Hpi'd Rather Be Honest About This

This is the second Sirius fanfic I've seen on 🍅 so far! The following is a long review of some of the advantages I think. I personally think that the biggest advantage is the grasp of the character's psychology. It does not focus on the love plot but a complete analysis of Sirius's psychology, including his "dark side" (to be honest, it is rare to see an author who can write a perfect imperfect protagonist) Including the heroine, she is like a counterpart to Sirius. She also resists pure blood but cannot give up everything. She is also brave, but no one stipulates that bravery means leaving everything behind. The heroine chooses to face it. This seemingly cowardly and opposite choice to Sirius actually leads to the same goal. If I had to describe it, it would probably be the selective expression of genes (laughs). This indeed caused a collision of views between the two, but the collision also promoted the growth of Sirius. When he was young, he was an extreme, crazy, and childish rebellious child. But because of the heroine, he obviously accelerated his growth in thinking. This is actually very rare because the core of the character of Sirius can be easily changed if not grasped properly. Most authors regard his resistance as a kind of "heroism" when writing. The heroine of Slytherin must give up everything in Slytherin to fall in love with him, or it may be a clichéd heartthrob script. This is essentially very unfair. But the heroine in this article chose symbiosis during the struggle, and the heroine's baby really worked hard (lovely) The conflict between the Marauders and Snape was also difficult to write. Too much criticism will feel condescending, and it will be impossible to proceed without telling a story, but this book is handled very appropriately. The heroine is not brave, so Sirius can refute when she is dissatisfied with Sirius, which weakens the sense of deja vu of moral superiority. The back-and-forth debate is about mutual cooperation rather than unilateral poverty alleviation. Sirius's reflection and the heroine's face to herself are both the product of their relationship. The overall tone of the book is a melancholy and delicate style that emphasizes psychological description. It is very worth reading. Please don't miss this book! Demining: Seeing that there are indeed some shortcomings (I can still accept it) 1. There is an unlovable little cousin (not a love rival) who is currently in the growth stage. It can be seen that it is like Snape's control group relationship, and the feature of this book is the imperfection of the character. This is clearly shown in the little cousin. 2. The psychological description is too complex and trivial, and the arrangement of events is too dense. Delicate psychological description is an advantage, but I personally think it is a bit too dense. It would be much better if the narrative rhythm could be polished. 3. The overall writing style is depressing. There are no completely perfect characters in this book, and it is not very friendly to the protagonist. The heroine often suffers from internal friction and self-criticism in the early stage, but it can be seen that she is growing. It's not the Shuangwen route❗️ I will make up for it later if I think of it. I personally prefer to recommend it

Please read it carefully and leave a comment. I really like this article and want to say a few words to the author. What particularly poked me was the part where Sylvie chose Slytherin, it was so immersive. She clearly knew in her heart that entering the Snake Yard meant that she and Sirius were separated by the prejudice of the academy and the pressure of the times. She was afraid that the two of them would slowly drift away, but she still did not deceive herself and made her choice according to her heart. This kind of conflict, timidity, reluctance and having to be loyal to oneself in the teenage years is delicately and realistically portrayed, and it immediately fills the audience with the heavy atmosphere of the impending storm in the family era. The relationship between Sirius and the heroine is particularly touching. There is no vigorous industrial sugar, it is all careful attention from a distance, sour and restrained pulling. It is slow and long, and every small interaction has a sense of atmosphere. And you are very careful in making group portraits, without flattening anyone. Each character has his own dilemma, struggle and life choice, which is particularly consistent with the background of the original work. Tarsus is also very gentle and has become a very healing little light in the depressing and gloomy era. I can clearly feel that you are writing the story with great concentration, respecting the characters and the background of the times, and slowly laying out the emotions and plot, rather than writing perfunctorily for the sake of falling in love. There are really too few fans who carefully polish their writing style and core. Don't worry about the current rating, just feel free to write at your own pace. Such a story with texture, warmth and depth will definitely be seen and cherished by more people. Thank you for your hard work. I always look forward to the follow-up updates!

