, and other aspects are also good. The plot has strong coherence, and the logic is tight and smooth without any flaws, especially The character portrayal, whether it is the male protagonist, female protagonist or the villain and supporting role, are all lifelike. The images are vivid, rich and three-dimensional. Su Wanwan's reverse white and black are real and eye-catching. The other female protagonists also have their own characteristics. It is rare that in Tomato, I can rediscover the feeling of watching the prince and the evil god. I don't feel the poison. Although on the surface the male protagonist is set in a soul-traveling setting, there are many hints in the article that the male protagonist is probably the same person as the original protagonist. It depends on how the author fills this hole. I don't understand why it is only 6.3. In my opinion, 8.3 Is not an exaggeration. The same type of article is worth appreciating. The author will continue to maintain it. Don't let the plot rhythm and character design collapse. I look forward to the follow-up.

I have read Chapter 123 carefully, and I would like to briefly share my thoughts🤔 I think the author is a character. At first, I thought that the author changed the plot content, which made it confusing whether Su was alkalized by the protagonist. After all, this is also a character point, but the author seems to know something. Generally, it kept my appetite until the end of the case. I can only say: You are awesome [face covering] But to be honest, after looking at the previous plot, I think the problem is that it is a bit too slow, which may cause people to lose interest in reading. But it should be fine if you get through the early stages. I am very optimistic about Lin Yan and the cold general. The book review is just my personal opinion. If it is true or not, you still need to move to the main text. I personally think the current rating is low. My family, I have caught up with the 316 chapters of the army. In less than two days, I have followed up this book to the latest chapter. I would like to say that the rating of 6.8 Is low. I think the outstanding thing about this book is that it understands the step-by-step process. It abandons the fast-food style of rapid advancement. The protagonist has gone from being disgusted by everyone to being admired by many stars today. The author unfolds the growth process of the protagonist and shows it to you, so that you can better understand it. The only drawback is that I really caught up with the big team, and I have to wait for the author's update every day [crying][crying][crying]

I saw the latest chapter. It looks good, not stupid, and the female characters are also very capable. It is Qin Shuangyu who always thinks that due to the balance of combat power, the game is offline in a very abrupt way, which not only affects the perception, but also affects the development of the character. As the first heroine to appear, Qin Shuangyu is also the heroine in the first incident, but her plot advancement is the slowest. I hope that the subsequent plot will be worthy of the wait.

After reading the first few chapters, I feel very familiar. The same story of the protagonist, the same story of taking in the female villain who was exterminated, the same misunderstanding with other women, the same threat of being photographed. It seems to be the book that contains the female villain at the beginning. Has the author also read it?

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It's okay. I'll persuade some people to quit in the early stage. I was forced to read it. The more I write, the smoother it becomes. Don't be too aggrieved (Yun Cheng's incident). With such a background, I offended me once, and you should solve it. Otherwise, you will persuade some people to quit. I just feel unhappy. You have a background and you said you wanted to hide it, but now that something like this happens again, you have to solve it. Overall, good luck to the author. It's a good write-up.

Now I have read the latest chapter. I feel it looks very good and has great potential. But I don't know why the rating is so low. I hope the author will get better and better. I must not stop updating. It is best to have 100 chapters a day.

The front is fine, but the back is clearly enough. Do you still need to hide it? Although it is understandable, but with the threat of Yuncheng, I still feel that it was not handled well and that it needs to be hidden... I am not here to show off... Come on.

Non-soul time travel, the time travel mentioned earlier is explained later, but the pace is slow at the moment, I still like the author's writing, and the author will reply to many comments, the softness is a bit like what someone commented before, the author is like a sweet and soft little Nan Niang [shy] [shy], good-looking and more [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

I see many people talking about the problem of dog licking. I think it is normal for the protagonist to lick the dog. In order to live a life that is not shabby, it is called dog licking. It is called dog licking if there is no reward. If there is reward, it is not called dog licking. The protagonist is facing a person who is stronger than himself, has more backhands than himself, and has a harder background than himself. In the future, he may Killing your own people, there is nothing wrong with licking them to increase your favorability. Only by living can you have a future. I have read more than 60 chapters and there is nothing too poisonous about it. The only problem is that the protagonist is obviously just sent away by the three younger brothers. After a big detour, I was bitten, and the protagonist's favorability dropped.

It is recommended to skip a considerable part of the early stage. The interactions between the protagonist and people are awkward and not very reasonable. If you only look at the early stage, the score will be lower. I don't want to read this comment for the time being. I'm going to give it a try. After all, the subject matter is good, but I am still curious about the plot behind it.

It's very good. I see that there are no poisonous points now. The writing is very smooth. I feel that it has the potential to become popular. Keep up the good work, author [adoration][adoration][adoration]

The author has a few questions to ask you. I hope you can answer whether you are a yandere or if there are many women in the harem. Do you have a Shura field? Are women stronger than men? If so, then the male protagonist should not be strong in cultivation. She is also called the daughter of destiny. She must be stronger than the male protagonist. There are other things such as the villain and the male protagonist's sister. They should be stronger than the male protagonist.

It's nice to read, please keep writing, I will always support you.

It's so rare to see this kind of protagonist with the qualities of a genuine male protagonist from ancient times. His personality is also quite out of the ordinary. I think the portrayal is quite good. The plot is a bit classic, but the pacing is also good, and the things that should be rounded are rounded out. The writing is quite good.

The more you go to the back, the more addictive it becomes. You can skip a little bit to read the front, and the back is very enjoyable. If you look at the comments section first, they all have five stars. I can only say that it is completely OK.

The traditional fantasy routine is really not good at the front, and you have to settle down [punch out] It really pissed me off. Why does the heroine have to have a male protector by her side, and why does she have to be described as particularly handsome? Are you really afraid of the popularity of this book? Chasing: Just change it [Petrochemical]

The details of the relationship between the emotional lines of the characters in the plot are actually very detailed and delicate, and it looks very enjoyable. The protagonist is not overpowered in combat, but has his own growth path, especially when he later realizes that he is actually a part of this world and has his own thoughts, so there are no restraints in the later period. The attitude of thinking that Lin Yan must be the savior is actually very innovative, highly recommended! ! ! [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

Not enough, more more The protagonist was a bit off-kilter in the early stages, but after training, it became smoother.

It's beautiful, so strong, but I didn't expect Su to eat it first. Lin Yan and Chu Shuangyu hurry up [you taste it carefully]

The whole thing was quite fun to write, but one thing is that sww. This character is so uncomfortable to watch. The parts about her are basically skipped. I borrowed from another book and the whole treatment was quite good, although that book also borrowed from others. Also, after the number of people has increased significantly, some people have fewer characteristics, such as Qin. So if there are more and more female characters in the future, this phenomenon may be more obvious. This feeling is related to the writing level.

The subject matter is very novel, and there is not too much nonsense while reading the novel. There are battles of wits and combat, but it still lacks a sense of excitement. Maybe it's because the protagonist is still playing the crushing game. Anyway, it's worth watching.