I think this can no longer be evaluated as the best HP novel I have ever read. I would call it the best of all the novels I have read. The first few chapters were as warm as a deer in the forest stepping towards my heart, which made me want to cry. But after entering Hogwarts, every emotional transition was vigorous, and one emotion was divided into several sentences, so it was very, very, very, very delicate. Emotions are not simply discovered and summed up in a few words: I feel... But after getting to know the character step by step, I discovered that I am such an emotion! And it can no longer be described by whether you have a mouth or not. It is human nature when you don't speak, and the time when you speak is just right. The author must be a warm and attentive person in reality, and he can understand the characters' moods very thoroughly. Moreover, the relationship between the Marauder and Snape is also emphasized, and the changes are reasonable. I have read many articles about my parents. Simply stop talking about this matter, or unconditionally favor either party. But the author did not do that at all. Instead, he evaluated and pointed out the shortcomings through this objective perspective of a third party. And what's great about the author is that he doesn't spend many sentences describing each character, but can clearly show the person's personality through a few details. It's not OOC at all, and the author's own understanding of the original work is very thorough, really. Everyone has their own shining points, and there is absolutely no malicious intention to smear someone. The male and female protagonists, oh, um, oh, needless to say, epic and sweet, I was rolling on the bed. And the author's plot arrangement is very reasonable. Many little things that were mentioned in the original work were unintentionally mentioned by the author through the heroine. With a slight push, he enriched the story line and added many details. It made me feel that the heroine was really integrated into this world, just like she was a member of the original work. This is the longest book review I have ever written. To sum it up, it is beautiful, delicate, not OOC at all, and sweet. Highly recommended, if you don't read it, you'll be at a loss! ! ! ! Besides. . . . The author will update soon! It's really hard to follow the series🥺😏😏😏

This book is really good. Starting from the heroine, it tells the story of a girl struggling between conscience and family love in an era when blood conflicts were rampant. She is shrewd, smart, and understands the logic of survival in this pure-blood world, but she is still kind, has the courage to reflect on herself, and even bravely stands up. The Marauders are not a group of completely hot-blooded and reckless lunatics. They are also a group of people who are growing up. However, growth is often accompanied by labor pains. Ivan and Regulus' affection for their sister and brother is also touching. They will protect their families in their own way. However, they are destined to take that path, which always gives me a sense of sadness that sooner or later they will part ways. Snape, his personality background and growing environment are far from ideal, but not everyone has the obligation to tolerate his harm. He always points his sword at the person who loves him most, so his loneliness is inevitable. Lily, I really like Lily, her unstinting love and hate, her always clear bottom line and fearless persistence. She is stronger than many of the people mentioned above; she is smart, but never uses this ability to embarrass anyone; she is tolerant, regarding her friends' little temper, her sister's anger, and understanding her friends' helplessness. ; She is never humble or arrogant, never disdains to be a role that pleases anyone, always sticks to herself, and never bows to those so-called "pure bloods"; she loves and hates clearly, she has the courage to make a desperate move when she loves, and she has perseverance in spite of the weather; she has a cheerful personality, I think no one would dislike such a girl. As for the parents, I still can't stand them: Augustus' cold measured "love" and Walburga's love for the "Black family" reflect the manipulation and calculation of his own flesh and blood. He is indeed a scary, shrewd, heartless and mature person. But at least it was simple, so Sirius wouldn't have any unnecessary hopes or nostalgia when he left. . . [Crying] ㊗️Come on, author teacher, please update soon!

Such a great article, the emotions are very, very delicate, and everyone is vivid. Sylvie is really a child who matures too early, and her acting is her way of survival, but Sirius is the first time in her life that she does not want to act or act. Similarly, Sirius, who is always so rampant and reckless, gradually begins to think, think about himself, and think about everything under the influence of Sylvie. I think there is nothing that can better explain the relationship between them, so unique and irreplaceable. I really liked the way Sylvie faced the conflict between Sirius and Snape. She wrote her daily life with Snape to Sirius, so that Snape became a living person for Sirius instead of a symbol. Once Sirius realized that Snape was a person who was willing to use luck to make more potions and could make potions with his ears, even if he still hated him, it would be difficult for him to treat him like before. It feels like the emotions and thoughts of both parties are about to reach a breaking point. Sylvie has become accustomed to neutrality to protect herself through long-term performances and her father's teachings, but sooner or later she has to figure out that neutrality means not only not taking sides, but also giving up on both sides. Especially in the context of the parent generation, Sylvie is the only daughter of a pure-blood family. After all, she cannot be alone. Now that they are still young, they can not make decisions so quickly, but Sylvie still has to choose a side in the end. There is no perfect way. It is difficult for Sylvie to take into account pure blood, family, justice, and friends in this context. Of course Sylvie can still protect herself in her own way, but she must know which side she chooses when doing everything. The result that both sides want will only hurt everyone.

The writing is very good. The positions of everyone, the conflicts between the colleges, and the character creation are not OOC, but it feels a bit depressing. Although the environment of the parent generation is relatively heavy, before the war begins, I still hope to be more relaxed and describe the daily life of the college. I like the pull between the male and female protagonists and the conflict of concepts between the schools, and I hope it doesn't happen later. This is my second favorite CP between the Slytherin heroine and Sirius [Blow Kiss] Hey, Gouzi, you haven't confessed your love in sixth grade? Can you make progress faster? Jump directly to old wife and old husband mode [laughing and crying]

The author's writing is very good, it is really good and not just a pile of meaningless words to make it look good. The characters are well created and have many aspects. The heroine is so charming, and it's easy to sympathize with most of the characters in the article. The author also wrote the character Sirius, who is so difficult to create, very vividly and three-dimensionally, and all the emotions are gradual and unobtrusive. Overall, I think there are no surprises, and I highly recommend it. It was a bit unfriendly to me as the female protagonist. The heroine gave in too much, and the maturity gap between the two was so big that it made it a bit frustrating to read. It feels like two people are missing a big explosion instead of countless small conflicts piled together without resolution.

I really have to comment. I actually saw such a male and female protagonist with such upright views in HP fandom. They are constantly reflecting and growing. Each character is very well-shaped. The friendship between the girls is so good, and the friendship between girls and boys is also very good. When I saw the heroine said that she does not need knights, she needs people around her, I really can't help but comment. As for this female standard, girls have their own ontological values.

Nice! It's not stupid, the teacher's writing is very good, and the sense of substitution is so strong that I feel depressed and entangled, and my chest is tight, but this is inevitable. Just like the sentence "Growing is as painful as cramps and peeling off bones", Sylvie and Sirius are both people with rebellious qualities, but they choose different ways. In the context of the serious opposition between the lion and the snake, conflicts are inevitable, but It is they who all work hard to maintain this relationship through the bridge of small wings. Sylvie is like a "perfect" tree that grows tightly in a mold. She needs but also hates this perfection. The need is because she has already formed a habit when she grew up like this. The disgust of this "perfection" makes her choose between interests, friends, and conscience, and even self-loathing. But she did not compromise blindly. From when she was a child, she secretly ate fruit tarts at banquets, to when she mustered up the courage to visit Black's old house alone to face the test of Walburga for Sirius and Little Wings, to when she was eleven years old, she responded to the blood discrimination students in the same school for the sake of her friends and her heart. Sylvie never stopped growing. Thank you to the teacher for creating such a flesh-and-blood Sylvie. I look forward to the plot in the future. Come on, teacher🤓

Well, this is a very sour article, it's growing pains. It is the worry of girls and boys who say "my best friend has a best friend", the helplessness of being carried forward by the current of the times, and the courage to resist under the system. What struck me most in the book was the undercurrent of struggle of each character: Baby Sylvie is sophisticated but not worldly, sophisticated and willing to stand up and defend her friends in a less sharp way. She makes a compromise between the unspoken rules of society and her true inner thoughts, which is really painful and cool. It's not being reckless like Sirius who is courageous. After all, courage comes in many shapes, doesn't it? The friendship line between Lily and SS is also very delicate. SS is overdrawing Lily's trust in him, and Lily is pretending that SS can repay the debt, so she lends money arbitrarily. In fact, they know each other well and deceive themselves. The unclear boundaries that are slowly moving away. I want to hold you and want you to turn back, but I don't have that position. It's like ink dripping into clear water and can't go back to the beginning. The sourness in "Friendship" (to be determined) comes entirely from the area dominated by the wife. I can see the little girl leisurely wandering between the rivers and lakes.

I originally came here for Sirius, but Sylvie moved me even more. It's really rare to see such a delicate description on Tomato. I don't agree with the rating, which is only around 7. How can the author write the plot and characters so well? I will always love this book. This book is actually very depressing, because of the supremacy of pure blood, Sirius and Sylvie's resistance, and because my personal growth was controlled a lot by my parents. I can understand Sylvie personally, and it made me very sad to read it. .

Good-looking, needless to say, very delicate psychological description. What surprises me is not the calm and mature heroine, but the fact that while the heroine is calm, she also does not lack the rich emotions of children of this age. I feel that many articles write about mature heroines but also write the heroine like a robot. This article is very well written, and although the plot is relatively depressing at this stage, it does not forcefully add stereotyped one-sided supporting roles to create bloodshed and suffering like some articles. The pressure on the heroine now is the only way for her background. I hope the heroine can get through this time as soon as possible

Well, the interaction between the two people is very cute and good, but it always makes me feel a lingering sense of BE (not too hard), especially after the second grade, the conflict between the two colleges was already intense, and it became even more intense because of various conflicts. . . Sad (?) I feel that if two people want to take their relationship further, they must first resolve their own conflicts, concepts, personalities (internal factors) and family, friends, public opinion (external factors), etc. There are many, many difficult problems, and both parties must sacrifice something. Why does it feel even more uncomfortable (young lovers should give me sweet moments). Anyway, I am looking forward to the development of the plot in the future. Come on 💪💪💪 . . . I originally wrote a long review, but I found a typo. I thought about it and deleted it and then revised it. In the end, I didn't have a draft. I cried 😢

Good food, good food! It's a very interesting book. Two people with very different personalities grow up through the friction. One second I often think that the child is so naive, and the next second the child has figured it out on his own hhhhh. The author must be a very interesting person. His writing style is exquisite and the content is substantial. I hope more people will read this book. Moreover, this author writes a lot of words in one chapter. Some authors can fill two or three chapters with so many words. It is like the difference between pasta and liquid food. I try hard to express my love in my words.

As an old hp person commenting here, it can be called a masterpiece of Sirius fanfic. The teacher's emotional line is particularly well grasped, the heroine's baby's meticulous observation, the girl's ups and downs of mood, and the advancement layer by layer. It is so exciting to watch. The friendship with Lily, because Sirius and the robber became friends who recognized and trusted each other from being unprepared, the heroine's baby's struggles and choices, and our sweet dog! ! ! ! I declare this to be my favorite watch of the year! ! ! ! ! Teacher, please update more, I really can't do it without your updates! ! !

This is the best HP fanfic I have seen in the past two years. There is no exaggeration. The psychological description and writing style have been so coherent that I read some passages over and over again the first time I read it. It is very delicate, profound, and very empathetic. The process of Sirius and Sylvie's pull and deepening of their emotions will really make people sympathize with their adolescent selves, whether it's friendship, family or just the beginning of love. Some of the secrets that cannot be spoken, the conflicts of personal background and the pursuit of true emotions, and the self-thinking and honesty are really amazing and moving. Every character is three-dimensional and vivid, whether it is the male or female protagonist, as well as James, Lily, Snape, and Regulus. Together they form the concept of youth. Everyone has love and hate intertwined, and everyone has their own destiny and issues. Especially when Sylvie realizes that there is more than one form of bravery, and when Sirius approaches recklessly again and again, the gesture of running in both directions is reassuring and gratifying. My biggest feeling now is that we are all growing up, and I am very happy to have met you. In fact, when James felt that Sirius didn't miss him because he seemed "troubled" by his interactions with Sylvie every day, I really wanted to say something for Sirius, "Sylvie is not changing me, but shaping me. She has long been an indispensable part of me. From then on, every action I take has her shadow. This is not forced, but a pleasure. I have long been lucky for this."

This is definitely the best HP fanfic I have seen recently. It is really rare to see an author write out every aspect of Sirius, whether it is good or bad. Every character is very close to the original setting. The author's portrayal of Snape is also very realistic. The heroine's character is also super good. But I hope that the heroine can be more straightforward in the future and can make the choices she wants to make without any scruples. I really like this book ε(´｡·᎑·`)っ♡ The rating is relatively low since it was just released. Please don't give up on this book just because of the rating. It's really good-looking, all votes will be taken to beat this white crow away!

The author's writing is really good. I've read a lot of hp fanfics. This book is unique among fanfics. It's not just cool or sweet. There are many hardships between the young lovers, but after experiencing so many hardships, their relationship becomes more real and beautiful. I still remember that when I first read this book, I had to go to class the next day, but I still chose to stay up until three or four in the morning on the first day to read the latest chapters. It was really different and very beautiful. Even though many people say that the heroine is a bit cold and violent, a little avoidant, etc., I think from the heroine's experience and her character, we can think of the reasons why she did all this. I look forward to the follow-up content [Love] [Love] [Love]

Whether it is the emotional lines between Sylvie and Sirius or Lily and Snape, they are all very delicately written. The author dares to write about imperfect people, and sometimes it makes me angry to the point of hhh Emotions really need to tolerate each other and neither of the two people are willing to let go. Finally, Lily is really an angel Also to give the female protagonist a clue, Sirius is good to Sylvie, but he is a bit contemptuous of Sylvie because of intimacy and lacks some courage. When he vented his anger on the heroine, he later realized that he had done something wrong, but did not have the courage to apologize. The heroine was angry, but in the end she took the initiative to find him. It is difficult to evaluate the two comparisons. Also, he was obviously a brave and reckless Gryffindor, but at the beginning he did not dare to openly introduce Sylvie to others as his friend. Compared with Lily's openness, he was even more disadvantaged. I really think Sylvie is suffering, family, friendship and love are all suffering, although everyone here is suffering.

It's really, really super beautiful. The emotional descriptions are very delicate and immersive. The young couple is so addictive. The logic of the plot is also described very well, especially when I see that they are slowly moving in the right direction. Much happier (except for Snape, I'm going to pour the hot chocolate out of his head) Sylvie and Sirius were really addictive and tearful when they slowly became brave and honest. The biggest shortcoming of this book is that it is not finished. I just watched the ending and clicked in to watch it... No... It's not finished... I'll wait until it's over to watch it... I clicked out and then clicked in... I just watched it for a while and then it was over, and I started to painfully catch up on updates😱

It's really beautiful🥺🥺Why is the author so good at writing about social interactions? He writes very delicately, including the subtle feelings that are hard to describe in daily interactions, the eyes, the placement of objects, and the pauses in speech. It's such pure love, so sincere, and my prejudice against the snake farm has been cured🥺. Moreover, the author is very productive, with a stable daily word count and additional updates.

The writing is very good. I like the part about the Sorting Hat. It feels like I have been dealing with myself for a long time and would rather be me. The author's psychological description is very good, delicate but not overly complicated.

The author has very deep thoughts on the character of the characters, and the characters are well shaped and full of character. The rhythm of the emotional line advancement is moderate. There is a spirit of aura, which is rare in foreign tomatoes. I hope the author will continue to maintain it. Use less repeated words, which will make the article appear bloated and make readers tired. You can try to use similar words instead or change the starting point to describe. (For example, the word "iris" appears 5 to 10 times from Lily to now) Come on, I am very much looking forward to the follow-up ´ₒ⦁⩊⦁ₒ` - ̗̀ ෆ( ˶'ᵕ'˶)ෆ ̖́- I give this five stars sincerely. I highly recommend this book^⎚˕⎚^

I use the most straightforward, purest, simplest, most magnanimous, most sincere, most practical, most hard-core, cleanest, most neat, most straightforward, least roundabout, least roundabout, least roundabout, least roundabout, least muddled. Carrying water, the least hiding, the least playing tricks, the least scheming, the least roundabout, the least prudent, the least cunning, the least manipulative, the least pie-in-the-sky, the least chicken soup, the least empty talk, the least nonsense, nothing There is no pretense, no politeness, no concealment, and the most down-to-earth, most understandable, most straightforward, most straightforward, without exaggerating, without minimizing the facts, without distorting the original intention, without deliberately beautifying, without deliberately Conceal it, tell you the truth, tell the truth, talk the truth, talk about the truth, don't pretend, don't act, don't act, don't show off, tell you in a sincere, frank, straightforward way, it's so beautiful ଘ(੭ˊᵕˋ)੭* The writing style is very good and delicate, and the sourness is great. Sirius is completely shaped like a dog. It's so beautiful.

A very delicate book. Alas, the relationship between Potter and Snape was really bad. In the first grade, Snape laughed at Potter's jokes, and Snape taught him a lesson, but I don't think he was wrong. I really think he was not wrong...

The emotions are very delicate, and the interaction with Sirius is very poignant. Every inner psychological activity of the heroine is very realistic and very delicate. Every time, the deepest essence can be thought of. The wall between Sirius and his rough tearing down of the wall between the heroine deepens the gap. The description is very touching and real, making people immersed in the situation, worried about it, and worried about it. This book really let me get into the relationship between the heroine and Sirius. The characters are very three-dimensional, as if they can exist in reality. It is worth reading!

Very good article, the author is very sincere. This is a book suitable for reading slowly, because the emotions used in each sentence are very deep and the writing is very delicate, allowing people to immerse themselves in it. The writing time is reasonable and compact, and there may be several starting points and transitions in just a few sentences. It is not a sweet article that can be skimmed by with watery text or sugar sprinkled throughout. I started reading HP's original work when I was 14, and now I'm almost 30. I've read it over and over again many, many times. Looking at the fandom, I started to see Mary Sue from her early years and now. This article can be regarded as a relatively good grasp of the characters in cp cialis. It's not difficult to write about a character's shining points and attractiveness when writing a fanfic, because we all fall in love with this character because of his shining points, but what's difficult is to also write about his shortcomings and immaturity, as well as his own growth. The characters in this book are very real, because they are all three-dimensional, have their own shortcomings and their own advantages, and are affected by the times and the environment. The author said that it is necessary to make dumplings. If you don't give the protagonist a trick, it will be difficult to make dumplings. I am looking forward to how it will develop in the future. And will Xiaotian run away from home again? I always think this is very important

The writing is very good, and the writing style is very good. When I first read it, I actually felt it was a bit jerky, just like reading a classic. But the further I read, the more interesting it becomes. The changes in the male and female protagonists are all bit by bit, and they are not abrupt at all. As the book progresses, following the male and female protagonists as they grow up together, I can say that it also allows me to see the real life of my parents' generation, people at that time, and their struggles in the general environment. All in all, it's an excellent novel. You won't regret it if you click on it and read it.

It's good-looking and good-looking. The female protagonist is self-reliant and rebellious. She is an atypical Slytherin. She will also conflict with the Gryffindor camp because of her different stances. The temptations between the male and female protagonists are also very good, with a sense of sourness. The author describes the psychology really well!

Very delicate emotional description. . . Watching a sensitive little girl exhausted, this kind of psychological pull is very relatable. I hope that the protagonists can all grow up and have a happy ending. The author is very hard-working and updates a lot. I recommend you to follow it.